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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss-Riz

great part. 😊

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

awesome part.😊.

accident😲.
continue soon

Thanks dear ...accident toh hone hi wala hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support

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Posted: 13 years ago
will be waiting for the update 2mrw sweetie...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support. I have replied to your comments. Here is the next part I hope each one of u will enjoy reading
love-Piya
PART 57

It was a long passionate kiss which helped Maan to remove his fear and Geet to remove her guilt.

They finally ended the kiss to get some air

Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder and hugged him tightly

Maan responded to the hug and closed his eyes to once again ensure himself that his Geet was right in front of him and no one could take her away from him

Geet: I am sorry Maan mujhe maaf kar dijiye mera irada aapko pareshan karne ka nahi tha [I am sorry Maan pls forgive me I never wanted to trouble you]

Maan kissed her forehead

Maan: Geet iss baar toh tumhe maaf kar diya par vaada karo dubara kabhi bhi aise nahi karogi [Ok Geet this time I forgive you but promise me you won't repeat such a thing again]

Geet: Vaada [I promise]

They break their hug but Geet was not able to meet his gaze as she was feeling shy

Maan lifted her face by holding her chin and looked at her lovingly

Maan: Jaanti ho Geet jab bhi tum sharmathi ho toh bilkul wo dikhthi ho

Geet looks at Maan but then her cheeks turn crimson red and she again lowers her gaze

Maan: Ab kis baat par itna sharma rahi ho? [Now what is the reason behind this sudden shyness of yours?]

Geet: Wo darasal [Actually]

Maan: Kya hua saaf saaf kaho [What happened tell me clearly]

Geet hugs Maan and moves her finger onto his lips

She was trying to remove the lipstick mark from his lips

It was only then that Maan realized what Geet was trying to do

Maan decided to tease Geet

Maan: Waise Geet tum kaunsi brand ka lipstick use karti ho? [ What is the brand of your lipstick?]

Geet understood his intension

She hit him playfully on his chest

Maan: O Geet pehle itni pyari kiss de di aur ab maar rahi ho ye toh galat baat hai [Geet first you gave me such a beautiful kiss and now you are hitting me this is wrong]

Geet: Maan bus bhi kijiyena [Maan pls stop]

Maan: Achha ek baat batau kya tum yuhi pure din meri bahon mein rahogi [ Ok tell me one thing are u going to stay in my embrace throughout the day]

Geet: Haan koi problem hai aapko [Yes do u have any problem?]

Maan: Nahi bilkul bhi nahi [Absolutely not]

Geet: Hona bhi nahi chahiye kyunki aappar mera pura haq hai

Maan loved her confidence he kissed her cheek and started the car

This was the best car drive for both of them

After some time

Geet: Maan mujhe Golden temple jaana hai aap mujhe waha lekar jaaoge na? [Maan I wanted to visit the Golden temple will u take me there?]

Maan: Kyun nahi Geet chalo abhi chalthe hai [Off course Geet]

Maan continued driving after some time Maaneet reach the Golden temple

Just then he gets a message on his mobile it was from Adi

Both of them come out of the car

Maan was very happy on reading the message

Geet: Kya hua Maan kiska message hai [What happened Maan whose message is it?]

Maan: Adi ka message hai Geet ek zaruri kaam yaad aa gaya hai ek kaam karo tum mandir jau main bus 10 minute mein wo kaam lipta kar wapas aata hoon [ It's Adi's message Geet'by the way I just remembered an important work you go to the temple I will be back within 10 minutes]

Geet: Thik hai jaldi aayiyega main aapka intezaar karungi [Ok but come back soon I would be waiting for you]

Maan caressed her face lovingly and left from there

As soon as Maan left Geet saw a man who was selling some Taveez

There was something in that person that was attracting Geet towards him

Baba: Bahut pyar karti ho na usse wo bhi tumse utna hi pyar karta hai [U love him a lot right he also possesses the same feelings for u]

Geet: Baba ye aapko kaise pata [How do u know this Baba?]

Baba: Hum uss parvadikaar k bandhe hai sab jaante aur samajhthe hai

Baba: ye lo ye taveez usse pehnadena iss taaveez ko uss rab hi meher samajlo tum dono ki zindagi mein chahe jitney bhi musibat kyun na aaye tum dono humesha hi jude rahoge ye taaveez tum dono ke pyar ko aur bhi gehra aur mazboot kar dega [Take this taaveez and give it to him. This taaveez would be a blessing of God and would always bind you both in every phase of your life whatever the conditions your love will only become stronger with time]

Geet was very happy

Geet: Iss taaveez ki kimaat kya hai baba? [What is the cost of this taveez?]

