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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: griffinmonster
aww poor gal its ok yaar the part rocked 👏 and yeah i am an angel ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~evil one 😆

poor girl kaun? me? kripa yaa mishthi? and yaa ur an evil~angel😆

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griffy.fz

@griffy.fz

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Posted: 19 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: DASA

poor girl kaun? me? kripa yaa mishthi? and yaa ur an evil~angel😆

oh i was talking about u u had misterms rigt?

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

oh i was talking about u u had misterms rigt?

physics and english 4 midterm. i hated it😆

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

M: Angad!! she asked couldn't just believe her eyes, tum yaha kaise?

A: I had a accident aur ….

M: Accident!!! Kaise angad? Tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho, thoda bhi khayal nahin rakhte aapna, this is not fair. Maine tumse kabhie baat nahin karoongi

A: array meri chod, why did u tried to suicide? u didn't even contact me since last week, what's going on?

M: oh angad kya bataoon, bahut kuch ho chukka hain?

A: yeh ladka kaun hain?

M: kaun?

A: Jiske liya tune suicide karne ki koshis ki?

M: Leave that, har koi ko apna pyar nahin milta naa

A: Milta hain if u love them truthfully like me and kripa, we are getting married tomorrow., tu arahi hain naa, u better come aur next time suicide ki barre mein sochi bhi toh dekhna kyar karoonga tera

M: Haaan shaddi, I will try to come

A: acha abhi I have to go, u getting discharged today also right, wanna come with me?

M: No I will manage

A: Aur haan suicide for someone who loves u back and worth it. I know he will never let u do it.

Kripa was just standing wandering and watching their closeness. She knows angad for like 4 or 5 years and he never told her about mishti.

After they left

M: Tumhe kaise bataoon Angad ki the person whom I ever loved is you, u have been always there for me, holding me tight when I was depressed, pusing away my tears, u were happiness for me, meri roshni, zindagi. Sab kuch ho tum. Galti meri hain ki I never told u about my feelings, wishing with my all heart that u would understand watching my eyes but u never did. Now ur marrying other girl, I know she will love u a lot but what I will do? I can't see u with her, marrying her and I want u to be happy even ur not with me. i love u angad, I always loved u and I will always

PS: was it good? I know it was a short part. Next comes a wedding part, I really don't know much about indian wedding, can u give me some suggestions? 😳 If u give me helpful suggestion then I will be able to write the next part soon. 😳 It's up to u and yaa don't u dare forget to comment 😡 😆

Edited by DASA - 19 years ago

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Amneet

@amneetkaur_24

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

Amazing part!!! I wish i could give u advice on indian weddings but i dont know much but the basics. Sorry. Cont. soon!

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nabeeha

@nabz8888

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Posted: 19 years ago

#166

a very good part!!! umm, i don't much about indian weddings, but i know the basics, like the seven rounds around fire, the sindoor, the mangalsutra and some traditions like the bride walking in kum kum and looking for the ring in a bowl of milk!!! hope this helps!!! n do cont. soon

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pasaris

@pasaris

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

hay ..i jus read the whole thin n its awsome ,fab n great.........hope u cont soon with a BIG part

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: griffinmonster
👏 nice twist cont soon

thnks😳, is ur name preeti?

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Annamika

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Posted: 19 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24
Amazing part!!! I wish i could give u advice on indian weddings but i dont know much but the basics. Sorry. Cont. soon!

it's ok yaar anyways thanks for atleast replying😳

Edited by DASA - 19 years ago

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Annamika

@Bluejassmine

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Posted: 19 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: nabz8888
a very good part!!! umm, i don't much about indian weddings, but i know the basics, like the seven rounds around fire, the sindoor, the mangalsutra and some traditions like the bride walking in kum kum and looking for the ring in a bowl of milk!!! hope this helps!!! n do cont. soon

thnks i knew about the seven rounds, but walking in kumkim and ring bowl bowl of milk sounds good. thnks a lot. i think i will continue soon, just planning the wedding 😉