D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY-THREAD 1 COMPLETED !!! - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: mssg

hiey its awesome plzzz do pm me next time


hey i had PMed u i guess...!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CHAPTER-3

SATURDAY NIGHT

Kria: hello! Hi wassup rey!

Rey: hello baatcutter kya kr rhi thi?

Kria: kuch nhi bas kal ke bare mein soch rhi thi !!!

Rey: yeah! Kal its gonna be an adventurous and the most memorable day! BTW do u believe in ghosts nd everything?

Kria: m-main? N-nai nai M-main bhut pret mein nhi manti. Tum mante ho?

Rey: N-nai nai. I don't believe in all this. After all it does not suit my image!!! To kal ka kya plan hai?

Kria: Plan! Mtlb?

Rey: actually main soch rha tha ki hum dono ek saath chale? I mean shud I pick u up?

Kria: Pick up! (thinks) Yeah yeah !! wy not? To hum sb saath mein chalenge!!!

Rey: Yeah!!!!

Kria: Main Vicky ko bta deti hun ki hum sb kal ek sath ja rahe hain vha!

Rey: Kya? Vicky?

Kria: Yeah! Tum hi to abhi abhi puch rhe the na ki if I nd Vicky wnt 2 go 2 dat mansion wid u?

Rey: oh! Yeah yeah'To fine bta dena Vicky ko (trying 2 b calm ) Chalo I ll talk 2 u later'.buhbi!!!

Kria: bi'!!!!

REY'S HOUSE

Ye saala Vicky meri aur Kria ki luv story ke beech mein kha se tapak gya..Kabab ki haddi ban gya hai'.uss idiot ko kisne Kria ka bhai banaya!!!!!!

SUNDAY

THE DAY ARRIVES!!!

Sharon: taxi! Taxi! Are ye taxi kyu nhi ruk rhi hai? OMG!!! Aise to main vha pr pahunch hi nhi paungi!!!! ( she starts worrying)

Swayam: (horn horn)

Sharon: tum!!!!! I thot ki tum abhi tk nikal chuke hoge'.!!!!!

Swyam: Uh! Are main vo soch rha tha ki ek baar dekhta jaun ki tum nikli ya nhi! Do u wnt lift?

Sharon: Swayam it was so kind of u..!!!! main to tension mein aa gyi thi

Swayam: ab sharmana bnd kro aur batho gadi mein

Sharon: oh yeah!!!

PRECAP: evry grup is in the cargoing to the house. Vicky interfering in kriyansh luv story. Swaron r getting closer. Nilesh rap'..!!!!!!!

Sory guys bhot choti update thi'. I promise kal vali lambi hogi nd kal ki update ke baad haunted luv story shuru ho jayegi!!!! Pls comment yar if u like it sirf like krke mt chod dena plsss!!!!! Secn vala I gues zyada logon ne like hi nai kia'.!!!! Nd guys main bar bar keh rhi hun agar PM chahie to get added 2 my PM list'.!!!!! Fir gussa mt hona if I don't PM u..!!!!

By ash nd bhavika!!!!!!

Edited by sanya502 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
hey its awesome update n its really hatke story u r writing... like it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: crazysky

hey its awesome update n its really hatke story u r writing... like it...


THNX CHETNA...DATS UR NAME...RITE????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
ash chota tha 😭
but still super duper like!!!👍🏼
keep updating such rocking parts!!!😆
n thnxx 4 d pm!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: swaron24

ash chota tha 😭

but still super duper like!!!👍🏼
keep updating such rocking parts!!!😆
n thnxx 4 d pm!!!😃


thnx re joker...!!!! aur main kal dusra prt bhi kr dungi post...fikar mt kro...!!!!! u r d 1st swaron fan till now 2 like it!!!! thnxxx😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sanya502


thnx re joker...!!!! aur main kal dusra prt bhi kr dungi post...fikar mt kro...!!!!! u r d 1st swaron fan till now 2 like it!!!! thnxxx😊

ur parts r so attracting dat dey pull me like a magnet!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: swaron24

ur parts r so attracting dat dey pull me like a magnet!!😆


oh...thnk u sooo much re...i dint no ki main itna acha likhti hu vaise bhavika ko bhi thoda credit dedo vrna jb vo ayegi na yha pr aur dekhegi ki sirf mujhe credit mil rha hai she'll kill me..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: sanya502


oh...thnk u sooo much re...i dint no ki main itna acha likhti hu vaise bhavika ko bhi thoda credit dedo vrna jb vo ayegi na yha pr aur dekhegi ki sirf mujhe credit mil rha hai she'll kill me..!!!!

ofcourse yara BHAVIKA is doing a grt job!! i like it very much!!!
🤗jhappi🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
ash ur story is shaping up so nicely..!!! Awesum gal..!!! Pls pm me the next time...!!!

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