KriYaansh FF 'Love v/s Hatred' Part 22 on Page 139 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

Guys...just asking...!!!

KITNA BADA UPDATE KARUN????

jitna bada update kar sakti ho jitna bada update unna bada cmnt lol just kiding bada bada update karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
@MANIA: aww thanks...!!! I am so glad u liked it and pakka next update BAHUUT BADA HOGA! 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and that was the best update ever
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...after reading this ff i am in luv wid it...Rishita and Yukti u guys r awesome ⭐️ writers...👏👏...continue writing and plzz pm me wen u update the nxt parts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@shivani thank you so so so much!!!
@lovely...aww thnks !!! thanks a lot!!!
@KriaReyansh: thanks a lot dear!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Guys..i have updated the next part...I hope you guys like it...!! Do comment guys...Your comments are very valuable for me!!! 😊

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At 10 o clock at SINGHNIA's house..

Rey's dad: Rey…Rey…kahan ho tum? Ye dekho..janaab aaram se so rhe hain!!

Rey tangling through the blanket and getting out of the mess..

Rey: Yes DAD!!

Rey's dad: Beta, Main Ghai residence jaa rha tha kuch kaam tha…tum chaloge?

Rey (in his mind): Ghai residence matlab KRIA KE GHAR..wow!!!

Yes dad…main chalunga!!!

Rey's dad: But ladhna mat kria k saath …ok?

Rey: Abh hum frnds hain dad…we won't fight..!!

Rey's dad: Beta..aaj kal tumahre jokes bimaar ho gye hain kya? Try better…Go get ready!!

Rey gets ready and both of them move to their destination!!

Kria's dad: Hello Mr. Singhania and Reyaansh!!

Rey: Hey..!!

Kria's mom: Kriaaa….utho beta…!!! Get up!!!!!

Rey: Aunty..main kria ko utha dun?

Kria's mom: Beta…Sure!! Bt remember NO LADAI..!!

Rey *smiles*..

Rey enters Kria's room and there he stood amazed looking at his doll sleeping with a sweet smile on her charming face..The rays of the sun was falling on Kria's face and started irritating her..!!

Rey closed the door and went towards Kria..He sat beside her love and touched her pretty face!!

Rey: Goodmorning Kria..!!

Kria: Goodmorning..!!

She opened her eyes and was shocked to see Rey!!

Kria: REY?!?!?!?! Tum…???? YAHAAANNN???

Rey: shhh…shhh…tum HYPER ACTIV MODE par aa gayi…I am here with my dad…and tumahri mom k permission se yahan aaya hun…!!!😆

Kria: Oh…!!! *smiles and hugs REY*

Rey never wanted to break this HUG…bt kria interrupted..

Kria resting her head on rey's shoulder: Rey…kya humme apne parents n frnds ko hamare relationship k bare mein bata dena chahiye?

Rey: I don't think so baby!! Abhi nhi…Lets wait a little longer..!!

Kria: Okay…!!!! *cutely smiles*..

Rey: ek baat bataun Kria?

Kria: hmmm *playing with Rey's hands*..

Rey: Jab bhi tum hasti ho toh bahut bahut cute lagti ho…bilkul ek chote bacche jaisi!!

Kria: Sacchiii…??! Awww…thanks..!! *smiles again* pata hain Rey… mujhe chote bacche bahuut pasand hain…aww….I love them!!!

Rey: Aur mujhe? *smirks*

Kria: tumhe toh I LOVE YOU A LOT!!!!

Rey: I love you too..!!

Kria's mom: kria beta get ready for breakfast…!!!!

Kria: Yes maaa… Rey aap abh bahar jao…college mein milenge…!!

Rey: Ok byee… *and gave her a quick hug*

Rey went out of the room and Kria got up to get ready..!!

As Kria came out of her room she wanted Rey and his dad to stay for the breakfast..

Kria: Mom…Singhania's gaye kya?

Kria's mom: Haan beta…now go and have your breakfast…!!

Kria: Haw..!! *thinking about Rey and making a sad face*.. accha Maa…main college jaa rhi hun …Neha ne jaldi bulaya tha!!

Kria's mom: Beta…bt breakfast…??

Kria: byee MOM….bye DAD…driver…car nikalo??

Kria left her house for the college and so did Rey..

As Kria reached the college…She checked herself..She wanted to look the best…not because she was the most beautiful girl in the collge but because she wanted to impress Rey more and even more!! Kria entered the college and there entered Rey..

Rey: Hey Kria..!!

Kria turned around and saw Rey..She smiled and Rey saw her smile..He always wanted to see her love smiling and could not resist admiring her!

Kria: Hii Rey!!

They both hold each other's hands and entered the college…laughing and merrily enjoying like two little kids!

They entered the atrium and Swayam saw them laughing and enjoying with each other..

Swayam: Hi Kria and Rey..tum dono?!

Kria: Swayam… *Shit* Ill meet you later..mujhe janaa hain..bye… *and she escapes*..

Rey: Arrey Kriaa… ruko…rukoo…!!

Swayam: Ruk beta…Ye kya ho rha tha??

Rey making a SURPRISED face: Kya…? Kya bol rha hain tu?

Swayam: accha…yun Kria k saath HAATH pakadh kar college mein enter karna and all…?

Rey explains him what happened last night …

Rey: Swayam main tujhe trust karke yeh sab bata rha hun pls kisiko mat batana…and especially Kria ko…usko pata nahi chalna chahiye that you know everything!!!

Swayam: Chill… main kisiko kuch nahi bataunga…

Rey: Thanks dude..!!

Swayam: Vaise Kria itni jaldi maan bhi gayi …I am shocked… Bt happy for you guys…vaise ek suggestion dun? Just a suggestion??

Rey: Kya?

Swayam: Kria ko DATE par le jaa… You know…romantic cheezin..ladkiyon ko pasand hain..

Rey: You sure? Abhi ek hi din to hua hain..

Swayam: Toh ek din ki anniversary celebrate kar..be unpredictable…Go on dude..!

Rey: Kria manegi?

Swayam: If she really loves you then yes!

Rey: Okay….done!!! I will ask her..

Promo: Rey asking Kria for a date in the FIRE EXIT!!!

<<Reviews>>

Guys...I hope u like it...And do mention whether it was long enough or you want even more longer!!!😊 Pls do tell ur views,advices and other stuff!!

-Rishita and Yukti!😊

Pm's LATER!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum awesum... Kriyansh ki date awww jaldi update karo cnt wait. plz asap plz. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rish n yukti...it was so cute..here cmes bada wala comment...wat a chance rey got to enter her room...n deir hug aww..d sweetest gesture was kria was playing wid rey's fingers...i lvd dat...n wen dy enter d clg playing merrily holding each other's hand is adding stars to d update...rey n swayams convo was truly brotherly..n persnly lyk reyam so it was d treat 4 me...cnt wait 4 d next part wen rey will ask kria 4 a date...yippie...n next update itna b ho sakta h n bada b i wont mind if u'l make it more larger lol..n ya sure pms l8r..beautiful update n update jaldi jaldi karte rehna 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG OMG this is sooo cute <3 loved it! keep it up dear!!! YUKTI ND RISHITA u both r d best!!!!!! :) i love dis keep updtng fatser :) thnkx 4 d pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part especially rey waking up kriya and their parents warning them to behave.
this story is awesome especially in terms of speed(i mean originally toh kitna kheecha)
waiting for more such scenes.
thanx for the pm

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