Baba: Aashirwad ka koi mol nahi hotha beti rakh lo ye tumhare liye hi hai [Blessing does not cost anything child take it]

Geet accepts the taaveez and takes the blessings of the Baba and goes inside the temple

Geet was waiting for Maan it was almost half an hour but Maan did not turn up she tried contacting him on his mobile but his mobile was coming out of reach

She comes out and realizes that there was a huge crowd assembled in that area

There was a lot of chaos and some serious discussion was going on

Geet: Bhai sahab ye itni bheed kyun ikhatta hui hai koi problem ho gayi hai kya? [Brother what's the matter?]

Man 1: Behenji ek bahut hi serious accident ho gaya hai [There has been a serious accident]

Geet: Accident?

Man 1: Haanji accident koi banda car park karne k baad road cross kar raha tha k ek truck usse buri tarah se kuchal kar chala gaya ' [Yes accident'a person was trying to cross the road when a truck went through him]

Man 2: Haan ji behenji kafi bade ghar ka bandha lag raha tha policewale koi Khurana kehkar bula rahe the [He was a rich guy police officials were addressing him as some Khurana]

Geet's heart skipped a beat. She was sweating badly

Geet: Maan''.

She screamed his name and started running madly

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rERNHyU62k8

Preet ki lath mohe aaisi laagi Ho gayi main matwaali

Geet starts running like a maniac in the direction where the crowd were assembled

Balbal jaaun apne piya ko hey main jaaun vaari vaari

The police officials were not allowing anyone to come to that area a lady officer stopped Geet but Geet pushed her aside with all her strength

Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki yeh toh jaane duniya saari

The accident spot appeared like a pool of blood ' Geet's eyes were full of tears she could not find any traces of Maan

Bebas aur laachar phiru main haari main dil haari - 2

She was losing her thinking ability she was extremely worried. The lady officer was trying to pull Geet

Haari main dil haari

She overheard the conversation of some men from their conversation she realized that they had taken Maan to the nearby hospital


Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun

She pushed the lady officer and started running again. Fresh tears were flowing down her cheeks

Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun

Teri jaan ke sadke mein kuchh aisa kar jaaun

She stopped a rickshaw and told him to go to the hospital. She just wanted to reach the hospital as soon as possible

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani

She held the Taaveez close to her heart and was constantly praying Maan'

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani

The rickshaw stopped. Geet opened her eyes and found that there was a heavy traffic jam ahead. She got down from the auto payed him his rent and started running

Music

She was not in her wits she was running like a mad girl.


Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye

She managed to come out from the traffic jam but she narrowly escaped from being hit by a car

Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaaye Haste haste aashiq suli chadh jaaye

The car driver was shouting at her but she did not bother or wait for a single second she continued running her eyes were searching for her Maan

Ishq ka jaadu sar chadhar kara bole

As she was running she continued colliding with many people

Ishq ka jaadu sara chadha kara bole Khoob laga lo pehre raste rab khole

Her duppata got stuck somewhere but she pulled it causing it to tear in the process. Nothing mattered to her more than her love

Yahi ishq di marzi hain yahi rab di marzi hain'

But her legs were slowly getting weak she twisted her leg in the process but still she did not stop this pain was nothing in front of the pain of losing Maan

Yahi ishq di marzi hain yahi rab di marzi hain Tere bin jeena kaisa haan khudgarzi hai

The heels of her sandals breaks she leaves her sandals there itself and continues running bare foot

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani

She was hurting her foot badly but this didn't mattered to her

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani

There were some glass pieces that were lying on the road due to which her feet started bleeding

Oh ho oh hoohhh...

Finally she reached the hospital


Hey main rang rangeeli deewani hey main rang rangeeli deewani Ke main albeli main mastani

She was trying to cross the road but there were many vehicles that were moving around and her bleeding foot was making it more difficult for her to walk

Gaaun bajaaun sabko rijhaaun Hey main deen dhram se begaani ke main deewani main deewani

While crossing the road her hand came across a moving cab due to which she got bruises on her hand

Tere naam se jee loon tere naam se marr jaaun Tere jaan ke sadle mein kuchh aaisa kar jaaun

She finally entered the hospital.

Tune kya kar dala marr gayi main mitt gayi main
ho ri ha ri ho gayi main teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani

Her duppata was torn she was bleeding badly her tears were not ready to stop. Everyone present there understood that something serious has happened.

Teri deewani deewani
teri deewani deewani... teri deewani deewani teri deewani deewani...

She continued running leaving footprints behind as if they were trying to tell my heart is bleeding for you'

PRECAP: Geet: "Nahi aap jhooth bol rahi hai mere Maan ko kuch nahi ho saktha..Maan..."😭😭😭

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting ...
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update ...just love d update.👍🏼
it was
update soon 😊
w8ig😍
thanx 4 the pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan😭 Hope he's ok.. X
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
it was painful dear hope maan as well as geet is fine😭😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome
muje lag rah hau,,..ki accident ksi aur ka hua hoga nd maan hospital lekar gya hoga nd

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