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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

Great update.
very nicely writtn..luvd khushi-Payal n khushi-Arnav convo..it ws very touchin..lik d way u protray der emotions..eagrly waitin 4 nxt prt.

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slgirl

@slgirl

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

I am just loving this story..actually I was reading this on my mobile whist travelling and as a result of this..now I am having headache 😡

great update...poor Kushi and yes Arnav is paying his price...

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

okay. i sighed in relief! SOME GOODNESS IS STILL LEFT!!! aaahhh!!!

i think i was the last thing that came out of Pandora's Box! hahha!

anyways, on with the review.

hmmm. wow. khushi's affected real bad. and arnav. i dont FULLY sympathize with him, because at least he knows where he stands. but khushi. she's hanging from a thin thread like a dainty pearl. she has no idea what to do. i hope the fog in her life clears up soon. she's in a horrible situation. :(

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

loved it awesum

thankx for pm continue soon

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

omggg wat a intense update... 🥺
u literally brought tears in my eyes with khushi's outburst and the reply which arnav gave was 😭😭 😭he can clearly see wat damage he has done to his khushi with his cruel words in past... cant wait to see wat happens next..
thanks for pm buddy 😊

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bhavnah

@bhavnah

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

wonderful update...

fnx 4 z pm

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

good on khushi. glad arnav is feeling the damage he has done though. well written. i feel it is time to see what arnav has to get khushi to forgive him. glad khushi made it clear how worthless arnav made her feel. poor khushi

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