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Chapter-43




Are you for real...??...was all sneha asked in reply. She was totally flabbergasted to even think anything else. She was actually standing in front of The Geet handa, the sole hier of handa empire...!!...and to top it all she was apologising to her for not disclosing her identity, is she JOKING...??


Sneha, I am really sorry yaar...geet pleaded again not realising what sneha just spoke...please don't get angry...!!


Sneha rolled her eyes at geet's continuous chatter and not listening to her response...geet, its okay...I...


I know you are angry, but I swear I didn't mean to upset you...geet cut her in middle and continued. Finally understanding that geet was no where listening, sneha took a deep breath and shouted...


SHUT UP...!!


Her voice was loud enough to put an end to geet's long list of sorry. She stopped and looked at sneha who was standing there with a smile rather a grin...


My my...I never knew I was friends with the geet handa...sneha chuckled. Geet felt a little embarrased at her comment and gave a shy smile...


So, you are not angry at me...??...she asked blinking her eyes hopefully.


Sneha shook her head at geet's innocence and embraced her in a friendly hug...of course not geet...!!...In fact I am lucky to have such a wonderful person like you as my friend, who has a heart of gold...!!...sneha broke apart and added...You are a very beautiful person, geet and your surname doesn't affect you is an icing on the cake...!!


Geet was delighted to hear sneha would be just an understatement after seeing the big smile on her face and the way she jumped on her engulfing her in warm bear hug...


Oh, I am so happy...you are awesome sneha...saying so she parted and dragged sneha alongwith her...lets go inside...!!


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Sam dialed some number and waited for the person to pick...


He...hello...came a very nervous adi's voice.


Where are you...??...sam asked in a stern voice.


Uh, ahem...he cleared his throat clearly showing his nervousness...woh, actually maan left a bit early today so...


I asked where are YOU...??...she came straight to the point.


In office...he replied meekly knowing well she would be boiling by now. But it is not his fault now, is it...??...he asked himself and gathered some courage and instantly added...but what can I do when maan left the responsibility with me...??


Great, then be there and fulfill your "responsibilities"...sam spat sarcastically and disconnected the call angrily.


Sam...??...sam listen yaar...sam...adi tried calling her again, but no use, her phone was switched off...DAMN...!!...he rubbed his forehead relaxing himself and thought aloud...saale maan, khud toh apni love story set karne mein laga hai aur meri band baja raha hai...and got back to complete his work fast so that he could reach there as soon as possible and of course thinking of ways to pataofy his hell angry girlfriend.


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Hey guys meet my new friend...sneha and sneha they are all my friends...geet said and introduced sneha to meera, pari, nt, yash and sam. Nt and pari had came fr the party specially taking two days holidays from their studies.


Sneha was damn nervous seeing all the glitters and pomp and show. She has never attended any such lavish party and being amidst such big and well known personalities, she was finding it very awkward. But when geet introduced her with her friends they seemed as friendly to her as geet. None had even slightest of ego or superiority feeling though she knew they must be the children of similar families.


Soon she became friendly with them all as if she knew them from a long time. What amused her most was that geet had friends of all types and from all soughts of family background. All were different and yet they were such good friends and she knew geet made friends not on the basis of their family background, status or IQ...they were her friends bcoz they were special to her and she was highly elated to know that now she was one of friends...!!


So, sneha you work in khurana constructions...??...nt asked just to start a conversation with sneha.


Yes, I am MD's secretary...she replied with a smile.


Now, all the friends were amused and pari commented mischieviously...


Oh ho...!!...good going geet...maan ki secretary ko hi friend bana liya...not bad...and winked at her while others laughed at geet's red face, except sneha who was standing totally confused.


She was about to ask them about this when suddenly naina came to them...


Arey aunty...geet smiled brightly and brought sneha in front...meet my friend, sneha...!!


Sneha bent down and touched naina's feet greeting her. Naina smiled at her lovingly and blessed her...


Bless you beta...!!


You know aunty, sneha too works in KC...geet added after their introduction.


Really, that very good...naina said and asked sneha...so you are also a trainee there...??


No aunty, I am working as MD's secretary for past two years...sneha politely replied.


Achcha...!!...naina was surprised at this piece of information...but I never saw you with raj, strange...??...before anyone could answer she remembered something and instantly said...so, so you are the sneha raj always talks about...her tone was full of surprise and pleasure as she continued...raj always praises you a lot...!!


