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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jasnav
ANU WHEN DID U START WRITING 😆

ITS REALLY GUD SO FAR 👏

like a week ago, i got really bore in gym so i thought to start a story.😆 most of the scene is happened in my real life and some are imaginations.😳 and thank u for liking it😳

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Part 3

It's 8.00 at morning and alarm has been ringing for 10 mints now. Finally kripa wakes up and is about to take a shower. A smile came across her face remembering the engagement. Two more weeks till the engagement, everything happened so fast she didn't get time to rethink. Kripa and Angad's dad has been best friend since they moved to usa. Angad's dad and moms are moving to India for a year and they want to see Angad to get married first before moving. That's the only reason for this sudden marriage.
"Oh crap I forgot Anjali was going to come today for shopping, I better get ready first" she quickly ran to take a shower.

Angad got up thinking the same thing about their engagement. Finally she is going to be mine he said to himself. His cell phone rang and it was none other then his sweet sis Angali.

"Hi bhaiya wass up" Aliya asked

"nothing just got up" Angad answered still in sleepish tone

"oh poor baby, kripa bhabi pher se call kiya tha kya? U knw at 4?" she couldn't help giggling.

"Shut up Anju, tuje aaj shopping mein jana tha naa kripa ke saath"

"I know but ii bet she just remembered now and maybe just went to take a shower" aliya said wisely

"Achaa even I have to get ready for college

"and a date kyun?

"Meri sweet si sis ek baat bol, is there anything u don't about me?

"Umm let me think nah" She chuckled.

"Acha bye I hav to go. Kripa se kya baat hui batana. Ok bye" Angad said

" Yes sir" Anjali giggled again.

Angad was smiling by now, Anju is the best sis in the world even though they hav like 7 year age difference still she knows everything about him and she is the 1 because of who whom he got frens with kripa. His thoughts moved back to kripa, today is valentine's day and today's date is going to be perfect because today is the day he wanna share his feeling to kripa, the only thing she doesn't know about him, the only three words he is desperate to tell her and the only three words he is longing to hear from kripa, those three magical words "I LOVE U"

Preview: Angad and Kripa's romantic date and some fighting

Hope u like this part, if u don't like the way story goes u can always give suggestions and leave lot's of comments.

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

👏 REALLY GOOD SOMETHING DIFFERENT CONT SOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN 😳

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: griffinmonster
👏 REALLY GOOD SOMETHING DIFFERENT CONT SOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN 😳

thnx, may continue tommorrow

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Muniza Riaz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

👏 👏 👏 Beautiful cant wait till 2morrow 😭 .

Luv U
Muniza

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: muniza75
👏 👏 👏 Beautiful cant wait till 2morrow 😭 .

Luv U
Muniza

aww dii don't cry, i will try to continue today😉

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griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

DASA IF U DON'T MIND I WANNA TELL SOMETHING YR FAN-FIC TITLE IS PYAAR KI EHSAAS GRAMATICALLY IT IS WRONG IT SHOULD BE PYAAR KA EHSAAS NO OFFENCE OK? IT IS AN AWESOME STORY U CAN EDIT THE TITLE IF U WANT TO
HERE IS THE WAY
GO TO FIRST PAGE OF YR FAN-FIC
ON THAT PAGE GO ON THE FIRST POST BY U
CLICK EDIT AND U CAN MAKE CHANGES IN THE SUBJECT SECTION.
U CAN EVEN WRITE THERE UPDATED WHEN U UPDATE
JUST A SUGGESTION I HOPE U TAKE IT THAT WAY
BYE

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: griffinmonster
DASA IF U DON'T MIND I WANNA TELL SOMETHING YR FAN-FIC TITLE IS PYAAR KI EHSAAS GRAMATICALLY IT IS WRONG IT SHOULD BE PYAAR KA EHSAAS NO OFFENCE OK? IT IS AN AWESOME STORY U CAN EDIT THE TITLE IF U WANT TO
HERE IS THE WAY
GO TO FIRST PAGE OF YR FAN-FIC
ON THAT PAGE GO ON THE FIRST POST BY U
CLICK EDIT AND U CAN MAKE CHANGES IN THE SUBJECT SECTION.
U CAN EVEN WRITE THERE UPDATED WHEN U UPDATE
JUST A SUGGESTION I HOPE U TAKE IT THAT WAY
BYE

lol meri hindi achi nahin hain😆😆. thnx. u can call me anu

Edited by DASA - 19 years ago

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

i am continuing a part today 😛

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#20

Part 4

Kripa is with Anjali shopping for the engagement, kripa's is done last week, Anjali is still trying to find a nice dress. Today is valentine day and Angad has asked her for like 100 time for the date and she had to agree, how couldn't she , the way he asked him, she was smiling to herself to now. Even though they always fight the essence of Angad always brings smile to her face. It's really bizarre when someone have so many importance in ur life

"Kripa pls get back to earth" Angali is shouting at top her lungs

"I am in earth Anjali, hey anju mujse ek help chayee, bol karegii?

"hmm Kispe, aaj raat date ke liya dress select karna hain? Anjali chuckled when kripa blushed

"How do u knw that" Kripa asked trying to be innocent

"Bhaiya ne kaha tha subha and the way ur day dreaming mujse toh aisa lagta hain ki ur already there with bhaiya"

"yaa right , I thinking of wearing something black, black is always hot naa"? They both giggled

It's 6.00 now and she has been waiting in dance academy since half hour waiting for stupid , idiot Angad, He is always late, why can't he come early ever then she saw nishi. (Nishi is one if her dance students, kripa went to performing arts school and studied there for 4 years, her majors was dance then and she changed her subject to pharmacy when she got into college. She teaches dance as a part time job only because she loves children and this way she get time to play with them)Nishi came towards her and gave her a red rose and said "I love u"

" aww I love u too nishi, Happy valentine's day meri jaan" she said lovingly

Nishi smiled and then came back with bunch of red flowers and then said "I love u and yeh uncle ne kaha"

" kaun uncle" she asked confused

Nishi pointed to a black car and kripa got to know who is uncle

She went to his car and yaa it was our own dashing Angad in a black shirt smiling

"Hey Sweethear"

"hi Angad, tum late kyun thay" asked kripa trying to hard to be angry

"I am sorry jaan, woh, u will see, abhi chalen" Angad opened the door

Kripa got in and and started to listen to fm

Tujse bichadke was playing and Angad wanted to put a cd in and kripa stopped him

"Sunne do naa my fav song"

"mera nahin hain, tum haesha sad song kyun sunti ho?"

" sad song kaha, mujse rahel pasand hain , I lov him yaar"

" oh really toh mujse kyun shaddi kar rahi ho?" Angad asked playfully

"woht oh meri majboori hain"

"Oh ok," Angad looked away sadly

They drove into a beach where Angad decorated so beautifully with all hearts and kripa couldn't help hugging him

"Omg Angad this is so beautiful, isiliya tumhe late hui, but maana padega ur the best Angad, this is so beautiful"

"Kripa I want to ask u something and promise me that u will tell me the truth"

this is wht kripa is wearing

here is our angad

Ok guys this is it for now, valentine romance didn't started yet, and I am thinking of ending this part soon after 2 or 3 parts cause there aren't really lot of comments, and I think u guy's don't like it

With Lots of love
Anamika

Edited by DASA - 19 years ago

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