Love, Lies and Deceit-Thread 2 Part 39 pg 64 9/12

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Rupa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

confusing.. maan and sunny so where does geet come in...

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Rose i am a bit confused about Maan-Sunny's relationship.

But u are holding on to the suspense beautifully.

Pls don't get upset about negative comments and continue the story.

U are an awesome writer and I am sure u have a proper explanation for everything that has so far happened in the story.

Pls update next part soon.

Thanx for pm dear.

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

I am confused of Sunny and maans relationship

hope you reveal the truths soon

after all was good update

finally dadi forgave geet

thanks for pm

cont. soon

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: cyum321
so confusing 😕
maan loves Cheriii, than maan also loves sunny and than he loves geet ?????
and why geet being so selfless She want all around her happy but about her???

I loved this comment ..

Really, it seems Maan cant live without multiple women in his life - is he confused in love or is it the women who are confused - its not evident.

Rose, this is an appreciation cum feedback post.

The story is complex and I know the USP is suspense. I appreciate your story from that aspect. I am not even mentioning Maaneet parts. But the characters of the story are weak. This whole idea of Maan loving somebody in office, being with Sonalika and marrying Geet doesnt seem logical enough.

I know you havent mentioned who is the father of Sonalika's baby - everybody is assuming it to be Maan - maybe he is... maybe he isnt. But Sunny and Maan were speaking of marriage at Dev's wedding.

Geet's character portrayal is not strong. If she is a balanced individual then sacrificing for Dev was logical but marrying Maan was not - infact why did she have to marry at all. If Maan loved Sunny enough, he wouldnt have married Geet - he totally "forgot" about her in the situation!

Sunny being Maan's bed partner, her agreeing to stay in Maaneet room even after their marriage, Maan sleeping in the same bed with Geet after marriage when Sunny might be expecting his baby, Geet bringing Sunny to stay in the same room with Maan even when they are legally married, Dadima accepting these things look morally wrong from my point of view.

I agree with Rachna, its hard to digest. In order to make the story appealing, pls dont compromise with logic and integrity.

But again, its a story and I trust you will give us an interesting ending.😊

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Mera to dil hi toot gaua maan ki life ka important part sunny kese ho sakti he I m damm sure k geet k saath intimate maan hi hua he .plz itne din sse paaglop ki tarah wait kar rahi thi update ka mujhje laga tha maan geet k desicion se khush nai hoga aur geet ko akela nai chodega par yaha to maan sunny k sdaath khusdh he . Me to ro hi padi update pad k maan geet ko akela kese chod sakta he plz next update me maan ki feelingsa show karo geet k liye aur sunny aur maan k relation ka raaz bhi kholo I hope next update me heart attack mat dena sunny ko maan ki GF bata k 'yuki maan aur geet ek dusrew k liye hi bane he aur maan sirf geet se pyaar karta ho uski cherry geet hi ho . Plz next update jitna jaldi ho do I can't wait yaar

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: uteem
abt geet
everyone are happy wid dere life

geet????????//

she deserve someone who trust nd love her from heart

patience is the only word i will suggest dear😊

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: cyum321

so confusing 😕

maan loves Cheriii, than maan also loves sunny and than he loves geet ?????

and why geet being so selfless She want all around her happy but about her???

i think there r different kinds of love in this world...and maan has very different take on all three...for Geet yes her nature is like that only...she thinks about others first...but u will have to wait. Geet willnot give in this easily.

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: honeygrape

😆 super like 👍🏼 , me too... humari maangee puri karo 😆

my God ...yahan to morcha bazzi ho rahi hai...me so🤢🤢🤢🤢

Even then i would suggest plz have patience

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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: manisha259

SORRY TO SAY,BUT U DISSAPPOINTED ME.THIS IS WHAT WE GET FOR OUR LONG WAIT N DEDICATION.TOTALLY DISHEARTENING.

I can totally understand ur POV dear...but can u tell me how is Geet supposed to fall in love with Maan on the sceond day of her marriage to him if she was already in love with someone else uptill now?