Thank you aunty...sneha replied unsurely not understanding how this lovely woman was refering her boss so casually. Geet saw the confusion on sneha's face and thought about disclosing her relations with the knuranas, when raj himself approached them.


Naina, I was looking for you from so long...where were you, darling...??...he said placing his arms around naina lovingly not noticing sneha and others. But all did noticed them and most importantly sneha who was totally shocked o see her boss sharing some romantic words with a lady.


She was geting shock after shock. And this was the biggest one till, well atleast she thought so...!!






She kept gaping at the duo. Geet and others giggled seeing raj being all romantic with naina while she was feeling very embarrased with his PDA and elbowed him whispering...


Behave yourself raj...!!


He was about to continue his lovey-dovey talks with his wife, when the giggles of the kids drew his attention. He looked towards them and was amused to see all of them there.


Oh, so all the shaitaans are here, huh...he said with a smirk...vaise manna parega, you have done a fantastic job. The party is really awesome...!!


Everyone smile wholeheartedly with his praisings and geet hugged him joyfully...


Thank you so much, boyfriend...!!


BOYFRIEND...!!...now sneha was on the verge of fainting. Listening to her friend calling her boss boyfriend was nothing more than a zor ka jhatka.


You deserve it, girlfriend...raj patted her head affectionately and looked at others and thats when his eyes fell on sneha...


Arey sneha...??...what a pleasant surprise...raj smiled. Sneha smiled a bit awkwardly not knowing what to say, when geet interrupted them...


Boyfriend, sneha is my friend now...!!


Wah, thats very good. Nice to see you here beta...he said in a soft voice and turned to naina...darling, see she is the girl I used to talk about. She is a very hard working and sincere girl...!!


I know raj. I have already met her...naina replied with a smile.


Oh really, so sneha you have met my beautiful wife...raj said and asked with a cheeky grin...so what say, wasn't I correct...??


This time for once others were confused while sneha knew what he was talking about.


FLASHBACK...


While working raj received a call from naina and for a moment was lost in her thoughts with a dreamy look on his face after talking to her. Sneha was right there in front of him and laughed seeing his expression. Her laughter brought him out of his thoughts and looked at her with stern expression, but himself broke into laughter the next moment.


I am sorry sir...sneha apologised for laughing at him.


Oh come on sneha, you don't have to do that. I know anyone would laugh in this situation...he said giving her an assuring smile and then continued with a cheeky smile...but its not my fault that I have such a gorgeous lady as my wife that I can't stop romancing her even in my daydreams...!!


Sneha again laughed hearing his statement. She was actually amused seeing this side of his boss, but one thing was sure that he loves his wife a lot...!!


FLASHBACK ENDS...


Sneha still remembered that conversation with him and now, she can see why he was so much in love with his wife. She is for sure very beautiful and a loving woman.


Sneha smiled at his question and replied...yes sir, you were absolutely...!!


What are you guys talking about...??...naina asked raising her brows to which raj smiled charmingly and replied...


Nothing jaan, by the way you are looking gorgeous...and pecked her cheeks with all his love. The whole gang hooted at this making naina go red with shyness while raj grinned unaffected.


Raj, you are becoming shameless with age...naina admonished raj and was about to walk away when raj held her hand and replied in his same flirtatious tone...you are talking about age, abhi toh hum jawan hain, jaan...!!


Naina shook her head and walked away with an angry as well as slight blush look on her face.


Uncle, now I know from where did khurana sons got the famous flirting skills...yash asked naughtily.


Raj twisted yash's ear and replied...don't you dare compare my love for my wife to your useless flirt friend...he chided him.


Aaahhh...sorry uncle...sorry...please leave my ear...yash pleaded and raj released him saying...you better be...!!


Why are you punishing yash for saying the truth...??...mohinder came to them with rano and naina as naina met them in the mid way.


Mohinder, you too...raj asked surprised.


Arey, sach hi toh keh raha hai. After all your flirting skills has only won bhabhi, kyun bhabhi...??...he teased both raj and naina.


Tu bhi na...raj dismissed him shaking his head.


Really uncle, raj uncle was also a flirt like dev and vicky...nt asked this time while others look equally curious.


