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Posted: 13 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Zee awesome update once again...
Loved it..
Pls continue soon...
Thanx for pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
ha ha dadi was going to the outhouse but vicky stopped her
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago


aww geet blushing

geet soon in passionate kiss




super hit update


this for yu



craving more





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Posted: 13 years ago
UpDaTiNggg!!!! i know ..i know i disappeared Have been so busy with college. But i am really really happy today and so will try to update this today 😳. But there has also been another reason why i haven't updated. For a couple of days i have been thinking about ending this FF now. And then maybe i will come back with a season 2. I don't know as of yet...but what do you galz think?
Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye...am i dreaming...rubbing my eyes...somebody pinch me plz...
Zee updating...!!
Hayye babaji...
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Posted: 13 years ago

I know i know!!!! i deserve ur chappals and ur galiyas for disappearing like thin air...but stupid college has made me so so busy. thank u for waiting😳. I especially did my best to update today because after hearing that i won the GHSP OS CONTEST, which many of my own readers voted for me really made my day. I was on cloud 9 the whole day 😳. Thank you ...thank you to everyone who voted for me🤗. i might post my two OS's which won for other's to read as well if they didn't get the chance. But for now hope u enjoy the update.😳





Part: 57

Unexpected
Maan and geet were busy cuddling in each other's embrace.
Geet: Maan we should get up now.
" Nahi! I want to stay here with you" he says nibbling against her ear.
Geet let's out a giggle, but then Maan takes in her lips.
" I didn't know you were so shararati", she naughtily whispers into his mouth.
" Koi shikayat?" he huskily retorts back.
Geet pushes him to the side and this time she was on top of him sitting on his abdomen as her legs wrapped around his limb.
"Khabi nahi" she murmurs slowly approaching his lips seductively.
Just when the monster in Maan was about to make his move, they both hear, " Maan beta!".
Maan and Geet both jolt up in shock and Geet accidently loses her balance and falls on to the floor.
Maan helps her up, "Sorry. Are you okay?".
" Dusht! Danav!!! You pushed me off you!!!" she says with her eyes popping out in anger.
Maan: I didn't mean to! Daadi is coming!
Instantly in Geet fear replaced the anger.
Geet: What are we going to do Daadi is coming up. Oh babaji if she finds us together . . .".
Then there was a knock on the door, and again they hear, " Maan beta".
Geet was about to scream in fear, but Maan closes her mouth with the palm of his hand.
"Geet go hide in the bathroom," he whispers to her.
Geet nodes her head and goes.
Then there was another knock. " One second" he blurts out.
Maan puts his boxers then pants on and fixes his composer before opening on the bedroom door.
" Good morning Daa. . . " Maan was about to say but becomes shocked to see who was in front of him.
"Maan beta" Vicky mimics Daadi's voice once more before bursting out laughing!
"VICKY" he almost sneers in anger.
" Do you know what time it is!!! When do you both want to come out!" he says bursting out laughing again.
He knew he was in for it and he starts to run and Maan screams, " You think this is funny. I will show you funny", he says chasing after him.
Vicky runs to the living room jumping over the sofa and then heads over to the kitchen and starts to run in circles around the kitchen counter!
" Bro why r u shirtless. . .you never sleep shirtless" He says between his laughs.
"Vicky Shut up!!!!" He gets the jug of water and splashes it all over him.
Vicky was going to fight back but then his eyes fall to the side and he freezes. Maan follows his gaze and he also looks on in shock.
"I pity your wives," she says laughing and shaking her head to the side.
Nakul set the breakfast up while I go and bring down Geet.
Maan heart almost skipped a beat as he thought, " Oh shit! Geet is still in my bathroom!".
Daadi looks over to Vicky and Maan, " Maan go freshen up and put on a shirt as well as give Vicky a shirt"!
Maan: Okay I will. You stay here don't trouble yourself by going upstairs. I will call Geet down. She is getting ready as well.
Daadi: No no no! I am not listening or waiting anymore and walking up the stairs is good exercise. So don't worry about me.
They all go up the stairs and Vicky whispers for only Maan to hear, " Where is Geet hiding bro?"
Maan gives him the glare and he shuts up.
Daadi: Maan why are you following me. I am going to Geet's room. Your room is the other way. Hurry up and freshen up so we can eat.
" Jii daadima" he says hesitantly.
Maan and Vicky both head over to the bedroom. Maan tells Vicky to go pick a shirt for himself from the closet.
"You sure, what if geet is in there" he says with a grin.
Maan: She is not in there! Now please SHUT UP!
Vicky says, "okay okay" shaking his head and goes inside the closet.
As soon as Vicky goes inside Maan goes to the bathroom door and starts to whisper, " Geet. Geet are you in there? Geet why aren't you answering me?"
"Gee" he wasn't even able to finish saying her name as his eyes falls on the person standing outside his bedroom door.
" Oh excuse me. I didn't mean to disturb your moment with. . .ummm your door" Geet says laughing and gives a high five to Daadi.
He had forgotten how to breathe for a second getting lost in the sexy red salwar kamiz she was wearing as well as her musical laugh.
" I don't know what has gotten into my grandsons this morning", Daadi says laughing.
" Chal let's go and eat" daadi says turning around and heading down stairs.
Geet gives him a wink before heading out.
" wait wait . . .Geet!" but she doesn't turn back around.
"She is teasing me now. Dekhenge!" he says with a sly smirk.
Maan: But when did she even leave the bathroom?
" Your welcome!" Vicky says coming out of the closet.
Maan: your welcome?

Vicky: yeah! For saving your butt! Or else daadi would have come here first instead of me and you two would still have been dancing to " Yeh . . .Yeh lazy lazy lamhe ! lazy lamhe!" he says chuckling but makes a run for it seeing the anger in his eyes.
" Not one. Not two . . .but three! All of them making fun of the Great MSK! Kya din agaya hai babaji", Maan shakes his head and goes and freshens up!

Pre-cap:

last part of this FF...i think.

Was thinking that i would do another 40 parts, but i have changed my mind. I might just come back with a season 2 though.


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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update
vicky is very naughty
poor maan
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Zee, u have addressed Vicky as Dev in Dadima's some of the dialogues.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Hey Zee, u have addressed Vicky as Dev in Dadima's some of the dialogues.


omg i did!!! woops 😆

this is what happens when a person doesn't sleep *sigh* 😆

hope u liked the update though 😳

as i saw u were waiting for it!

nobody is saying anything about how i am ending it...r u happy or sad?

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