You'll Find Someone Else...[MG] up: part 5 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
brilliant update..
they are so cute...loved the update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
no way.. saparation itni choti umar me...😔

welcome back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53


aww judai bhi ho gayi dono ki...

what a question Maan asked from his mother---because os u granny's all hair become white...🤣

wonderful update...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Loved their cute friendship..
tumhe aur koi miljayegi!!!!
i hope not...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
finally thanks for the update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
part 4
awesome...
the kids are too naughty...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u include the update number too in the title?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Part 5..
Years passed, it's almost 9 yrs since geet left Pune. But still Maan wasn't able to find his someone else, or say he doesn't want to find someone else. He no more felt the need of any friend. After Geet left he engaged himself in extra curricular activities. Now a days he like to spend most of the time with his all time best friends that's his books. He gets isolated from the world while reading books, and here he goes'..

Maan aaj ke din to unnhe baksh de, result ke din bhi bhala koi sabere sabere padhta hai kya?

Maa main padhai nahi kar raha hoon, just GK ki book padh raha hoon'

itna bhi maat padh ki ek din aaisa aaye ki muze bacche raste pe dekh k Einstein ki maa, Einstein ki maa kar k bulaye'

hua??? Abh main padhu?.

Nahi' kabhi to normal baccho ki tarha behave kiya kar. Aaj tera SSC ka result hai, aur tu aaram se baitha hai, aare bahar jaa k dekh tere class k bacche kitne hairaan pareshan hai, aur tu???

maa please.. aap kya cahate ho. Main bhi tension loo? Par Q? muze mere mehanat pe pura bharosa hai. Aur agar wo sab bacche normal hai aur main abnormal hoon, to aap bhi normal nahi hoo, sab k parents bacchoon ko samjha rahe hai ki beeta tension maat le, par yaha to ulta hai'

chal wo sab chod. Kitne percent aayge?

Expectation to above 95 ki hai par above 90 pakka'..

Aur madhu ko kitne milenge.

pata nahi.

aur Pinky ko??

Maa main aapko kisi bhi angle se fortune teller dhikhta hoon kya? Muze kya pata unhe kitne milenge.

wo tere dost hai maan. Aur ye discussion to hua hi hoga ki kise kitne milenge.

maa hum itne bhi aache dost nahi hai, just kabhi kabar wo mere notes refer karte hai. Bas.

Aur kuch nahi'

aur wo ladkiyaan hai'

to? Ladkiyoon k result nahi lagte?

aaisa nahi hai' baat ye hai ki ladkiyoon ko kitna bhi aacha paper gaya ho, par exam hall ke bahar aate, ek hi sentence aata hai. " Paper kitna tough tha.. maine ye thoka wo thoka bla bla bla'" aur result aane pe out off. So ladkiyoon ko kuch na pucho wo hi aacha hai'.

Aacha wo chod. Chal taiyar hoja, 2:30 baje hai. 3 baje result laane jaana hai'

Waise main kya pehanu?

Kuch bhi pehano maa, waha beauty contest nahi hai'.

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OM NAMHA SHIVAY, OM NAMHA SHIVAY, OM NAMHA SHIVAY,

OM NAMHA SHIVAY, OM NAMHA SHIVAY, OM NAMHA SHIVAY.

ek din k bhakti se Mahadev prassana nahi hote beta. Uske liye pehale mehnat bhi karni padti hai. Aab jaisa paper likha hai, waisa hi result aayega na? Ye le dhai shakkar kha.

The girl ate a spoon of dhai-shakkar [curd and sugar]

Maa please disturb mat kijiye. Ye unke aur mere bich ka mamla hai. Hum dekh lenge.

The girl again turned towards the statue of Lord Shiva.

Please Shivji, iss bar help kar dena, above 80 na sahi, distinction dilva dena. Bas 1 aacha college mil jaye, eleventh main jitod mehanat karungi.. Aur waise bhi main aapke putra Ganeshji ki bahot aachi dost ho, to itni to help aap kar hi sakte hona??? Please'.

She kept a piece of paper at the foot of Lord Shiva.

Ye dekhiye. Iss pe maine aapne naam ke satha exam seat no. bhi likha hai. Hall ticket rakha hota par wo school leke jana hai, so iss info se kaam chala lena. Kuch jugad kardena please'

Geet, ye kya kar rahi ho?

[That's it. It's none other then our loving Geet. Let me tell some things about her. When she newly shifted to Mumbai, it was hard for her to adjust, she cried whole day missing Maan. But as days passed, she made new friends, and like her mother said she loved her new school, new place, new teachers, new friends, everything. And eventually she let her past be past and learned to live her life to fullest. She loved everything about Mumbai, than let it be the busy streets or the local traveling, the open sea or the tall buildings, the hot summer or the heavy rains, the chaupati bhel or Mc.D burger. Everything was just perfect for her.