Oh yes, he was the famous flirt of our college...mohinder said while raj scratched his head cutely out of embarrasment making others laugh.


But, I wonder why didn't maan inherited this quality. He is such a bore...sam said while all laughed at her comment except geet. She was engrossed in thought...you don't know sam di, what a devil he is...??...and recalled all the time he flirted with her.


Yes, I have never seen him flirting with anyone. Infact not even looking at any girl in that way exce...


Nt stepped on yash's legs with her heals to quieten him before he could blabber geet's name. Yash gave an accusing glare to nt rubbing his legs which nt returned in full intensity making him understand his mistake.


Before anyone could blurt out their little secret nt instantly diverted their attention...


By the way, geet, won't you introduce sneha to your parents...??...she asked geet, who bit her tongue recognising her mistake and happily introduced her...


Papaji, mama, meet my friend sneha...geet said and added...we work together in KC...!!


That is wonderful, beta...mohinder replied and blessed sneha. Sneha was feeling a bit awkward in presenting the owner of Handa company a small bouquet. But geet solved her problem by grabbing the bouquet from her hands...


Mama, see sneha has brought such a beautiful bouquet for you and you know, she has made it with her own hands...geet chirped in joy. Rano happily accepted the bouquet and said...


Thank you so much, beta. Its beautiful...!!


Yes sneha, raj told me about your qualities, but I never knew you are so talented...naina added with a smile.


Sneha was overwhelmed with all the love and affection being showered on her. She never knew such people even existed. They were so down to earth even after being at the zenith of prosperity.


They dispersed and enjoyed in their respective groups. By now almost everyone had arrived, but maan and adi were no where in sight and both their lady love were fuming in anger.


Just then adi entered the hall with a big bouquet in his hands and a sweet smile on his face. After wishing mohinder and rano he moved towards the gang and gave one of his sweetest smile to sam, who simply returned a fake smile and then ignored him.


Adi gulped seeing her so much angry and thought...oh god, what should I do now...??


Seeing the cold war between sam and adi, geet went near adi and whispered in his ears...don't stand here uselessly. Go and try to talk to her. Di ko attention pasand her, make her feel special stupid...!!


Adi smiled at geet's innocent yet intelligent words and hugged her thankingly...


You are the sweetest, geet...!!


I know...geet replied raising her invisible collar and laugh. She again glanced at the door in the hope that maan would be here, but not finding him she got upset. Adi saw the small transition of expressions on geet's face, when she looked at the door and frowned thinking...why is she looking at the door...??...maan toh bahut pehle hi office se nikal gaya tha...!!


Uh geet, where is maan...??...adi asked to confirm his doubts.


Why are you asking me...??...you are coming from office na...??...she questioned in return.


Yes dear, but maan has left office much before than me. I thought he came here only...adi replied.


Geet got more angry after hearing this...


What...??


Yes...adi saw sam moving towards the kitchen and thought it to be the right time to pataofy her...uh geet, I'll see you later...saying so he moved towards the kitchen.


This is the limit...!!...geet thought angrily...ek toh subah mood kharab kar ke chale gaye and now, when he should have come to me and atleast try to please me, he is busy somewhere else...!!


She was busy cursing maan, when vicky tapped her shoulders. Thinking it to be maan, she turned around and blasted...Oh so you got time to show your face...!!


Whoa...!!...chill doll...!!...why are you always ready to kill me, what have I done...??...he said dramatically much to geet's annoyance.


She looked at vicky with a scared look on his face and took a deep breath controlling her anger, when vicky again spoke...waise geet, bhai is still not here...??


Oops...!!...wrong question...the thought hit him hard as he saw her expressions turning murderous. Vicky suddenly changed his tone and added...I mean, this is just not done. I am telling you he is taking you for granted, now...he said trying to put up an innocent and speculative face. Geet gave him a sharpglare and went towards sneha, who was chatting with her other friends.


Geet, achcha hua tum aa gayi. I'll have to leave, now...sneha said on seeing geet.


But itni jaldi. Atleast khana toh kha kar jao...geet said totally upset with her leaving.


Nahi geet, I have to hurry. Papa is not well and I have to be there...she looked at her and added...tune itne pyaar se bulaya tha isliye aa gayi, but I can't stay for long...!!


Geet saw the genuineness in her voice and agreed reluctantly...


