MG-OS:Clueless--Part 4:Pg25(Last Part)--11/Dec

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Hey friends I'm here with a new OS ,I have been writing this OS in bits from many weeks ...After the lot of jhootis I got from you from the previous one shotes I thought of writing a ...Hmmm..leave it😆😆

So here's the first part ,so do tell me if you like it..and then I'll continue😊

Hope you like it 😃

And the title is clueless because I'm am clueless regarding the title of the OS

nd plsss plsss suggest a title for this benaam OS!😆


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How was the journey Geet?

Asked Meera while trying to help Geet to take her suitcase to the next platform to exit from the station.

Yeah..it was good,said Geet with a smile.

Meera, the station changed a lot...she looked here and there for 5 minutes to assure that I got down at the right station ,said Geet while searching for the exit gate.

I know Geet a lot of things have actually changed a lot...Just step out of the station Geet, you'll find a completely new town.

Geet smiled ,she was excited to see her changed hometown.

She left the town when she was 12 ,or the circumstances made her leave the town.

She came out of the station ,Meera looked at her "Geet you wait here ,I'll bring an auto"

Ohhkk ,nodded Geet .

The moment she came out of the station, all her childhood memories flashed infront of her.

Meera soon brought an auto ...Geet looked out of the window trying to find known places.

Soon her eyes caught a flower ...Geet's smile broadened.

"Meera ,do you remember this phool wala...we used to buy roses from here for the teachers.

We used to jump from the rikshaw ,rush here and purchase flowers.

"Yeah Geet I remember each and every thing.

And Meera this temple ,do you remember ..our rikshaw wale uncle used to stop near the temple before the exams,so that we do well in our exams.

Geet got more and more excited with every passing shop or stall or temple or house.

Even the auto driver kept smiling at her excitement.

Geet went on recognizing the houses and stalls.

And do you remember this stall Meera ...uncle shop..!! we used to buy 4 chocolates for 1 rupee.

And this restarunt OMG!! It's still there???

I can't believe this!!

They soon went towards the Main road...but Geet couldn't find the old shops all that she could see was some branded shops ,one mall which remained crowded the whole week according to Meera.

One big hotel.

Many shops that connected her to that place were missing.

Geet kept looking outside her excitement reduced a bit...but the smile was still on her face.

"You are right Meera ,a lot of things changed ,but few things are still the same"

Meera smiled

"I'm so happy ,that you are back Geet!!, Thanx to akka , afterall you came her to attend her wedding right!

"I know Meera, I'm sorry Meera but what to do ...I can not take leave so easily"

Haan...haan I know Dr. Geet now you are working as a Doctor in India's one of the biggest hospitals ,I understand"

Meera ,It's nothing like that ,said Geet in a complaining tone while trying to stop her hair from clustering due to wind passing in the auto.

"Okk..okk baba I was just joking".

Geet went inside and the first person she could see was her cousin and his mother.

"Hi Anna ,Namaste aunty."

How are you?? Asked Rajan in a low tone without any excitement or happiness .

Geet was used to this behaviour ,right from her childhood no-one respected her and her family .

They always ignored her mom and dad as they were economically not equal to their other family members.

Geet never liked that ,she disliked family get togethers but when she was 12 her father got transferred to a city and was promoted to a good post.

And from then on Geet met her remaining family members very rarely ,slowly she built new relationships and friends in the city ,she never faced the ignorance from her new friends or relationships which she faced by her cousins.

Geet stood there

Amma and Papa will come in 2 days.

Hmmm...said Rajan while looking at the news paper and just then a girl came running towards her ,Geet ,you are here finally.

Geet hugged her back...Akka...Congratulations!!! I'm so happy for you.

Geet's sister Divya took her to her room .

Geet shared a wonderful rapport with her cousin sister Divya.

How are you akka??

I'm fine Geet ..oops Dr. Geet you tell me??

I'm great. So wat abou your fianc Akka I haven't even seen him.

Divya blushed ,I'll show the photo.

Haaye ..blushing!!!

Geet teased her akka.

