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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Muski...for updating for us once again
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow u updating again
so awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...😃.
wow u r updating again di.
me waiting😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow u r updating again...
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Posted: 13 years ago
u r the best
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muskaan just completed reading the last few parts, read some on wordpress and some here and absolutely loved and enjoyed it.
I wonder how Maan is gonna recognize Geet, will they meet at last, I'm just waiting for them to know each others identity but I guess that may not happen so soon 😕
Muskaan loved it, can you please PM me the updates so I don't miss them 😛
BTW I've started reading all your old FF's again, just finished Khamoshi and now re-reading Truly Magical 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
He went back in dressed up nicely.. when he came out & looked at the bed.. kaisen lag raha hoon??
he could remember her saying nice combination..
he blushed & took puchki in his arms..
he remembered her crying .. thats my puchki..
tumhe dena aaraha hoon.. he spoke to her dhundlae sa aks.
He excitedly reached office.. the receptionist now knew who exactly he was. So she instantly greeted him. It was bit weird walking into KC with a teddy. He hid it behind his back.
Pinky ' good morning sir
Maan eyes looked every where excitedly
pinky ' sir u r looking for something
Maan nodded..& just walked in. his eyes scanned the entire office couple of times. Just then Dev came out from his cabin to give some file to Nt..
Dev - hey Maan..
he walked towards curiously towards him
kuch kaam tha?
Maan shook his head. .. then nodded
Dev put his hand around him.. chal main tujhe nayen project dihka tha hoon
Maan snapped out.. sweetly hiding the teddy. .. abhi nahi bro.. kal..
paka kal, abhi mujhe kuch aur kaam hain
he quickly went to the second floor & looked for her. Yanha bhi nahi hain..
yah aaj hi.. aapne ghar gayen hain.. may be she is off..
he stooped his shoulder & went back home. He tried to play the video game.. it didn't interest him. he lost all the games he played.. he just wanted the time to fly.. he just wanted it to be the next day.. he had never felt the time to move so slow dam it was just 5 in the evening.


he didn't even have dinner just went to bed early. He didn't know wat was it.. that he couldn't rest in peace.. why was he so dam waiting for the next day.. he woke up .. woke.. he never slept ..he just couldn't sleep.
He got up & was all ready even before 5 in the morning.. he restlessly came down for breakfast.. dad & Dev were just getting ready for the pooja...they scanned him in surprise.
Dad - 4th sem start hone ki itni excitement
Maan wondered... college is opening today.. dam how could he not even remember anything abt it.
Wats it with him. He doesn't seem to know anything .. he quietly stood through the pooja.. he sat on the breakfast table after that. Dad & Dev joined him almost after an hr.. he was still sitting there lost. He had no clue wat he was supposed to be doing. No one will be office this early anyway.. he had to kill time.. so he was.

Finally went to office at 9am..
god only knows how he killed time until then. Suddenly the anxitely rised.. the dullness vanished.. his heart that seemed to have forgotten to beat since yesterday.. now suddenly seem to run at a speed.. he thought never existed. He went in.. muffling the grin in his face. He hid the teddy behind again..
pinky promptly greeted him ' good morning sir
he gave a wide smile ' good morning
& walked in straight.. his eyes scanned the entire floor anxiously. He peeped into almost every cabin.. he went to the next floor.. the conference room.. even looked through the blinds into dads cabin.
It was 10am & he was still looking around.
Pinky came around ' sir r u looking for someone
Maan didn't know whether it will alright to ask someone like this..

2 week had passed Maan was there in the office looking for her in the morning hours.. finally he gave up & decided to ask pinky..
she promptly stood up
mujhe .. misti.. he paused... he stood their blankly ..wat is her name
realization hit hard.. he doesn't know her name... it was like someone just pulled the surface from underneath his legs. The feeling of inside being nothing.. wat is her name.. his hand became icy cold in fear.. like he was wishing & hoping ..like so stupidly holding to something... wat is it.. wat is it dam.. does she even exist.

He just left from there.. like last couple of weeks . he again missed his first lecture & today he was even more late missing the second one.. he sighed & went back to the parking lot irritated & frustrated. Dam.. he kicked the stone.. misti.. he said..where the hell r u man..
the stone hit the girl leaning against his car.. wasn't he frustrated enough that this dam girl had to be here again.. bloody hell the very sight of her.. pissed him off.. like a hatred from within.. something knocking off..
Geet immediately got up.. so soo .. sorry sir.. I was not sitting here.. wo ..I tripped..
she was struggling hard to stand with her leg.. the plaster was out .. she just had a crape bandage on now.. Geet cursed her luck.. it had to be his car.. babaji
karan came to help her from no where.. kya huwa tumhre leg ko? he asked in concern
I had an accident

Maan mocked .. yanhi hota hain.. jab dusoren ki mamloom main dang adavo tho
not even once it strike to him in his frustration that this is his maistimia
she was already low.. really don't know wat was it .. she had been off mood
may be ur right .. she said trying to move away from his car.. her eyes looked at him painfully.. he couldn't stand those gaze.. they pricked his soul.. he hated it..
serves u right u know.. I wish u break ur other leg too..
he was frustrated & she was just there wrong time.. he spoke wat ever came in his mind. .. rude meaningless ruthless.. harsh..addressing her gimp.. & wat not.

Geet quietly went to her class.. with karans help. Don't know wat she couldn't say anything to him.. was it she felt something similar.. or was she low.. or just that she was still guilty of that night ..that led to the accident.. then how come she treasured the every night with her puchki.. how did it all seem perfectly right. Why is it all so complicated.. muskan wonders.

She had been going to office at her regular shift after the college. She wished she could meet her puchki.. like he coming over to office for something.. but then.. wat could she expect from him.. wo aisen hi hain.. she knows him. He won't change for anything or anyone.. mast mula types.. just the thought of him.. brought a smile on her face...


precap
oops maan again angry with poor geet
-PREV PART 50 NEXT PART 52-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates. loved their paintings. he is becoming naughtier day by day. muski hw do u get such beautiful ideas yaar?? u r simply superb.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i m still wondering when would they actually know that he is her puchki and she is her mistimia
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Posted: 13 years ago
muskan i m really confused here may be i will send a PM on the same

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