D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY-THREAD 1 COMPLETED !!!

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D3-A HAUNTED LOVE STORY


Hey guys'dis is my 1st FF'.hope u all wil like it'.!!!!

It has been written by me nd my bst frnd bhavika(bhavikaD3)

So here it goes:-

Neha, rey, nilesh, vishakha, bharat nd rene belong to the DAZZLINGS

Vicky, Kria, Sharon, Simi, Swayaym nd Amar r WEAKLINGS

Neha is a spoilt galwith attitude. Rey is hr bst frnd.Neha nd vishakha r also vry gud frnds.( Neha is nt at all filmy)

Rey has a Casanova image in d college bt 4m inside he is CHABILAL.Has a crush on kria nd always tries 2 avoid fights between d 2 grups

Nilesh is d rapper of d grup.Rene is his GF.

Rene is Ms.Idiot'!!!!!

Bharat's father owns a car showroom. Cool dude of d college

Vicky is a sincere filmy boy wid a boy nxt door image. He nd kria r brother sisters.He is vry possessive abt Kria.Has a crush on neha

Kria as v all no is Ms.baatcutter'.!!!!! a pretty nd gorgeous gal.Loves hr brother a lot.Likes 2 talk

Sharon is although a weakling but a gal wid vry gud personality. Smart. Possesive 4 hr team, cant hear a wrd against dem

Simi is a smart gal.Amar is her boyfrnd

Swayam is cute sweet smart nd intelligent.

Planning to propose Sharon

Amar- the totla boy'Simi is his galfrnd

Weaklings nd dazzlings used 2 hav fights bt now all of dem r vry gud frnds. They r planning 2 go on a vacation.They somehow land in a haunted house.So my whole story is abt deir visit 2 d haunted house

CHAPTER-1

6 months earlier

Neha 'the diva enters wid vishakha nd rene following hr.She is luking hot.Vicky is looking at hr (luk luk hawa hawa ) Den suddenly Nilesh enters

Nilesh- Give me d beat guys-

Dekho dekho aa rha hai ek weakling gawar

Naam hai uska Vicky chamar

Samajhta hai vo apne ap ko ShahRukhKhan

Par asal mein vo lagta hai like villan of Lagaan (sory, aur koi rhyme nai mil rha tha)

Hai uska crush in Neha the diva

Krta hai vo buy uske lie kapre 4m biba

Neha nai deti hai usko bhao

Bcoz vo realy vry pakao

So dear Vicky u pls go 2 hell

Or v wil definitely throw u in a well'!!!!

( rap by me(ash), bhavika nd tejasvini(r frnd))

Kria- oye! Apki himmat kaise hui mere brood( means brother) ke bare mein aisa kehane ki

Nilesh- So wat do u expct ! hum kya use Hritik Roshan bulae??

Rey- jst cut d crab guys! Band kro ye ladai jhagra

Neha- yeah guys'.vaise bhi in losere se baat krne mein mujhe koi interest nai hai'.chlo lets go!!!

SO guys dat ws all, their present situation will b shown in d nxt chaptere

Pls hit the like button nd comment if u likd d FF nd snd me a frnd request if u wantd 2 b added 2 d PM list

Initiative by ash nd bhavika


PART 2 - PG 5

PART 3 - PG 9

PART 4 - PG 14

PART 5 # 1 - PG 21

PART 5 # 2 - PG 30

PART 5 # 3 - PG 33

PART 6 PROMO - PG 37

PART 6 - PG 38

PART 7 PROMO - PG 45

PART 7 - PG 50

PART 8 - PG 59

PART 9 - PG 64

PART 10 - PG 72

PART 11 - PG 84

PART 12 - PG 99

LINK TO THE NEW THREAD https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56146869�

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-Aicha- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys! I love this! :) Thanks for the pm!

LOL I LOVE the rap, it was SOO Nilesh! Good job guys! =D And I can totally imagine the characters saying these lines. LOL

HAHAHA. Neha is the diva? Not filmy at all? That's hilarious! =P Can't wait for more. LOL. Vicky = filmy. YESSS. I love you guys for that xD

I like your story, keep pming me, and continue soon!:)

Sneha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow really zara hatke...
pm me plz wen u update next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Aicha-

Hey guys! I love this! :) Thanks for the pm!


LOL I LOVE the rap, it was SOO Nilesh! Good job guys! =D And I can totally imagine the characters saying these lines. LOL

HAHAHA. Neha is the diva? Not filmy at all? That's hilarious! =P Can't wait for more. LOL. Vicky = filmy. YESSS. I love you guys for that xD

I like your story, keep pming me, and continue soon!:)

Sneha


thnk u sooo much...!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW...this is good...!!! i like the idea very much...!!!

and the rap was totally coolll...and i also love how u have changed the characters...!!!

please do continue...and PM me when u do..!!!!

-Saumya
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Originally posted by: dildostiidancee

WOW...this is good...!!! i like the idea very much...!!!


and the rap was totally coolll...and i also love how u have changed the characters...!!!

please do continue...and PM me when u do..!!!!

-Saumya


yeah yeah! dfinitely i wil PM u...mst probably nxt chap wud b posted by bhavika
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooow awsm awsum awsum awsuma wsum awsum awsum awsum awsum awsum awsum!!!


loveeed it!! vicky -kria's bro!! 😆 loved tat!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hii its nice plz continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it was awesome...PM me...nd continue soon...
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plzzz continue and pm me wen u update it !!!!

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