Okay fine. But my driver will drop you and no argumaents on that...geet said with finality.


Sneha nodded...


Thank you for the lovely evening, geet. I made good friends and got a chance to meet such wonderful people...it was the best evening in my life till date...she said with a big smile and went after bidding goodbye to everyone. Here, vicky was stop by raj, who was looking for dev and maan to which he replied...


Dad, dev bhai will be coming any moment and I don't know anything about maan bhai...!!


Hmm, okay. If maan comes, when dev comes tell him to meet me...!!


Sure dad...!!


After answering raj, vicky moved towards the gang and asked...


Hey guys...where is geet...??


She has went to see off her new friend, but where were you this whole time...??...pari asked sipping her juice.


Oh, woh mohinder uncle had given me some work, bas wohi karne gaya tha. By the way, who is this new friend of geet...??...he asked casually.


Sneha, and I have already warn you to stay away from her. So don't bother...came geet's voice from behind.


Common yaar, geet. Tune mujhse nahi milwaya, main use kha thori jata...he replied cheekily and received a whack on his arm.


Shut up...!!


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Maan finally reached HM about anhour late for the party and he knew his little princess must be boiling by this time. But he is maan singh khurana and no one can scare him and definitely not when he knows how to melt that person.


In his usual style maan entered the mansion and glance every corner for that one person he wish to see every second of his life. And there she was, standing and chatting with her friends. His eyes wandered from her head to toe on their own accord and thoroughly appreciated what they saw. She was looking no less than a royal princess, which she was...!!


Without making her aware of his presence, he quietly went to mohinder and rano and wished them and then moved towards hia target.


Soon the light of the hall dimmed and the dj changed the music to a romantic song and invited all the couples on the dance floor. Even the though the lights were dim, he could easily spot her for she was the only one his eyes required to see...!!


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Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq..





He was under the spell of her enchanting beauty and their divine love. The love, which he took almost a decade to understand. The feeling which had inculcated in his heart almost ten years back were now crystal clear in front of his eyes. It was LOVE. It always was. Just that he was in ignorance, but now, no more and he'll make sure their love get the justice.


He wonder how stupid he was to take so much time in understanding this feeling which has resided in him from the time she was placed in his lap by rano aunty. That tiny angel whom he vowed to protect and keep happy forever from that very moment has now grown into a beautiful pari...his mishty...!!




Girta sa jharna
Hai ishq koi
Uthta sa kalmaa
Hai ishq koi
Saanson mein liptaa
Hai ishq koi
Aankhon mein dikhta
Hai ishq..





Her captivating beauty was like a pure waterfull, devoid of any impurity. She is the purest thing on earth, the loveliest girl in the world and his life...!!


One incident, one mistake he committed in childhood had kept him away from his mishty for more than three years and then the long separation of six years. It was all taking a toll on him and right now, he just wish to steal her away from everyone and shower with so much love that there won't be any trace of loneliness or longingness in them...!!


The separation has removed every doubt from his mind of the feeling they share is not love. He knows that he was, is and will be in love with only his geet...!!



Mere dil ko...
Tu jaan se juda kar de





Maan walked towards her as if in trance. His eyes savouring her impeccable beauty. She was wearing a beautiful gown, blue in colour with exqusite crystal pattern adorning the neckline. It was covering her one shoulder with a strap while the other was left bare to flaunt the flawless milky skin. Maan felt a sudden urge to taste her shiny skin like he was a thirsty animal and she a reservoir of nector...!!




Yoon bas tu..
Mujhko fanaa kar de






He was totally blown away by her. A moth ready to burn in the flame of love emerging from his lover...!!



Mera haal tu
Meri chaal tu
Bas kar de aashiqana





All her friends went to the dance floor. Only meera and geet stood there watching everyone dance. Geet was feeling very lonely and this romantic number was adding to her longingness. How she wished maan to be there and dance with her. A sweet smile crept up lips at the very thought, which didn't get unnoticed by maan. As if her smile was infectious, maan too started smiling.


Suddenly meera received a pager from hospital and had to rush back leaving geet alone.


Geet saw her friends...nt with yash, pari with some guy, sam di with adi and vicky with few girls...dancing enjoying the rhythm of love and pouted at her bad luck...!!


Babaji, please maan ko jaldi bhej do na. Mujhe bhi unke sath dance karna hai...she prayed making a baby face. As if maan heard her thoughts, he encircled her waist from behind and whispered in her ears...


