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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear..thanks 4 da pm! Read ur note before ur update! So sad abt ur lost. It was romantic n passionate update! Maaneet's honeymoon! thanks 4 da detailed update n descriptions of LV. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ritzy šŸ¤—...thank u for the awesome update and PM...sorry u had to go thru all that pain,,,,,so sweet of your husband ...glad the magic of Vegas helped u recover...i live in LA...so we go often...but every time we come back i want to go again...that is Las Vegas...a truly magical land šŸ˜ ...loved all the pics u used ā¤ļø... the day 1 and 2 of the honeymoon were awwwesome 😳...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago

sry for d late comment yaar kal padh to liya tha but i was feeling really tired...sry again...
luved d update to d core...thanks for d beautiful vegas tour u took us through...sachchi with d pictures n your perfect description i actually felt lyk touring vegas...
luved d gondola ride n geet's shyness is damn beautiful n of course maan's naughtiness is really cute...
d morning part was funny n intense n den turned passionate of course...i sooo luv maan's naughtiness...hehe
oh i sooo luved d big shot i really wanna hv a ride there...
you brilliantly described deir feelings after having dat big shot ride...wid all d screaming n den giggling it really feels amazing n childish...u r superb at describing things...hats off...
sahi mein maan is getting naughtier each day...geet saying shes tired n wants to get back to hotel n hes shamelessly saying she'll not let him hv fun now n den night mein bhi...n den his utha k le jaoon was funny...hehehe...
maan's surprise was wow...maan saying " Last time I could not see it but I have heard a lot about this show.. Waise acha hi hua as I get to share this experience with you." was super sweet...
geet's reaction after watching such an enthralling show is written beautifully n its sooo true...luved it...
it was truly fabulous update...lovely but m super eager to know wat maan has planned wid dat sari...plz ab wo wala part jaldi milega kya?????
n hell who told u dat its getting boring???? m so damn loving deir each moment n wid ur amazing way of writing no update can get boring so pls pls don't cut on dese lovey dovey moments...
thanks for updating even in ur busy schedule...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it

thanks for the pictures
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey ff is goin grt.
Cum on v need maaneet moments n maaneet need hot,passionate n detailed hm. So dnt rush
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow update
read it twice an even liked it twice cancellin my count
fab update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Note- Please Add Ritzypm to get PMs for this FF

Ok, I guess I deserved it. My likes have gone down and not even 10 pages of comments.

But hey, thanks a lot to all of those who have stayed with me on this journey. My schedule hopefully will get a tiny bit better and I should get back to updating 3 updates a week.

Warning – 16ish type

Chapter 105 – Day 3

16th March, 6:30 AM

Maan drove the rental spider (It is my most favorite convertible) to a private helipad. Geet was amazed at how well he had planned their honeymoon. She remembered how much she had whined when Maan had woken her up at 4:30 in the morning.

But Maan was Maan, he took her to washroom and helped her in getting ready, pushing her to be out of the door by 5:30.

--flashback—

Geet –"Maan…please yeh aadhi raat ko kyon utha rahe ho….sone do na mujhe."

Saying this she just hugged him tighter and snuggled into him. She frowned little bit when instead of his skin, she felt herself rubbing his shirt.

Maan smiled – "Jaan…wapis aake so jaana…lekin abhi humein kahi jaana hai"

Geet just shook her head – "mujhe nahi jaana….mujhe yahi rehna hai aapki bahon mein"

Maan stifled a groan as she rubbed her legs sensuously on his. Though he had made love to her few hours before but he had a tough time controlling his arousal. Without any further talk, he just took her in his arms and went to bathroom…giving her a quick shower. That woke her up but her complaints had not stopped till she had seen the car.

She smiled as she remembered her expression after seeing the red color car. It was quite a beauty and any sleep remaining in her eyes had instantaneously fled. Maan had taken her out for a spin on the highway all the while keeping mum about the destination.

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--Flashback ends--

Maan took her to the pad where a helicopter waited for them. Geet's eyes popped out as they flew some distance and finally beautiful tapestry of Grand Canyon laid in front of her. They excitedly marveled at the hues of pink, brown, peach cliffs and gorges covering the land. As Sun rose, they drank the beauty of a truly magnificent natural masterpiece changing its color with the sunrise.

