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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

😆😆😉😆😆😉😆😆😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

I follow proper american system of rating dear.

upper part bare - 12UA trnslates to 16+
lower part hazy - 18+
explicit lower part - mature adult (can't write so not even getting there)
don't know if you liked it or not...in my defence i gave pure emotional justification fot the scene😆😆


😆
i had seen one of ur updates in creative thread
n i didn't even believe it was u who
wrote tht part it was sooo ☺️
n seriously today am getting it all!!!!!!

n loved the part but cant sleep tonyt!!!!
ur workload reduced???
hows jeejs???

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Posted: 13 years ago
😉

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


😆
i had seen one of ur updates in creative thread
n i didn't even believe it was u who
wrote tht part it was sooo ☺️
n seriously today am getting it all!!!!!!

n loved the part but cant sleep tonyt!!!!
ur workload reduced???
hows jeejs???

i know which one you mean...I think I wrote couple but yes one of them was definately leaning towards mature adult - "did that make you feel good"
but see atleast I only write when story demands
well my sugeestion is read any jnawaz's or Reva's OS / FF, bilkul utar jayegi...they are our certified tragedy and emotional queens 😆. Pata nahi neend aayegi ki nahi but khumaar zaroor chala jayega😉
workload is beyond sanity. So I am revolting and taking a break.
He is doing good...btw kal humara 10yr anniv tha and we were just reminiscing abt our Vegas trip😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

i know which one you mean...I think I wrote couple but yes one of them was definately leaning towards mature adult - "did that make you feel good"

but see atleast I only write when story demands
well my sugeestion is read any jnawaz's or Reva's OS / FF, bilkul utar jayegi...they are our certified tragedy and emotional queens 😆. Pata nahi neend aayegi ki nahi but khumaar zaroor chala jayega😉
workload is beyond sanity. So I am revolting and taking a break.
He is doing good...btw kal humara 10yr anniv tha and we were just reminiscing abt our Vegas trip😉


u caught me...😳
ohh my... u dun knw how many butterflies were playing
kabaddi in my tummy tht day
i was blushing so much...bro came n wondered wht was with me
i meediately closed down da window n pretended to do sum typing
n later at nyt around 1 or 2 stayed up reading the updates☺️

yups they r on my pending list
abhi maanddy ke padhe..
she is purely lady Dilip Kumar...😆
me a tragic lover di...abhi xams hain agle saturday se..n am stuck reading a big FF
mein pakka fail!!!!!

n wow anni...bola kyun nahi? u hve stopped pming too!!!
N E WAYS guess am not tht late


😳
WOW U TOO IN DECEMBER...MY MUMMA PAPA'S ANNI WAS ON 4TH DEC...
lagta hain december is everyone's fav month to get married!!!!😆

wht all did u do yest??? umm vegas trip
yeah read ur note!!!
it must hve been quite depressing ryt!!!!
hows ur son?? waise uska naam nahi pata sholly




Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


u caught me...😳
ohh my... u dun knw how many butterflies were playing
kabaddi in my tummy tht day
i was blushing so much...bro came n wondered wht was with me
i meediately closed down da window n pretended to do sum typing
n later at nyt around 1 or 2 stayed up reading the updates☺️

yups they r on my pending list
abhi maanddy ke padhe..
she is purely lady Dilip Kumar...😆
me a tragic lover di...abhi xams hain agle saturday se..n am stuck reading a big FF
mein pakka fail!!!!!

n wow anni...bola kyun nahi? u hve stopped pming too!!!
N E WAYS guess am not tht late


😳
WOW U TOO IN DECEMBER...MY MUMMA PAPA'S ANNI WAS ON 4TH DEC...
lagta hain december is everyone's fav month to get married!!!!😆

wht all did u do yest??? umm vegas trip
yeah read ur note!!!
it must hve been quite depressing ryt!!!!
hows ur son?? waise uska naam nahi pata sholly




Thank you dear for the wishes. I had taken off yesterday but still ended up working 4 -5 hrs. But atleast managed a nice lunch and a small cake session in the evening.
When I went to Vegas I was quite depressed. But my hubby asked me to let this trip change us and we did lot of masti as well. It really helped me get over my depression and start my life again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was awesum
Loved their bond
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Posted: 13 years ago
O my god Di what a super hot passionate and romantic update
But for me this part highlighted maaneet's love and trust on each other
i mean first of all the place where maan wanted to take geet ususally girls r a bit shy to go to such places but Geet agreed this itself shows how much love she holds for him
and then her promise that i will do whatever u want me to do and the way she fulfilled maan's desire was amazing
i mean i personally felt more than the physical part their emotional bonding got strengthened by this update
maan did everything to make her comfortable and geet did everything to make him realize what importance does he hold for her in her life
totally mesmerizing and just out of this world
love u Di
urs Piggy (Piya)
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Posted: 13 years ago


oh my God what an honeymoon...and this part is just erotic,seductive, full of love and passion...

amazing, beautiful...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks a lot 4 this long and lovely update..
it's just beyond our comment...we just read it again and again...
the way u've ended their HM's ast day,just amazed...u always do ur best not to bore us..ur new ideas,efforts just make us crazy and excited 4 ur ff...
love u and ur ff most
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Posted: 13 years ago
sensuous dance.i wish i cud c it.too good.waiting 4 d next update
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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