Why are you disturbing your babaji when I am at your service my princess...his voice was damn husky and it tickled geet's every senses. All her anger vanished with his touch. His one touch sent butterflies in her stomach and she instantly turned around...!!


Maan...aap...



He placed his finger on her lips and silenced her...


Sshh...don't waste time in talks...he held his hand out and asked...shall we...??





Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana





Geet kepther hand in his with a sweet smile and a light in her eyes. They reached the dance floor and soon the music engulfed them in its magic. The whole ambiance was radiating of their love...!!





Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana






They danced matching every step like their soul was in rhythm. Geet kept her head on his chest near his heart and he engulfed her in his arms shielding her from every other being in the whole surrounding. Everything else faded away and only the two remained. Geet, maan and their heavenly love...!!




Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq..


Ishq..
Ishq..
Ishq..
Ishq..
Ishq..
Ishq..





He closed his eyes feeling contented having his princess in his arms. It felt so right like it was the way it has to be. He opened his eyes and saw her leaning on him. A smile formed on his lips seeing her in such a serene posture. But right now, he had to disturb her peace to give her a more peaceful and cherishable night.


He smirked thinking about the surprise he planned for her and separated from her...




Sochoon tujhe
Toh hai subah
Sochoon tujhe
Toh shaam hai






Geet frowned feeling the loos of warmth and security and opened her eyes to see maan looking at her intently...


Maan, what happened...??


I want to show you something, mishty...he said in a soft voice.


What...??...I don't want to go anywhere right now, please...she made a puppy face which could melt even the hardest rock and maan was already molten in front of her.


I don't want todeny you mishty, but the dance can wait for now...with that said, maan dragged her alongwith him.




Ho..
Manzilon pe
Ab toh meri..
Ek hi tera naam hai





Soon they reached the terrace of KM. Geet was totally confused as to why maan has brought her here. She tried to ask him several times but he didn't speak a word.


Maan why are we here...??...geet asked for the umpteenth time and turned to find herself standing alone on the dark terrace.


Maan...maan where are you...??...she called him and suddenly started getting a bit scare...maan, please come out where are you...??


Suddenly, the whole area got lightened and what geet saw totally left her speechless...!!




Tere aag mein hi jalke
Koyale se hira banke
Khwaabon se aage chalke
Hai tujhe batana





The whole terrace was decorated with beautiful lights and flowers, all geet's favourite. There were numerous bouquets with lovely cards written I Love you all over. But the most endearing part was her several potraits and sketches which were made by maan himself and framed beautifully to give it a magical touch. To say she was ecstatic was an understatement...!!


Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana





And then maan appeared from behind and whispered in ear in the most romantic and passionate voice ever...I LOVE YOU...MISHTY...!!




Tere waaste..
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana



For a second geet thought she was dreaming and closed her eyes. Those three magical words which she had so long waited to hear were finally ringing in her ears. If it is a dream she never wish to wake up.


Maan embraced her in his arms and said in a husky tone answering her thought...its not a dream sweet heart. Open your eyes and see the reality of our love.


Geet opened her eyes and looked at him with her eyes glistening with unshed tears.


Hey mishty, I didn't confessed to make you cry...maan complained and wiped her tears with his fingers...I love you and that is the biggest truth of my life...!!...he said and kissed her cheeks lovingly.




Saath saath chalte chalte
Haath choot jayenge
Aisi raahon mein milo naa
Baatein baatein karte karte
Raat kat jaayegi
Aisi raaton mein milo naa





They remained in that position for a long time grasping the beautiful moment of their lives. Etching it in their memory forever. Their whole life flashed in front of their eyes like a film. Their awesome childhood, their sweet friendship, their unbreakable bond, maan's feelings for her, the mishap, their fight, their one on ones, geet's feelings for him, her confession, their separation and now finally maan's confession and their love...!!


They felt they could spent their whole life cherishing their love story, every moment they spent together was special.



Kya hum hain
kya Rab hai
Jahaan tu hai
Wahin sab hai





Maan slowly turned geet around and brought his lips very close hers and whispered...I am sorry for troubling you, mishty. I just wanted to surprise you...he waited for her to respond. In response she simply smiled and kissed his cheeks saying...I love you...!!