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They returned at the Hotel after lunch. Maan asked her what she wanted to do but Geet just dragged her to the room.

Maan jested – "Kya baat hai someone is in a hurry…hmmm"

Geet was feeling very emotional after seeing Grand Canyon. She just wanted to shower all her love at the man who made not only her dreams but beyond them a reality. She wanted to say thanks to him and for once decided to be bold. She turned around to face him "Haan…bahut jaldi hai"

Maan gave her a questioning look not understanding her intentions. He was worried when she dropped into the bed and covered herself entirely with spread.

Maan – "kya hua jaan…yeh kya kar rahi ho tum"

His jaw dropped as she took out her dress and threw it outside the spread. He stood frozen as her inner garments soon joined the dress on the floor. She pulled her head out of the spread and laid on the bed with her hair fanning the pillow. Sheet covered her naked form till her underarms.

Geet spoke boldly – "Aaj bed mein aane ka naya rule hai….no clothes"

Maan smiled amazed at her mischief. He nodded naughtily – "Hmmm…ok"

Saying this he removed all his clothes standing in front of her. Suddenly she felt shy seeing him standing in front of her entirely naked. She averted her gaze and gasped when he tugged and removed the spread from her. Blush crept her cheeks as he gazed her with raw passion. Her body heated under his intense molten eyes. She gulped her saliva as she saw him hardening right there just by making love to her with his eyes.

Finally he bent grabbing her toes and kissed her leg going towards her secret lips. She was already wet by the time he reached her and lapped at her juices. She writhed and moaned as he thrust his tongue inside her. Her entire body shook with orgasm as he tasted her inner core.

He then moved upwards loosing himself on her upper curves. Nibbling, sucking and biting her, covering her with her own flavor. He entered her as his hands grabbed her scalp and his lips crushed hers. Geet had raised so much fervor into him that he loved her with frenzy. He thrust her hard and deep making her arch her head back as he filled her with himself.

9:00 PM

They were having a gala time, playing cards and gambling at craps table. Geet was very excited as she had won some money though she had lost quite as well. Maan smiled seeing her child like antics as she shifted from one table to another. She was enchanted by different kind of slot machines and tugged Maan to various seats, playing and having so much fun. At the end, Maan took her to roulette table and asked her to pick a number. Geet sighed – "Nahi Maan….bas bahut ho gaya hai…hum kabse gamble kar rahe hain"

Maan shook his head – "Nahin…bas ek baar…bolo na kaunsa number…you are my lady luck"

Geet – "kahe ka lady luck…abhi to kitna hare hain…phir se haar jaienge hum"

Maan nuzzled her hair with his nose – "I can never loose with you Jaan…You are all I need to win in life forever"

Geet made a baby face after hearing his words but could not refuse him any further. She picked up 19 as that was the day of Maan's birthday. Her eyes popped out as Maan placed 500 dollars on the number.

Wheel spun and they waited with abated breath. Geet could not believe in shock when the ball stopped. She shrieked in joy and hugged him tight as others played clapped in their happiness. She was still in state of disbelief as Maan collected the massive payout and left the casino grinning.

11:00 PM

After an exhilarating walk under Freemont street experience Maan had brought her back to Paris Hotel which had a 1/3 replica of Eifel tower. Geet had been excited to see all the light and images flashing on the glass roof of a long tunnel in Freemont. When she thought, it can't get better, Maan took her up the lift at Paris hotel to a breathtaking view atop Eifel. In front laid Bellagio Hotel with it's fountains changing colors as romantic classic music floated around. From her side, she could see the entire Strip with lights twinkling like jewels of myriad of colors. They stood for a long time feeling the romance in the breeze tickling their senses. Geet had a thoroughly exciting day. She put her head on his shoulder reflecting on the day which stared with Grand Canyon, their afternoon in bed together, winning at roulette and finally now standing so high looking at the bejeweled scenery in front of her.

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Precap – Honeymoon Day 4
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
yippie me 1st me 1st!!!!
wow di wonderful update
really romantic...
me went totally isshhhā˜ŗļø
maan is such a caring hubby
haiyeee...šŸ˜
agla update kab milega???
Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that's just great..awesome,,,,just speechless ...so lovely...their love 4 each other made me just cry...
yaap////really happy 4 getting more updates...cont soon..

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