Geet...tu bhi na bahut badmash ho gayi hai.

Divya..!!!

Areh someone's calling me ...I'll be back in few minutes

Okk

Geet started to unpack and just then Meera came near her.

Geet!! What happened to you??

Me???

Yeah...Rajan anna was rude and you didn't even reply back ,you came from the city now you are a doctor why didn't you reply???

Meera ,even I used to feel bad when I was a child but now I don't even care.

If they think in that way ,I can do nothing ...I didn't find any reason to reply back ,Leave it...now these things don't actually bother me!!

Meera kept looking at Geet and her care free attitude.

Geet ,you have seriously changed a lot!!!

I know said Divya who enterd the room , She became more naughty!!

Geet smiled .

You know what tomorrow Maan is going to come

Maan??!!!

Uff...is the Maan drama still going on??!! I can't believe this.

What happened Geet??

You know what Meera ,It's been happening from many years ,whenever Maan used to come here from his hostel ,from Bangalore people used to look up to him ...jaise aasmaan se tapka ho.

Maan this Maan that...he is so intelligent ,charming ,he knows how to sing ,he knows how to talk blah blah blah..!! Huh!!!

I'm so fed up with this Maan stuff!! Cummon people he is not a Rock star...!!!

I thought things have changed but nothing changed!!!

The Maan's hype is still there.

Anyways I hate him and and I don't care.


Meera and Divya looked at each other with raised eyes.

And you know what Geet..He is a doctor too!! said Divya in e teasing tone

Huh!!

The next day...

All the teenage girls who came to attend the wedding and were staying at Divya's place got ready .

They were dressed beautifully ,some of them tied their wonderful half-sarees decorated their braids with either jasmines or roses .

All were excited to see Maan ...The City guy ...A doctor

All of them saw him when he was child and even when he was a child he carried full on attitude.

Geet smiled at their behaviour!!

Soon an old lady brought the news that he was coming.

And the whole entrance was covered...All of them went to invite him.

Geet stood behind with Meera ...She didn't even look at the entrance but somewhere even she wanted to see him ..She slowly looked towards the entrance from the corner of her eyes.

She saw a person with hair that's fully drownwd in oil ,ill-fitted clothes and glasses which he kept on adjusting .

He greeted everyone with a Namaste..

Geet was shocked to see him...Is he Maan??!!

Infact all the girls were shocked...Is he Maan ,the intelligent and charming boy??!!

One girl came from the crowd... Ayyo..Now a days even our milk man tries to look stylish and what's with him!!!

Did anyone pour oil can on him ...Huh...Why did I open the new Kaanjevaram saree for him?? Ayyayyo!!

Geet looked at him with open mouth but she burst out laughing after some time..!!!

Maan!!! She couldn't control her laughter.

Maan came near Geet.

Hello Dr. Geet , Myself Dr. Maan

How are you ?? It's been a long time.

Nice to meet you.

Bye

Talk to you later.

Take care

Have a nice day.

Meera came from the back.

Geet , I think he chats a lot online...I mean I felt like he was typing the hi-bye messages on some social networking site.

Geet couldn't believe her eyes and ears

Geet , I thought that even though you hate him ,he will be charming and that fact can never be overseen that he is one intellegen handsome boy..but he is seriously weird!!

The whole day she spent time with Divya akka and some more friends and sometimes she managed to steal glances at Maan ,whenever she saw him either he helped with the work or played with kids or sat somewhere reading some books and adjusting his glasses.

Many of them felt that the charm in Maan that used to be is not present now ,some of the girl's mothers who thought of asking Maan's hand for their daughters forgot the idea as easily as they forgot the number of idlis cooked for the breakfast.

The Maan factor came down in a moment.

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to be contd...

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PART 2

Geet woke up early as she wasn't able to sleep as it was a new place .

"New Place" she smiled on her thoughts.

She entered the hall and saw that a lot of people were sleeping in the hall and all the rooms were occupied .

She slowly moved towards the room near the balcony where she heard some noice and it was supoosed to be the store room where people kept their luggage.

