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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updtaes

loved it..:)
cant see their plight..
hope he gets to meet HIS mistimia..and HER puchki soon

cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
You made my day with the beautiful updates. Thanks Muskan. When can we expect the next ones?

Jaya
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update... its interesting how in those 10 days they spent so much time together but never really saw each other's face...wierd...but can they not sense each other though!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely ! I wonder how will they find themselves !
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Posted: 13 years ago
ye bechaini, ye ehsaas, main anjaan joon in jazbaaton se,
tujhe dekhne ki ye chah, bheed me bhi ye akelapan,
kya karoon ke iss dil ko sukoon aaye?
kyu saari duniya pheeki si lagne lagi hai?
sab kuch to hai wahi, bas ek tu hi hai nahin...
sab log yahan hi hain, par ab tu kyun mere jahan si hai?
kya tu bhi mujhe yaad karti hai?
kya hamari wo shaitaniyaan teri yaadon ko bhi dhundhala karti hain?
kya aaj,kya kal main phir tujhe mil paunga?
kya mera bujha sa ye dil phir se khil paega?
na naam jaana na chehra, phir aisa kya tha maine jaana,
kyun anjaan hokar bhi bas tu hi ab lage pehchaana?
teri wo hasi mere ghar, mere kamre, mere kaano, mere dil me goonjti hai,
teri har ek baat ab mere zehen me ghooma karti hai.
aisa kya hua hai? kya jaadoo kiya hai?
kyun ab main sirf teri puchki, aur iss dil ke liye tu meri mistimia hai?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
She had been going to office at her regular shift. After the college. She wished she could meet her puchki.. like he coming over to office for something.. but then.. wat could she expect from him.. wo aisen hi hain.. she knows him. He won't change for anything or anyone.. mast mula types.. just the thought of him.. brought a smile on her face.

Wonder how she has been managing every thing like this for a year now.. staying alone..college.. work above all that doing grt in studies..
armaan was really worried for her.. especially after the accident.. she seemed to be more busy than usual
armaan ' Geet this superwomen routine is going to land u up in the mental hospital one day. At least take a break .. lets go home for this semester break
she rolled her eyes nahi yaar abhi tho go live type situation hain.. this break I will working long hours.
Armaan ' tujhe ho kya gaya hain
Geet ' kyun kya huwa.. mujhe?
I am so dam enjoying my life.. every thing is so perfect.. my studies.. my job.. every thing is going the way I wanted it to go
armaan ' nahi tu phelen jaisen enjoy nahi karthi
she laughed.. actually u r missing our drinking session..
he was not sure was it just that!!!
Geet ' nahi yaar after that incident I don't feel like drinking
armaan ' I don't think its just that
Geet ' yah right.. actually I don't trust to drink with u anymore
that definitely hurt.. he looked at her painfully for a moment & looked away
Geet ' common I was just kidding
waisen bhi tera kya barosa.. phir chalelen jayega uss school girl ke pechen

OH ..man that was another thing bothering armaan.
Ridhima.. she has been calling him mailing him.. & sending him cute cute cards.. all signals..
Geet ' why don't u talk to her
armaan ' pagal hain kya she is in school.. she is just a kid
Geet ' not anymore. She just finished her 12th.. & I guess she is joining some college
medical college
he offered
Geet ' wow kya luck hain yaar.. aunty tho khush hojaegi.. dr bahu
armaan snapped angrily.. stop it Geet. Its nothing like that.
Geet ' waisen she is coming over to stay with me for few days
armaan ' r u nuts?
Geet ' tu tho kuch karta nahi.. I thought main hi help kardo
he covered his frustration..
& walked out yelling.. slamming the door behind
why don't u get it .. I am not interested in her.

