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Posted: 13 years ago
just wanted to say ... beautifully written sweety... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome one, loved it. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update...
eagerly waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow maan and geet cant keep their hands off 😉😊
oh my my where is dadi going now 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing yaar
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahem ahem ... wat a hot hot update☺️... loved it zee... awesome... just loved the lovey dovey moments b/w maaneet...😍 dadi was going to wake maaneet up😲... thank god vicky was there to save the moment... i hope so he saved it😕
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

Hi zee

once again me first

coming to the update
it was as usual awesome

loved the way u continues from the
previous update


geet kissing maan's forehead

when he was asleep
but MSK was awake

and this made geet blush

maan teasing geet
again that she has become shy queen again

but soon she gets lost
in maan's passion

and both become one again
and also ignoring

MR sun who was
wondering what purpose is he
serving

Dadi knowing about
vickey and meera was surprise
to vickey


dadi decided to go to outhouse
and call maaneet for breakfast

but vickey knowing that
maaneet r spending their
time privately

so tells dadi that
he would wake them up

precap is awesome
loved it

geet is hiding and maan openiing the
room for vickey


continue soon
loved it

cant wait for the next part



Hayyyee i am so flattered!😳
luved r awesome comment🤗
yes i decided to give a continuation from the night before 😉
hahahah yes poor Mr.Sun was all confused 🤣
yes Vicky is just awesome 😳
sending a *tight hug*
luv ya my SHeila 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


hi zee mindblowing update once again like last one

really like the continuation from last update geet in maan arms
wah gudmrng kiss osum
geet again becoming shy cute
maan ka teasing session shuru naughty boy
"If you wanted a kiss you could of taken my lips. . . I thought at least after your seducing act last night your shyness wouldn't come between us anymore ? I miss the Miss Seductress but you are back to being Miss Blushing Queen. Khair. . . maybe I should of played angry more. " he says showing her his sexy smirk.
geet ka fake anger wit maan words
nice and romantic dilogs by maan
"I am still not done sleeping, I don't care if the sun has come out",
"The morning will have to wait a little longer. Do you understand what I am saying Geet"
geet melt in maan passion was so romantic
" Have I told you how beautiful you are?"
" have I told you how good you taste?" she says before taking in his lower lip.
daadi knowing viky meera
and viky reaction
nice and funny dilog
Vicky: Oh sorry about that daadi. I slept late last night.
Daadi: hmmm mujhe pata hai meera ki saat thi.
dadi going to wake up love birds nooo viky reaction
as usual always ur precap excellent tahn post
pre-cap:

Geet hiding and Maan opening the bedroom door for . . . (DOT Dot Dot) 😉
thanks for lovely update


hayyye thank u sailu for such a lovely 🤗
yes this update was not as naughty as the previous one but still naughty 😉
maaneet can't get enough of each other.😳
thank u jaani. will continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oh god!ab kya hoga?

daadi toh bina situation jaane outhouse aa rahi hain..
chal vicky act soon..


hmmm good question.

guess u will have to wait and find out

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