She slowly moved towards the room there she saw a man with a well-built body practising Tai-hi ,His upper body was bare ,attitude was oozing out from his eyes , each and every inch of his revealed muscles hooked Geet. She tried to distract herself and remove her eyes but his sharp eyes attracted her like a magnet ,those looks could kill anyone . Geet couldn't take her eyes from him .And the wet hair ,the sweat was adding to the magnetic behaviour .He was looking no less than a greek god.

" Maan " she whispered slowly.

He turned his head


Geet hid behind the wall and took a deep breath trying to come back to her senses

She closed her eyes.

She wanted to run away from the room very badly ,she walked and just then she heard him calling his name.

She stopped the very moment and gulped down her saliva .


The moment she turned back she saw him directly watching into her eyes and holding her hand and smiling.

"Maan leave me"

He did so following her orders

"I missed you Geet"

Geet turned her face.

"Geet ,baat nahi karogi???"

Don't you want to ask anything??

Ohh...what should I ask ??

Oh...I got it the question it should be why are you doing this??

Lemme Guess ,haan to show that you can do anything right or devil may care attitude??Jab jo chaaha woh kar liya

Right??? said Geet with a fake smile.

Devil-may-care attitude??

No Geet ,don't you want to know why am I doing this for whom and why??? Maan smiled

He moved closer ,he extended his hand towards her face.

Geet pushed him

"for whosoever you did this, you know what Dr. Maan Venkatraman, I don't care!!!

Saying this she went away leaving Maan behind.

Okkk den Dr. Geetha Srinivasan

I'll wait for the moment, I'll wait till you...are you listening I'll wait till you...till you...care

Shouted Maan trying to be audible to Geet.

Geet got fresh and got ready in a beautiful churidaar which had traditional touch and also put a bindi ,which she usually didn't when she stayed in the city.

Geet remembered the incident which changed things

Geet remembered the one incident which brought Maan to her life

It all started when Geet's mother was talking to panditji about Geet's marriage ,she always complained that Geet never showed intrest in marriage , and then Panditji asked Geet's mother to ask Geet if she loves some-one.

And the same day Geet's mother saw Maan photograph in Geet's file .

God knows why Geet kept that photograph in her file

The evening when Geet came back home from the hospital

Her mom went to her

"Geet , why didn't you tell me that you want to marry Maan"

Enna??!!! 😲😲(What)

Ayyayyo Raama now where did this come from???

Aama Geet I have seen Maan's photo in your file panditji was right

Anyways you know what geet I'm very happy !!

He is your father's friend's son.

and he is an intelligent boy ,I thought you were not friends and now I understand why you were hiding it from me

And her mom went on talking and talking and talking and Geet had no option left other than cursing herself for a stupid mistake no no "paap" of keeping his photograph and the bad timing of panditji.

Geet was so tired that she went out of the room and told that she'll talk to her mother tomorrow ,this behaviour strengthened her mother's doubt.

She didn't say no ,her mother thought

And in the morning geet got to know that she seriously talked about this to Maan's father.

Geet's worst nightmare was coming true

Ayyo...!!!!Amma Why did you do that????

said Geet with a crying face

He called us and baton baton mein main yeh baat uthaaya!!!

Aaargh..amma ,you always do this !!!

Geet rushed to the hospital to talk to Maan.

Naan enna seyyanum? (What should I do??)

Geet was tensed!!

They both worked in the same hospital but never had a friendly conversation they knew each other only on professional terms.

Maan was the charming Doctor , many of her friends loved his attitude "Mr. Charming" but she never even had a proper conversation with them ,may be because of the dislike that grew in her from the childhood.

However she went to Maan as there was no option left

Good Morning Dr. Maan

Good morning Dr. Geet

Dr...actually I need to talk to you.

Sure Doctor.

Aaah..Uhh...Ummm...but it's a bit personal .

Ohhh,just then Maan's phone rang.

I'm so sorry Dr. Geet I'll just attend this call actually it's my dad

Oh...sure

Dad ...his dad and her boss ,Maan's dad , Mr. Ramachandra , chief of the hospital.