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Maan had found a good vent out in prachi.. she was the best distraction.. from his non stop lost mind.. atleast prachi's doubts & question on the subject made him concentrate on something..
he would suddenly snap out of his lost status & clear her doubts.. he spend the whole last semester with her in the library.. just because he didn't want to go back to the room that haunted him.. that room was filled with her giggle, moan.. calling out puchki ..puchki ..puchki..
ye bechaini, ye ehsaas, main anjaan joon in jazbaaton se,
tujhe dekhne ki ye chah, bheed me bhi ye akelapan,
kya karoon ke iss dil ko sukoon aaye?
kyu saari duniya pheeki si lagne lagi hai?
sab kuch to hai wahi, bas ek tu hi hai nahin...
sab log yahan hi hain, par ab tu kyun mere jahan si hai?
kya tu bhi mujhe yaad karti hai?
kya hamari wo shaitaniyaan teri yaadon ko bhi dhundhala karti hain?
kya aaj,kya kal main phir tujhe mil paunga?
kya mera bujha sa ye dil phir se khil paega?
na naam jaana na chehra, phir aisa kya tha maine jaana,
kyun anjaan hokar bhi bas tu hi ab lage pehchaana?
teri wo hasi mere ghar, mere kamre, mere kaano, mere dil me goonjti hai,
teri har ek baat ab mere zehen me ghooma karti hai.
aisa kya hua hai? kya jaadoo kiya hai?
kyun ab main sirf teri puchki, aur iss dil ke liye tu meri mistimia hai?

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swati

he smashed the mirror of his washroom.. thinking wat was he doing with mistimia.. all this while..wat is wrong with him.. who is she after all..
he just was shocked with wat happened when pinky kind of understood may be he doesn't know her name & searching for her.. & so she tried to help him by asking how does she look..
he was lost.. he didn't even know how she looked.. he couldn't define how she sounded.. nor could he say how were her features.. why didn't he pay attention to any of those.. it didn't matter then.. actually doesn't matter even now.. he brushed his fingers through his hair..

all he knew she is sweet.. definitely cute he chuckled.. she laughed at his silly jokes.. he could easily tease her.. & she too loved getting teased by him.. best she teased him cutely & get caught in her own trick.. how she fumbled.. glaring at him.. but all that doesn't define a person.. does it???!!!
he washed his face with cold water couple of times.. so wat if I have not seen her face.. I will any time recognize her if she comes infront of me.
He walked out of the washroom patting his face
After all she is mistimia.. main tu uski ahat ko bhi phechan sakta hoon. h ewas so dam sure abt that ironically..He smiled .. seeing her dhundlae sa aks on his bed.. cuddled up
he warned her.. I will not spare u this time.. mistimia..
he could just imagine her reaction... little horrified.. little naughty.. little excited & little anticipation..
oh mistimia.. he fell on the bed.. cuddling puchki..
ek tho mera pillow le gayen upper se .. milthi bhi nahi...
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prachi - armaan where having a jam @ geets place
prachi couldn't stop talking abt Maan.
Geet ' sachi yaar he is such a gentle man
prachi ' u won't believe he talks so politely..
OMG ..he has so much of patience. Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aata tho.. he explains it again & again.. & again
Geet eyes were twinkling listening abt this perfect guy her frd talks abt all the time... armaan was least interested he was in his own world of dreading ridhima's arrival.
Prachi ' pata hain he doesn't have any bad habbit
armaan ' he is definitely ling
prachi retorted ' nahi yaar.. he is with me in the library most of the time.. then we even talk at night..
I have never seen him smoke
..
armaan ' drink karta hoga paki baat hain
prachi ' nahi I don't think so.. if he did he would definitely tell me
armaan ' phir Gfs hongi
prachi ' nahi yaar .. bilkul bhi nahi
college main tho sarin girls ussen respect karti hain. & u know wat he plans to join top IT company.. like Wipro ..Infosys.. wo tho abhi se prepare kar raha hain
armaan made all kind of faces.. he is just perfect for u.. tum log shaadi kab kar rahen ho?
prachi blushed - r u crazy.. its not like that between us
Geet still couldn't believe such person could exist.. hain.. so dreamy na..
prachi blushed.. sweetly .. & continued with her Maan puran
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Maan didn't deliberately gave so much of his time to this dhundlae se aks in his life.. but some how she seemed to eat up whole of his mind.. all the time.. he didn't mind it either, it only made him feel lighter . But a wired loneliness lingered all the while.. lucky for him raj was back on vacation. but strangely he didn't have much to share other than cribbing abt an irritating jr in his college.
They both got drunk &.. Maan sat their drunk...looking at the glass & grinning
raj ' wat is wrong with u?
Tu glass ko dehke haasn kyun raha hain

