Pyar ka Ehsaas updated pg 33!!!

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

no probz i know how tough it is to write ff's

awww how sweet waise how ur acting so angel today😆jk

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#152

A: Toh kripa tum kyar keh rahi thi ki mein he was caressing her neck

K: Kit um

A: Haan mein (kissingher neck)

K: Bache nahin ho

A: Achaa chalo thik hain, he looked at his watch oh god 10 baaj chuke hain , I need to sleep kaal kitna sada kaam hain, shaddi, kaal raat hamare (he broke off)

K: Hamare Kya?

A: Shaadi hain aur I am going to loose my freedom forever, poor me, I feel so sad

K: Kya? Fine then. She stomped to chair and went to sleep there

A: Kripa

K: Shut up go to sleep okay

A: Sach mein jana nahin chaoogi kaal raat kya hain?

K: nahin

A: Pakka?

K: Bolo

A: Kaal raat hamrae suhag raat hain aur tab tum aur mein , hey kripa kya tum aaj sofe pe sone wali ho?

K: haan, u have a problem with that?

A: No I am fine

They both went to sleep, angad smiling and kripa angry

It's moring, kripa woke up and done all the packings, she just called naina to inform that angad is fine and that they don't have to come picking him up. She is there and tey both went to sleep

In the hall way they saw diya sitting in a tool

A: Hey diya

D: It's pyari si diya

A: Ok whatever, how is ur aunt??

D: she is fine wanna meet her?

A: Hmm

K: Chalo naa angad

A: ok let's go

They entered a cabin and saw a girl is sitting with her back facing the door

Aunty!!

She faced the door and became speechless

A: Misti!! Tu or Suicide?

PS: Hope u like this part, i didn't get lot of comments last time, maybe i should start writing again 😭

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cute_angle92

@cute_angle92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#153

I just read ur fan fic and I think it is graet.
cute angle 😛

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Ria

@~Angel~

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Posted: 19 years ago

#154

yaaaaaay dasa
greattt jobbbbbb yaar
👏

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Mehndi

@-Cupcake-

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Posted: 19 years ago

#155

hey i just read ur fanfic its awesome and u r a mindblowing writer 👏 ,love the way angad teases kripa 😆 😳 .

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Dipti

@angadlover<3

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Posted: 19 years ago

#156

tht was gr8....who is misti in this storii?...plzz continue!!..

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: angadlover<3
tht was gr8....who is misti in this storii?...plzz continue!!..

U will find out soon😉

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: cupcake
hey i just read ur fanfic its awesome and u r a mindblowing writer 👏 ,love the way angad teases kripa 😆 😳 .

thnks for liking it even i like the way he teases kripa😆 and i tried to show frendship along with love between them, cause love can't happen without friendship naa😳😉

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#159

Thnks to all of u for leaving such wonderful comments, 😳 but i have midterm tommorrow woh bhi math , so i won't be able to continue, i am really sorry guys, hope u understand me, i wish i had to write a story rather then doing math but... it won't happen 😭 😆 😭

love u loads
keep those wonderful comments coming 😳