Dhoka aur Bewafaii(Valenti. Spec. on Pg7) - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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u loser y didnt u tell me ur starting a fan fic... i would have read it..its a good thing i saw ur siggy
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Posted: 19 years ago
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are puji i just recently made my fanfic
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We see a grand mansion

We hear the prayer Om jai jagadi shuhare.

And two parents, 2 elderly people 1 guy, and a pandit sitting and praying. Yes, the parents are Mayank and Pallavi and the elderly people are Dida and Baujii.

P: are Angad aur Kavya kaha hai

M: are Kavya to already office chala gaya aur Angad bhai sabh sote hoge.

Then the camera zooms into a room in which an alarm clock rings and a young handsome man gets up. That's none other than Angad.

A: Shit, im late 4 the pooja. Moms gonna kill me.

He quickly runs to the bathroom and gets ready.

Then he runs down and sees his family doing the pooja.

He quietly slips behind his dad and starts singing with the rest if the family. And then suddenly he feels someone pulling his ear.

P: tumhe kya laga main tumhe dekhungi nahin.

A: Sorry, Mom. But I gotta go my friends are waiting for me.

He leaves and exits the house.

He hops on to his sports car and rides to his collage.

He reaches and sees his cousin Shlok, best friend Josh, and few other friends.

Shlok and Josh: heyy Angad

Angad: heyy guys

Josh: guess what a new babe has come to this college. Her sister also came but she looks like a behenji.

Angad: Guys, I don't care. Girls are after me im not after them. And then he just sits back in his car while his friends just talk about the new girl.

And then we see a petite girl wearing a black dress with a lot of make up. It's our very own Kripa.

She walks towards the guys.

Kripa: Hi, My name is kripa khanna. Im new here can you please tell me where the principal's office is cuz I need to find out about my schedule.

Suddenly, Angad turns behind to see who that girl is and he is amazed by her beauty.

Before the other guys can say anything Angad says: Hi, my name is Angad Nanda. I'll take you.

Kripa: thanks a lot.

Angad: You are welcome.

While they walk the whole college gazes at them and keeps on whispering, "They look so good together!"

The End 4 2day.

I'll introduce Kavya and Anjali later on or tomorrow.

so how was it ppl

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome! i cnt wait to read more! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was perfect! I luved it! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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heyyy!!...tht was really good!!..plzzz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx guys im gonna continue 2morrow cuz i have skewl
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Recap: We are introduced to Angad and his family all except Kavya. Kripa and Angad meet for the first time.

Today:

Angad and Kripa at college

Angad: so I have heard that you also have a sister.

Kripa: yeah, her name is Anjali. She is very shy but once you get to know her you truly understand her. I am very close to Anjali di.

Suddenly we see a girl in the library. She is wearing a salwar kameez and is reading a romantic novel by Nicholas Sparks. Suddenly, a gust of wind approaches from the window and that girl's hand comes to her face. It is Anjali.

Then we are back to Kripa and Angad.

Angad: Wow, I have the same exact relationship with my elder brother too Kavya. He is very quiet and works a lot at office with my dad.

Suddenly we see a guy reading a file. We can't see his face. Then he puts that file down and its cute Kavya.

Again, we are back to Angad and Kripa.

Kripa: Wow, we have a lot in common. They both just smile and walk together to their next class. While they are walking they both think about Kavya and Anjali.

Kripa: Angad, tumhe lagta hai ke Kavya aur Anjali ko ek dusre se milna chahiye.

Angad: Ummm Ha that is a great idea Kripa.

They both smile and enter the classroom. Angad sits with Josh and Manek and Kripa sits with her friends Harshini and Anita.

Josh: Angad, humhe lagta hai ke tum Kripa se pyaar karte ho.

Angad: No, really we are just good friends.

Manek: yeah, isliyeh tum har dusri ladki ko ignore karte ho.

Angad tried denying it but fails to.

Meanwhile Harshini and Anita notice Kripa staring at Angad.

Harshini: Kripa, tumhe lagta hai ke Angad mere liye theek hoga.

Kripa: Yeh tum kya kari ho.

Anita: Kripa tumhe kya problem hai

Kripa: Who actually um….ummm

Anita: hum sabh jante hai tum Angad se pyaar karti ho, rite

Kripa: No, well I am not sure.

Then the bell rings and its time to leave. Before leaving Angad and Kripa gaze at each other. Their friends just smile and laugh at them and leave them alone together. There is an awkward silence.

Angad: How about we go for coffee or a sundae to the nearby Barista.

Kripa: sure

They leave in Angad's sports car.

During the ride, Angad thinks: Did I start loving Kripa?

Kripa thinks: Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai. Kya main Anjali di ke books' ki characters ke tarah pyaar karne to nahin lagi na. Oh my God, I love Angad. I better tell him soon.

Angad thinks: I love you, Kripa. I am going to declare my feelings to you today for sure.

They reach Barista and order one Sundae and decide to share it.

When it comes, Angad tells Kripa that he needs to tell her something.

Angad nervously says: mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

Kripa curiously replies: Kya?

Angad: Umm well Kripa we have know each other for long enough o share this feeling.

Kripa starts getting all uncomfortable and thinks: Does he want to tell me we are only good friends.

Instead she replies: Um Yeah So.

Angad and Kripa at the same time: I Love You. Damn it.

They stare at each other in awe and amazement.

Kripa: OMG, I am so shocked and happy.

Angad couldn't say anything due to shock so just hugged Kripa tightly.

They both decided to introduce Kavya and Anjali at the college prom on Sunday. And by the way, yes Angad and Kripa are going together as a couple.

so how did u guys like 2days episode

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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
hey,
gr8 part pls cont soon as cant wait for long.
ruch
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwww that was so cute! Cont. soon!

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