he smiled more
just then his phone rang.. his eyes widen in terror.. & said..shoo.. he shook his head & sincerely said hello
prachi ' hi Maan
Maan ' hi
prachi felt odd.. like something was wrong ' where r u?
He mumbled ' frd ke saat
prachi ' why r u sounding so odd
he shook his head ' I am with raj my frd.. I will call u back
prachi ' ek min.. why do u sound odd..
like.. u r drunk
Maan immediately cut the call. Oye veer.. ussen pata chal gayen ki mainne pe rahki hain
he went in the wash room.. washed his face quickly & called back.. in a very normal tone.. haan prachi bolo.. wo andar reception teehk nahi tha
prachi sighed in relief.. seriously I though u were drunk or something.
He just smiled.. didn't want to deny it.. but didn't want to accept it either..they had their cute little good night chat

after the call .. raj asked him.. why did u lie to her
Maan ' nahi I didn't
raj ' u didn't tell her the truth either
Maan ' thodi alag type ki hain.. orthodox type
raj lifted his brows.. tu uske saat kya kar raha hain..
by now raj knew .. it was just a superfical frdship.. but why was he maintain such relation.. when he needs someone who could be his soul mate.
Maan ' just a frd yaar
raj ' tu aisen dost kabse banane laga
Maan sadly ' jab se tere paas mere liyen time nahi raha
raj hugged him.. sorry yaar..
Maan ' I really miss u
Maan picked his jacket & got ready to leave..
raj ' Maan yaar ur drunk
Maan ' nahi yaar sab utter gayen
he smirked & fished his pocket for the keys.


He managed to take out his keys & get into his car. His place was not that far from rajs .. it was not that late either.. he drew through the highway.. suddenly he saw someone asking for lift. He saw some guy dressed in white & white..
he stopped & brought if window down
driver ' sir humari car break down hogayen hain
just then Geet came from behind ' could u plz drop me till the taxi or auto ' she couldn't complete the sentence when she saw him. She immediately looked away ..
driver looked at him & then Geet

Maan got pissed off at her attitude.. he removed the seat belt & got out.. at once ' wat the hell is ur problem? Kis baat ka itna attiude dihka rahi ho?
Ek tho u stop my car in the middle of no where & show me this god sicken attitude
Geet snapped back ' galti go gayen.. get lost now
nahi chaiyen tumhari lift..
driver muffled his laughter & looked down .. but he knows Maan singh khuranas temper.. he prefered to shut his mouth.. the reason why he asked him for lift..because he recognised him & his car.. but he didn't know abt the tiff between them..
luck or bad luck Maan didn't know him..as companies driver..
Maan's temper had no limit being insulted like this infront of a driver.. he held her arm ferociously.. chollogi tho tum meren saat hi..
he dragged her harshly & threw her inside the car. She struggled & came out instantly... he pushed her down & fastened the seat belt around her.. & slammed the door shut.. & locked it.. before she could get out he came around & sat behind the wheel.. by then she managed to open the seat belt & opened the door. He held her wrist & pulled her back in & started the car.. driver was looking at them in shock.. fighting like small kids..

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Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
As always it was an awesome update...

Loved the update...

maan and Geet trying to find something else to concentrate on !!!!! Pagal hain dono... atleast they should have asked their name... poori time flirting and painting mein waste kiya 😉

My favorite was maan trying to find out about mistimia and breaking the mirror in the bathroom...
And i loved this line "ek tho mera pillow legayen hain.. aur milti bhi nahi"... awesome yaar

Prachi and her maan puran... uff... she actually believes that he is such a good guy 😆

Again they meet in exactly the wrong time... wrong circumstances...

thanks for the update... me off for commenting on the next update

@Swati - the poem was brilliant.. so apt and beautifully written
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome update... continue soon...
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG"!!!
Di please tell me ur not leaving us at the point..
waiting to see the precapp x

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