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Posted: 19 years ago
ok...first of all...heya!!!!!! so good to be back...and now, sorry!!! i promised in my post that i would update my FF's today...however i just realised how much i need to revise for my MOCK Science exams, so no updates for a week...i'm so sorry guys and i'll make it up to you with multiple parts on all three FF's...

hope you understand,
~Nibbles 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry it took me so long to post this one!

Part 35

DK was so shocked he dropped Disha!

D: OW!!!!

She grabbed his hand and got up

D: DK!

She punched him on the arm

But then noticed his expression

And followed his gaze towards the car

Which had stopped in front of the farmhouse

The door opened

And a man stepped out

He looked up at the rain

And swept his fingers

Through his wet hair as he smiled at DK and Disha

V: Hey bhabhs! Hey brother!!

DK and Disha couldn't believe

That Vedant was standing in front of them

Disha smiled

D: Vedant?! How come you're here?
V: I had some work in (I forgot where they were…someone please remind me!) so I thought I might as well stay with you!

D: great idea! Come inside!

Disha and Vdant went in laughing and talking

As DK watched them with disbelief

D: here…

She handed Vedant a towel

D: you better change your clothes or you'll get a cold

V: uh…but I was in such a hurry that I didn't bring any clothes with me!

D: don't worry! You can borrow some of DK's!

She went and got some for Vedant

After he'd changed hic clothes

Disha got him some food

And they both sat down in to eat while talking

They didn't notice DK

Who was standing to one side and sulking

Suddenly DK got up

DK: Disha! It's really late and I'm going to sleep…

D: ok DK!

DK looked at her for a second

He was kind of shocked

Cause he expected her to come as well

But she was too busy talking to Ved

To even notice that DK was still standing there

Annoyed, he stormed off to his room

A few hours later

Disha finally came up

she switched don the lights and was surprised

to see that DK was still awake

D: I thought you were asleep…

DK: how can I sleep with so much noise?

D: oops…sorry DK! Me and Vedant didn't even realise…

DK got up and walked towards her slowly

DK: so…where were we before he interrupted us?

Disha looked at him innocently

D: what do you mean?

DK cornered her and looked at her with a small smile on his lips

DK: I mean this…

DK bent down and kissed her on the neck

D: DK…

DK: ssshhhh

He held her waist and kissed her on the forehead,

Then on the nose,

Then her cheek,

And was just centimetres from her mouth,

When Disha hugged him and closed her eyes

as he gripped her tighter…
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏

Great Job nibbles...I started reading this FF just a lil while ago!!!And I Luv It!!!

very cute update!!! 😛

Cont soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow!! Its getting hot in here!!! 😳 😳 😳 lolz!! 😆 😆


Nice part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol guli! 😆
cute part! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Wow!! Its getting hot in here!!! 😳 😳 😳 lolz!! 😆 😆

I know jaanu 😳😳😳 same here😉😆

nibbles jaanu that was so funny, vedant ease dropping. poor dk.

all he wanted was some private time alone, vedant had to hamlabhol there else well😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
sorry guys!!1

part 36 (i think)

Next morning…

DK turned round in his sleep

But couldn't find Disha

He got up and rubbed his eyes

Before having a shower

And changing his clothes

Slolwy he made his way downstairs

To the kitchen

Where Disha was putting food on a tray

She looked up and smiled

D: Good morning!

DK: Wow…breakfast…

He went to pick up a paratha

But Disha smacked his hand away

D: That's not for you

DK: Then?

Vedant came jumping down the steps

V: Hi bhabs! Wow!! Is this all for me?

Disha smiled

D: of course…

DK: And what about me?

D: I made you some toast…it's over there…

Vedant and Disha made their way to the dining room

Leaving DK with his toast

DK: my honeymoon…my wife…and he gets the parathas!

DK held up his dry breakfast

And made a face

After breakfast

Disha was sorting out the cupboard

When she felt DK

Slide his hands round her waist

D: DK!! Let go!!

DK: Disha…this is meant to be our honeymoon…

He kissed her lightly on the shoulder

D: I know…but what if Vedant sees…

DK rolled his eyes

And let go of her

He walked off annoyed

Leaving a smiling Disha

****
Vedant was talking to Rano on the phone

R: Vedant! Where were you last night? I rang you hundreds of times but your mobile was switched off…

V: whoops…sorry Rano…actually, I didn't think it would be safe if I kept my mobile on while travelling

Rano was confused

R: Travelling?…wait, where are you?

Vedant smiled looking proud with himself

V: I'm with brother and bhabhs at their farmhouse!!!

R: What?!! What are you doing there?

V: Well…it's pretty obvious…I'm here to bring them closer!

Rano smacked her forehead with her hand

R: Vedant you doofus…they can do that themselves…infact…the last thing they need right now is you in the middle…

V: Relax Rano…don't you trust me?

R: No!

V: look…I know what I'm doing, so don't worry!

R: but…

V: Chill…I'll talk to you later…

And he quickly hung up

Rano was annoyed

R: I've got to do something before this idiot messes everything up!
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 rano is the only cleva one 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 i can so picture this!!

Hey Ved have you ever heard 3's a crowd? 😆

cute jaanu! Please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 37

DK was getting bored

All day long Disha and Vedant had sat down talking

Even when Disha would go to the kitchen

Which would be every hour

She'd always cook Vedant something

And poor DK was left on his own

Finally in the afternoon

Vedant stepped out

Leaving DK and Disha alone

He walked up to her and put his arms round her waist

DK: Do you know how long I've been waiting to do this…

Disha smiled

He kissed her on the cheek and then her neck

D: DK!

DK: What?! Disha we're on our honeymoon…and we're all alone…no Vedant…no one to disturb us…

He gripped her tighter

Just then the doorbell rang

Disha laughed

DK closed his eyes in frustration

D: DK…open the door

Annoyed he opened the door and nearly freaked!

DK: Rano?!!

Rano stood in the doorway looking kinda nervous

R: Uhh…hi jiju!

She gave a faint smile

DK looked behind her

And then to her left and right

Rano was confused

R: jiju…what are you looking for?

DK: Oh…just wondering why your on your own…you know…you could have brought someone else along…your mum…Gautham…Sanya…you left them alone?

Rano was going red with embarrassment

R: I'm sorry jiju…I know it's your honeymoon and…

D: DK…who is it?!!

Disha came out and was surprised

D: Rano!!

She hugged Rano

DK: yeah Disha…Rano…but look…she's on her own! Rano…you should have brought the whole family…even the neighbours! After all, it is our honeymoon…

D: DK!

She hit him on his arm…

D: come inside…

She took Rano's bag and they both went inside

Leaving DK at the door

More pissed than ever

D: So how come you're here?

R: I had some work to do…so I thought I'd…

DK: So you thought you'd come and stay here…how nice!

Disha glared at DK

D: Come…I'll show you your room

Rano and Disha left DK in the living room

And went up to Ranos room to chat

Rano came down a few hours later

She was surprised to see DK flicking through some files

By now DK had given up trying to flirt with his wife

And had gone back to his first love

His work!!

Rano cleared her throat to get DK's attention

R: Umm…jiju…

DK looked up

DK: What happened?

R: Umm…could I talk to you? I mean…outside somewhere?

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