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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

very sad part. continue soon

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

lovely update...and sad one too...

the feelings of nupur you portrayed during song sequence was really amazing...

too beautifully you expressed them...

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

very nice update

bt sad update.

feel bad for nupur. actually i dnt like this kind of relation ... infatuation was okay...bt love ... a big no no.

par kya karen? aapne to mayank ko sir bana diya :(

ab mujhe bura bhi lag raha hai aur acha bhi :S

m so confuse :S

bt very well written.

plz do something k mayank iss teaching job hi chor de ... LOL

waiting for next update

continue soon

thanks ofr the pm.

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shria19

@shria19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Beautiful update ruchi:)

loved it

very well written

waiting for next part😃

continue soon

Edited by shria19 - 13 years ago

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

beautiful update di...

aww feeling bad 4 nupur..

u hv expressed everything so nicely hayeee

di 1 request don't end this ff so suddenly

we cn wait ..if u hv problems in giving regular update..

n yeah di plss don't give us a sad ending...

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

That ws beautiful ruch...
The whole song suited perfectly with nupur's unknown fear and her pain...And u portrayed all beautifully...
I thought it cud be an infatuation that will fade over times...But what nupur is feeling now is definitely love and im really not willing to see a heartbreak here...
It ws supposed to be a light story so plz dont make it a complicated sad one...Its a req..rest is ur wish...
But anyways loved it truly...
Cont soon...

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

awesome updt ruchi
you expressed nupur's feelings beautifully
cont soon
thanks for the pm

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

beautiful part Ruchi...
and i am saying again...end it they way u have thought it to be..pls...

loved it.. the teenage, immature thoughts r so beautifully defined by u.. the innocence lovly dear..