Usually she preferred bright colored western outfits. But today the sun must have rised in the west, because like a good girl geet was simply dressed in salwar kamij, with hair neatly tied. Coz at any condition she had to convince Lord Shiva to do some jugad about her result. ]

MaatoShri hum aapse namra vinanti karte hai, krupa kar ke humare aur Shivji ke bich mat aana. Hume pata hai, hum kya kar rahe hai. Aap krupa karke taiyaar ho jayiye, hume guun patrika lane shigra hi prastan karna hoga. [Mom I humbly request you, not to interfere between me and Lord Shiva. I know what I m doing. Please you go and change we'll soon have to leave to bring the mark sheet.]

Aur haan' kuch aache vastra dharan karlena, humare ijjat ka sawal hai.

[And ya. wear something nice, its matter about my pride.]

haay ye ladki bhi na, pagal kar degi ek din. Hai Bhagwan, isse jara sadbudhi dena.

Maa'.. phele meri prayer to puri hojane deti fir aap maangleti'

Please Shivji, confuse maat hona pehele maine manga hai to 1st meri sunna aur fir mummy ki' please

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Maan confidently walked towards his school. Some students were already waiting outside. Tension was clearly visible on their face. Seeing their condition Maan became more confident. He waited with his mom near the school gate.

ja Maan aapne dosto k sath ruk..

Maa, unmese koi mere dost nahi hai'

kya? Itne sare bachoon main tera koi dost nahi hai'

aap hona'

Pinky gharse nikli ki nahi?

muze kya pata?

main bhi kise puch rahi hoon'

hey Maan'

soo saal umar ho tumhari' abhi main tumhe hi yaad kar rahi thi'

Kyu maa, Maan bore kar raha tha kya?

wo kabhi kuch karta hi kaha hai, kabse duum ki tarha mujhse chipke baitha hai, usse boli jara friends main jake baith, par nahi uss ka 1 bhi friend nahi hai'

Hum hai na'

hua? Samne dekho rankers k naam display karne wale hai'

dekhne ki kya jarurat hai? Muze puch.

1st- Maan Khurana

2nd ' Pinky Kapoor

3rd ' koi bhi ho sakta hai, shayad main'.

The names were displayed, and adi was right'

The list displayed

1st Maan Khurana 96%

2nd Pinky Kapoor 94%

3rd Aditya Shergil 93%

Adi and Maan were over joyed to see their names; they happily hugged each other and took blessings from Avantika'

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Maa please muze nahi jaan. Aap jao na; main idhar wait karungi..

chup chap mere sath chal.

Maa please'.

Hai Shivji.. madat karna, please please please'.

Geet got down in front of her school. Looking at everyone's tensed face her nervousness increased. She stopped on the spot and nervously scanned the school campus. Rano joined her and ordered her to walk fast.

Hey Geet, kitne milenge?

Aay Krish, chal bhag yahase...

Geet, dostoon se aaise baat karte hai kya?

maa, wo muze tension de raha tha'

to tum maat lona'

kya maat lo? Wo apne aap aa jata hai..

Aur agar mere baas main hota to tension ye shabad hi mita deti'..

tere dost kidar hai?

gharse to nikle hai. Bas aate hi hoge'

Ye lo, pooja aa gayi'

hi.. kaise lagra??

puch mat' aur tujhe??

kya kahu haye' kuch kuch hota hai'

Geet dramatically wiped her invisible tears.

kitne milenge?

Hopefully above 80 nahi to distinction to pakka hai' aur tujhe??

above 70 mile to bhi bas hai'

The rankers list was displayed. geet was more than happy to read it. It's not like it contend her name, it's just that below it was written 100% result. She happily ran towards Rano and gave her a bone crushing hug.

Geet; tera naam rankers list main hai?

nahi maa. Main pass hoon. School ka 100% result laga hai.

yani tujhe tu pass hogi ya nahi, yaha se doubt tha.

nahi maa.. chodo, tum kya samjhogi pass honeki khushi kya hoti hai.. 1 mark se fail huye bacche se pucho, kya hoti hai ye khushi'

chal bas kar teri nautanki, aur ja aur office se result collect kar

ji maa.. main yu gayi, aur yu aayi..
Geet happily ran inside.
That 5 minuets wait was like an eternity for Rano, her heart was pumping at full speed. She was hopefully looking at office door; that's when she saw geet happily running towards her.

dinka chika, dinka chika, dinka chika, dinka chika, a a a a, a a a aaa'

Geet happily jumped and danced around Rano. Forgetting the world around her, she expressed her happiness in form of her rowdy dance.

MAA'' 84%...

Rano's happiness had no bound.

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thats it..
hope you people like it..😳
n every1 do hit likes and do comment
it makes me feel on top of the world⭐️
m really upset with the previous response😔
n plz ignore the silly mistakes..
take care..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
wow nice concept do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
gud one...
did geet forget maan???
Loved her prayers and all...
maan s such a book worm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Mindblowing dear...
Maan and geet r two opposite poles...

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