MG FF-Till Death Do Us Part - Thread 7 - Page 85

ritzy yaar di
love the update
superb maan love was like heaven on the earth

beautiful and a romantic update...

nice part di👏

It was the hottest part til nw.
Awesome.

Btw,i gues Maan's past might come to bring sum twist bt before dat ofcrse want more romance n passion,mayb in office? ; )

really very sorry for d late reply yaar...
finally d sari part n it was no less dan double wow...luved it...
arey so vegas k baad its tym for Goa...maan has become such a die hard romantic n he really planned dere HM with all d luv he has for his wifey...
" Meri Mishti mujhse kuch maange aur main na karoon….yeh kaise ho sakta hain…hmmm…bus tum hukum karti jao….main zindagi bhar ke liye tumhaara gulam hoon."...haye main marjawan maan ki in pyaari baaton p...
to finally wo din aa hi gaya jab maan apni mishti ko us ghayal kar dene wale andaaz mein dekna chahta hai...
d part where he requests her to wear it is so natural n sweet...
wow Ritz i can actually visualize d whole romantic setup n drown in la la land...totally mesmerising dear...
note ka kya kehna it was xtremely sweet n super romantic...just brilliant dear...
d whole part geet getting emotional till maan dhamkaoing her not to cry was sooo sweet...really really luved it...:-D
d dinner part was really romantic...
deir staring in each other's eyes for long was a real sweet n passionate moment n den wat went along was HOT...luved it...
d way u wrote d whole part hats off yaar...it was superb HOT n magical...luved d way maan said "Oh Mishti…since that party, you don't know how much I have fantasized about this" hehe...luved his payback finally bechare ki hasrat poori ho gai...lol...
baap re sach mein maan kitna soch k rakhta hai...luved him saying tum is kurte mein sexy lagogi...hehe...cute bit...
d last line is really beautiful yaar...
u r a lovely writer dear...n d way u describe everything is really amazing...hats off to u yaar for giving us such brilliant updates...luvya...n again sry for being late...