I love you more...he said and placed his lips on hers in a soft kiss, in a gesture to show his love and care. Geet felt her body jolted at touch. It was after wholesix years he has touched her like this. But thistime maan wanted to give her the pleasure of a real kiss. His kiss became intense slowly and soon he started sucking it like relishing some juicy fruit. Geet closed her eyes feeling the lovely sensation her whole body was experiencing. Her hands automatically reached his nape and started caressing his thick mane.


They kissed like they were kissing for the first and the last time. He started demanding an entry in her mouth, which was something new and she didn't understood his deman. He lightly bit her lower lip to make her gasp and taking advantage of the partially opened mouth, his tongue invaded her mouth.


His tongue started creating a havoc inside her mouth, tasting every crevices of it not leaving a single inch. Soon their tongue started playing their own game as geet involuntarily participated and their soft kiss turned to a soul searching smooch...!!





Tere lab mile
Mere lab khile
Ab door kya hai jaana





They kissed like there was no tomorrow. Maan brought her more close by tightening his grip around her waist, almost crashing her into him while she rejoiced on being in his arms...!!




Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana





Finally feeling out of breath, they parted reluctantly and looked into others eyes to find immense love and happiness.




Rab ki qawali
Hai ishq koi
Dil ki Diwali
Hai ishq koi
Mehki si pyaali
Hai ishq koi
Subah ki laali
Hai ishq..





He was a satisfied mantoday like his long search was finished. He has found the most precious gem of his life and become the most richest and happiest man on earth...!!


Mere dil ko'
Tu jaan se juda kar de
Yoon bas tu..
Mujhko fanaa kar de
Mera haal tu
Meri chaal tu
Bas kar de aashiqana






There was nothing more satisfying than having his love in his arms, so close to his heart. He was at peace...finally...!!



Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana

Tere waaste
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana
Mera ishq sufiyana





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Edited by shining_moon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r

edited.

Loved it... will wait for the next part of the update...
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part.
Loved it...

Adi, Sam, Vicky, Sneha all were too good...

Khurana and Handa family heads are total bindas...lol


Yes...yes...yes...Maan said those words...wow...and kiss...muaaahhh...super amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye marjawa. khurana's flirt mystry is solved.😆
sneha and vicky will be nice pair..😃
bechara adi.
as usual i loved the update. and waiting for next..😃
Edited by mannu1988 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want meera and dev I so wanted them both in the show but didn't happen
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Anu,

Loved how Geet was blabbering & Sneha had to shout to put a break on it.

"Sneha got all zor ka Jhatkas, Zor se" thoroughly enjoyed the interaction of all friends with Sneha & her meeting her boss, umm the previous MD.

Again, it's Vicky who has to face all the wrath of Miss Handa instead of Mr. Khurana.😆 Poor chap will die of fear one day.

Sneha is sweetheart who is so sincere with friends.

One day, Vicky will be dead with by Geet's hand due to his GF problems & in Sneha's case, Geet is very serious to let Vicky even try.

Hmm, I am seriously thinking now about Meera-Dev encounter & Sneha knowing about Maaneet as both of them left before Khurana bros enter the party.

Ahaan, finally MSK style confession occured. Idea of confession was sweet & unique just like MSK's should be. Both were enjoying their lovely times together & just hope that Geet's Granddad stays out of it with any wish to disrupt when families unite them officially.

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
update kar do baki ke parts...🥱...🥱
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear.. Loved it.. Waiting to read more..😊
Are you planning something between Vicky and Sneha??😉
Loved Maan' s confession.. 😳
Edited by --Dia-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb
are you still updating
Edited by chandpooj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update yaar...👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
atlast Maan expressed jis immense love for Geet...
the setup for the surprise, awesome use of his paintings...👏👏
also the song added more romantic effect...😳😳😍
haaye, Maan atlast said it...🥳
Geet ki khushi to fuli nahi samai yaar...
it came out as tears...😭😃😉
n the kiss was defo blissful...😍
😍😍😍😍
lovely update...👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
thnkx a lot for such an amazing update...👏👏👏
continue soon... 😊😊😊
wud be waiting...
😍😍😍😍😍
I guess ab ghar waalonko bhi pata chalna chahiye...😉😉😉
whatsay?????😊😊😊😊
Edited by Tammana_Maaneet - 13 years ago

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