OS KHUSHI'S STEAM ON ASR|LAST PART PAGE 13|

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Sakshi Kaul

@sushi-la

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

part 2 reaction:
hahahahahaha...i am still sitting here dying of laughter... her! anytime I am depressed or overwhelmed with uni work, i should seriously consider opening this OS time and again cuz it really makes me feel better... hahaha..i love you so much!! muah!

part 3 reaction:
from me to you-

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I would DIE of happiness if this happened!! muah!!

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

OOHHH EMMM GEEE!

In the first two chapters...I was absolutely in love with Khushi and the third chapter, Arnav completely took me by surprise...!!!

I woulddd be on cloud nine if this actually happened...like seriouslly! How do you manage to write soo wonderfully..and youre dialogues are just SPOT ON! I could completely imagine Arnav and Khushi saying thisss...WONDERFUL AMAZING SPECTACULAR MAGNIFICENT..AND COMPLETELY OUT OF THE WORLD =)!!!!

They both have their own wayysss in shutting the other up..LOOL!

Youreee an awesomeee writerrr 🤗 Thanksss for the PM =)

- Dee

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Labitha

@labi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Wow...u have made the situation both emotional and funny just like Arhi.

So they completed the adhure kiss...😍😳

second part was the funniest of all...khushi...one in a milion..letting out all the frustations in her own way

third part...it is arnav's turn now...eventhough his tubelight come to action after a pause ...he confronted well..even before acknowledging his feelings, he kissed her and then I love u kaha...aur wo bhi future plannings ke saath😳😍

well going yaar👏...continue and thanks for the pm.😃

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

That was absoloutely something dear!!!!!!!Apna Arnav can do this and much more with his Khushi.Lets see how much of those we can actually see on screen😉

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Oh my goodness...

Such an amazing update...👍🏼 👏

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shazeena

@angelic shaz

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

omggg wowww

dat was amazingg that one kiss said it alll

awesum wrkk

continue sooon

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

''You'll wear my ring, marry me, live with me in my
house and my room, make love to me, have my
kids, and grow old with me!''..go Arnie go!!! Awww i can't wait for Khushi's reaction!! 😳Plzz update soon!!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Now AR started to rattle on...love how Khushi influences him on all things life...

Pls update soon...want to see Nani's reaction to AR's "Steam on"!

-Sona

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Arnav's realization, confession and his possessiveness speech were AMAZING!!!! I LOVED IT!! wonderful, wonderful job on the os!!! When arnav mentions the occupation part in his speech.. i laughed soo hard!!! Thank you thank you thank you so much for the pm!! had a great time reading!!

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ketki_arshi

@ketki_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

simply superb, yaar, i m so breathless at the moment, its was as though happening in front of my eyes, well written god m so worked up at the moment , cant express how i m feeling at the moment ;;;;;;;;;;; too good

please pm me when u update