Geet stood there just realisingOMG!! It's Maan's dad ,and Amma talked to him in the morning ..OH no!!

And Maan rushed towards her

Dr. Geetha Srinivasan...what is this!!

I mean how could you ,I mean we are not even Good friends and I never knew that..

Filter coffee..

Akka Filter coffee...

Geet's thoughts were interrupted by a little girl who came to offer coffee to Geet.

Geet smiled ,took the coffee leaving her thoughts behind.

She went to the hall ,It is 6:30 in the morning and everyone in the house was wake up someone were got ready and some were waiting for their turn to go and have a bath.

The whole hall was filled with the scent of jasmines , a lot of jasmines were kept in a basket for all the guests.

The kitchen was filled with two or three ladies who were supplying hot hot filter coffee for all the guests and on the other hand a group of male guests sat in a group discussing the taste of the coffee and the headlines of the paper.

And in the kitchen even before the supply of the coffee was over some ladies started preparing pongal for the breakfast with wet hair.

Geet moved towards the balcony where she saw two girls of her age ,making the paste of freshly picked mehendi leaves ,she remembered her childhood where she rarely used the readymade mehendi ,her mother always applied the freshly prepared paste.

Geet was thoroughly enjoying the whole environment around her.

She helped the other ladies in supplying coffee

And when she was supplying people stopped her in between and enquired her about her profession and some people hugged her when they came to know that she is now a doctor.

Geet loved the affection that she received from few.

And as soon as she completed the serving she saw someone and she ran towards the door and hugged them


"Amma ,Appa

Nethu payanam epadi irrunthathu?(how was the journey)

Geetha ,hold this ,her mother handed the coffee cup

Your father can't stay without the coffee.Huh!!! started complaining her mother with a long braid and a traditional south Indian sari ,with flowers tied up neatly in her hair.

Almost same as any other woman of her age.

"Arreh ,Sambasiva ,Kamakshi"...Come come its been a long time

People went to them and soon their parents got bus with the other guests.

Geet stood there smiling.

Soon they went in and Geet went out to fetch some cocunuts .

And then she found Maan. In the same oily hair ,ill-fitted clothes.

Nautanki She murmured under her breath(😆)

Hi Dr .Maan Venkatraman .

Did Amma appa come???

Amma appa??

Yeah ,yours

Stop calling them amma appa!!!

Arreh but we are soon going to get married

Married??

She pointed her finger towards Maan

Listen Dr. Venkatraman it's just that the talks are going on...It'll happen only if both of us are ok with this proposal.

So half-marriage is done na!!

What??

I'm happy with it.

Po!! (go)

Naan enga poganum?(where shud I go?)

Look...

Ohhh Geetha a small fight can't change everything

How canI forget everything Geethu

Said Maan with flirtatious behaviour.

What ??? Geethu???

You ...you ...you flirt ,nautanki...Aargh!!!

Geetha left the palce in anger.

Geetha brought some cocunuts and went near her Mother.

Geetha vaaa vaa

I saw Maan in the morning ,.Geetha I toh like him a lot ,very good seelction Geethu.

Geethu??!!

He changed himself so as to avoid marriage proposals and useless gossips that would arise after rejecting them,

Such a lovely boy!!

Amma ,woh Julie aunty recently visited Madurai she is showing the photographs I think you should watch them said Geet trying to divert her mother

Geet sat in the room

Nice selection??? Geet murmured

She again went back to her thoughts

Dr. Geetha Srinivasan?? I mean never knew that...

Listen Listen Maan

Actually it's a big misunderstanding , Actually do you remember ,when we all went t a village for medical check up we clicked some pics and one of your pics remained with me and Geet narrated the whole story.

Maan understood the situation

Geet and Maan met both the families in the evening and tried to explain the situation and tried to solve the misunderstanding.

Both Geet's amma and appa and Maan's appa were disappointed after knowing the truth , they all were very happy but their happiness disappeared soon ,but an idea actually striked in their mind.

