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Posted: 13 years ago

Inteha hogayee intizaar ki 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting :-)
eagerly waiting for twist...biting my nails.
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Posted: 13 years ago
am waiting with morning coffee :-D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Me the stalker waited that long going crazhiee

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Originally posted by: 18mypride

am waiting with morning coffee :-D

wow ur waiting with morning coffee and me waiting with my lappy nearly sleeping... its 10:00 pm here lol😉
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My situation is like the 2 puppies below lol

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MAHSOOS..... Part 48

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Geet couldn't help her self to control the laughter while listening to maan.
"that's it!" armaan snaps, and stars to walk out.
"he is p-off... Pick me up early." geet kissed the phone and ran after armaan.

Ridzy looked at them from far. She was also bit worried for armaan. Maybe anjali. She knew well how much anjali loves him.. So... But at the same time she had this itch to know why kripa broke up..

Maan picked geet up. Early! As she indicated. She was in amusing mood... Maan instantly brought her in embrace and she started to explain everything about armaan in details. Even maan founded rather pathetic, only 3 weeks relationship and he was this dam down!

"pata hi, he was also complaining what he.." geet couldn't even speak with laughter. And maan went along with her lovingly...


Ridihma met up with kripa, they are friends but not that good friends...
"hi..."
"hay... How is armaan?"
"au... He is upset! Why did you break up?"

"au... Kripa twisted her lips, wondering what to say... "I like someone els!"
"oh!" ridzy dint expect that at all... But let's here... Nothing harmful...
"it's MK! You know the guy who came to the lecture other day!"
Ridzy nodes with a smile.. Didn't catch what exactly but then her eyes looked at her in shock. "WHAT?"

"yes..."
"per- oh- maan- jetji-" ridima just mumbled her way, she could barely say a word in a shock.
"yes maan. I will talk to my family today... i didn't get the chance at all..." she blushed.
"WHAT?" ridima just looked at her disbelievingly, she is just wondering how geet will react. "no-no he"
"I am in love. He is just amazing, even geet think it's great!"
"WHAT? No- there must be something misunderstanding why would she talk about jetji like that?"
"jetji?"
"yes- my and deva engagement is next week- but that's not the point! He-"
"omg! Omg we probably" kripa ran way before listening to ridzy...



Geet walked in flowed by maan. The whole house was ready with arrangement. Avantila came along with huge plate of shagoon.
"you have to take this to ridimas house beta."
"sure mama" Geet looked at everything with a smile.
"we will quickly get change then will take it"

In the limo, geet was peeping in every plate to get some glimpse of everything. Maan just smiled at her childlessness...
"they are so beautiful" she smiled & suppressing her self in his embrace.
"did dev choose them?"
"umm... No!"
"oh!- did you choose my?"
"yes..." a million dollars smile was on geets face, she possibly couldn't control at all. Giving him a full lip on kiss. "I love you..." she slowly whispers.
"I love you to..."
"by the way," geet removes all her hair back. "I am wearing one of them today, tell me which one I am wearing?"


maam slowly brings his hand up, stroking over the jewelery carefully, "one that was in the 4th plate!"
"impressive mr khurana. Now tell me what bangle I am wearing.." maan just nodes his head in amusement...
"one in the 3rd plate!" geet confusingly looked at him, he didn't even felt the bangle...
"how did you know?" she comes right across his face.. Waving her hand...
"will you stop doing that!"
"how did you know?" she demands an answer
"mrs khurana I think you are having memory problem... I dressed you up!" blood rushed in to geets cheek. She blushed like never before.. While maan brought her back in to his embrace...

As they arrived, ridima looked at them from her window, they looked so perfect, then why would geet suggest kripa to move on... Or kripa lying? And anyway they are married! Oh she felt so confused...

Soon after dinner both maan and geet left the place, rather over welded with the traditional greeting...

Next day,

Maan drops geet to the collage as usal... Ridzy stood there, "ridzy?"
"ridzy? I never knew she is in your collage..."
"ha..."
Ridzy smiled uncomfortably... Then looked at maan.
"hello..."
Geet waved goodbye to maan and walked along with ridzy. They still haven't met formally yet, just hi hello...
"I am not sure what to call you!" ridzy smiled shighly.
"we are in same year... So no jetani... We can be two sister..."
Ridzy smiled. She wanted to ask about kripa mainly. Specially the way she was telling everything...
"au, I wanted to ask you something..."
"ha bolo..."
Armaan and anjali also comes in. Who looked much better and anjali... Super fresh.
"au kripa was talking about jetji!"
"maan? Why she would talk about my husband... Actually she won't shut up about this MK!" geet bit her lips, realizing armaan was there...
"MK?" armaan wondered. looking at geet in confusion...
"no-no... It's jetji..."
"no. It's MK... What's his full name actually?"
Ridima roles her eyes.
"who is MK?" armaan starts to get irritated. Specially something with kripa.
"MK is maan. Maan khuran.." ridima blurs out...
Geet didn't catch that for sometime, then again, she looked at ridima with big eyes...
"she was telling me to how she likes a blind man!" ridima suggested

Suddenly geets heart skipped more then one bit then few more when both anjali ans armaan looked at her with a shocking expression.


"I tried to explain, MK is my jetsi and your husband but she would not just listen... Anyway I have to go... Au I will be late for my last class..."

"blind?" armaan whispered. Geet was nodding her head no, looking for a chance to explain... Ridzy left, the bell was ringing and geet was looking for some explanation. she could clearly guess how ridzys words have smacked all three on the face

"I can explain... Listen to me...listen to me... Please I can explain... I have tried to tell you..."
she tried to gather the courage to speak... but seems like it was to late... the understanding pase have far passed. specially for armaan...
"what? Finding out from a 3rd person who don't even belong to our group. We are friends since nursery geet..."
armaan angrily replies.. he was rather gob smacked. blind.. she married a blind man and they find out from someone els.. and geet, she did not even bother telling them anything.
"no... I- I was ashamed... Please listen to me... I was ashamed of telling you before but i required time. i was about to tell you but never had the chance.. please try to unde..."



Maan at the back dropped geets lunch who was listening to everything... A clear pain became visible on his face... all three turns around instantly with a shocking expression...




PART 47 pg 30 -prev-next-PART 49 pg 76

next- journey of another mahsoos begins...😳

hello... well twist is progressing :)
i just read the comment...
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear
what happened now?
maan listened that she is ashamed to say he is blind dear
what kind of twist is that?
pls
let her explain dear
i want her to say everything to all
pls cant see the MU in this maneet dear
plsss
hope in next update everything ll be gud dear
plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
Now there will be some pain after d revelation
For me it has become now when d next will come
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally Geet knows that MK is Maan. Oh no! Can't wait to read more!

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