Maan Geet's marriage!!

Not bad ,Maan's appa and Geet's parents were family friends and what's wrong in changing it into a perfect relation.

And in turn they put the proposal infront of Maan and Geet.

Maan and Geet never knew that this situation would arise ,

They didn't like the idea a bit but to avoid more complications they accepted it and told that they'll tell their decision after some time. They both decided that they'll say no after some time and move on in their lives ,so nothing is going to change.

Even thought Maan Geet were clear about the answer they are going to give but due to the proposal they both were somehow forced to spend time together ,attend the functions together and slowly they became good friends .

But 'Just friends'.

But slowly and unknowingly some unknown feelings were arising in their hearts and in this sensitive stage Geet saw Maan flirting with someone (well according to Maan it was her misconception 😆)

but as a friend it shouldn't matter but it hurt her, even she didn't know the reason behind that jealousy .

She was so angry on Maan

She went back home

Geet why are you angry ,he is just a friend and what else ,you shouldn't take it seriously hain na!! Haan and waise bhi we both are going to tell ur parents about our descision as decided a"big no" ,and all this marriage drama will be over.

Geet was somehow not satisfied with her answer but somehow tried to satisfy herself.

And in the meanwhile Maan tried to cool her and clear her misunderstanding ,but she didn't talk to him.

And the next day ,everyone sat together in Geet's house in a big hall ,just to listen their descision

Just the to Geet's utter shock Maan said that he was happy with this "rishta"

What???????!!!!

screamed Geet in her mind.!!!

If she was a television soap character her face would have become black and white and it wud have been zoomed and zoomed and zoomed.

Geet came back to present

It was again the marriage celebration going on in a full swing , Coffee ,news paper ,flowers ,payasam , laughter ,discussion on saris .

She saw Maan talking to her appa ,Her appa treated Maan as a son and even her amma as Maan's mother died when he was 5 yeras old .So her mother and Maan shared a lovely bond.

Even Geet never felt that Maan carried over the top attitude, she always felt that he is genuine, nothing bad in him ,just a flirt but not now ,right.

She also shares a great relation with Maan's father,she respects him as a boss.

Her family members are happy ,Maan is happy.

So what's wrong one side everything is so perfect ,so why am I so confused

AM I making things complicated??

What's happening ,how can everything happen so quickly .

A misunderstanding ,Proposal ,friendship ,fight and Maan's yes!!!

Ufff she thought..!!

Such a confused soul


to be contd...

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PART 3

Soo ...friends...how was the second part?

I'm so sorry I couldn't complete this os with this part ,I know this is not the way to write an OS ,but I'm so sorry!!

Hope I haven't over done the coffee part ,but being a south Indian I realise the importance of coffee ,oops...filter coffee😆

Please ,do comment (good or bad) ,I need them

and please don't forget to hit the like button😃

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great os...👏👏

waiting to read more...😊

will comment more later
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds very very interesting...but i hope no separation track or making maneet seek other partners...i will kill u...
OS ka title...initially i thought clueless is the title of the OS...😆
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Originally posted by: icy_magma

great os...👏👏


waiting to read more...😊

will comment more later


Thank you dear...will continue soon 😃
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Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique

sounds very very interesting...but i hope no separation track or making maneet seek other partners...i will kill u...
OS ka title...initially i thought clueless is the title of the OS...😆


I started it on such a light note... I'll stick to that
It has nothing depressing in it 😆
And yeah I know the title is a bit weird
But it's better than leavin' it benaam so I gave this title!!! 😆lel
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anupm04

Awasome
Continue soon


Thanks dear... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesme updated dear
loved it
i think maan has purpously done this to avoid getting attraction from girls and their mother
he would be quite charming and hndsome just hidding it from everyone😉
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Great !!!! do continue soon...
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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesme updated dear
loved it
i think maan has purpously done this to avoid getting attraction from girls and their mother
he would be quite charming and hndsome just hidding it from everyone😉

Hmmm...I just don't wanna comment on this all I can say is just wait a little bit😛😉

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