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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87


awww i luv d way geet understood his dillema...of course she doesn't know nething but still she didn't take him wrong way...:-D
pihu main to geet ke dialogues pe fida ho gayi..." Aaj se Geet ne puri zindagi aapke intezaar k naam kar di Maan... Geet par pehle bhi aaphi ka haq tha aur aage bhi aaphi ka haq hoga. Maan ki Geet humesha Maan ki hi rahegi"
arey yaar ye apna munda to ghabra gaya...Hawww it was so touching wen he said "geet ki nafrat main bardasht nahin kar paunga"...samajh to maan bhi gaya hai bas inkar kar raha hai use khone ke darr se...khair maan ki geet hai na sab sambhal legi...
jaise hi geet ne bracelet ka zikr kiya meri xcitement ten folds high ho gai...khair abhi to kuch decipher nahin hua but khair i luved it ki geet ne maan ko sorry nahin bolne diya...thanks 4 dat pihu...
hai yaar jab ye ek doosre ke liye itne caring hote hain na...they sound sooo adorable...
great geet ko to yaqeen ho gaya ki aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai...good geet...
awww dey fed each other :-D...aur ek bed pe bhi soye gud...i luv d comfort dey feel wid each other...
muah 4 dis super awsome update pihu dear...luv u my ROCKSTAR!!!!
sry 4 late reply...

Yes Geet is Maan's true soulmate and she understands him really well. Maan toh pehle se hi apne feelings samaj gaay tha issliye toh wo bracelet jismein kuch special likha hai Geet ko gift kar diya...confession shaadi k baad hi hoga par there will b amny romantic and passionate maaneet moments b4 that. love u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Luvly prt..maan aivayi tension leraha tha.

Par uske tension k peeche bhi uska pyar chupa tha
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Posted: 13 years ago
Relax dear 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehek25

Awesome update.

There is definitely something in Maan's past that makes him so angry at the word marriage.
Pls reveal it soon.
Precap looks scary.
waiting for the next update.
Thanx for the pm

Above all...

Congratulations on the new thread
👏 👏 👏

Thanks Mehek yes there is a past that haunts him even today u will come to know abt it at the right moment. Love u darling
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your encouragement and support as usual I have replied to your comments.
I have given the English translations of the dialogues in the bracket but it is only for those who r not comfortable with Hindi so it is a request all those who can understand Hindi please read teh Hindi version only and do not read the translation
love-Piya
PART 56
Maaneet leave for the meeting
After some time Maan stops his car in front of a jewellary shop
Geet: Maan ye aap jewellary k shop pe kyun jaa rahe ho hume toh meeting par jaana haina? [ Maan why have u stopped ur car in front of a jewellary shop we were supposed to go for a meeting right?]
Maan: Haan Geet hum meeting k liye hi aaye hai actually jin client k saath humari ye deal finalize hui hai unka jewellary ka business bhi hai [ Geet we r here for the meeting itself actually the client with whom we have finalized this deal has a buisness in jewels as well]
Geet: Oh
Maan: Toh chale? [ So shall we?]
Geet: Ji chaliye [Ya let's go]
Maan: Ek minute Geet rukho [ One minute Geet]
Maan gets out from his car and like a true gentleman he opens the door for Geet and gives his hand to her
Geet happily gives her hand in his and comes out
They share an eyelock after which they enter the shop
Geet: Wow Maan itne pyare designs hai yaha pe Delhi mein toh aise designs maine kabhi dekhe hi nahi [ Wow Maan these designs are so beautiful I haven't seen such designs in Delhi]
Maan: Hmm...designs khoobsurat toh hai par Delhi bhi kuch kum nahi hai ek baar Delhi wapas jaayenge toh tumhe waha k achhe se shop par le jaaunga [ Yes the designs r indeed beautiful but Delhi is no less as compared to this I will take u to some famous shops once we go back]
Geet: Achha toh ye bataiye Mr. Khurana k aap ye sab mere liye kyun karoge? [ Ok Mr.Khurana but tell me one thing why would u do all this for me?]
Maan: Kyunki tum mere liye khass ho [ Coz u r special]
Geet: Hmm...khaas par kyun aakir hum aapke hai kaun?
Geet looks directly into his eyes and for a second Maan gets lost in those magical eyes of hers
Maan: Tum woh ho jisse main py... [U r the one whom I lo...]
But before he could complete his statement someone called his name
Mr.Mallik: Mr. Khurana aap kab aaye? [ Mr. Khurana when did u arrive?]
Maaneet's eyelock was broken
Geet was cursing Mr. Mallik coz she knew very well what Maan wanted to confess
Maan: Hello Mr. Mallik hum bus abhi aaye [Hello Mr.Mallik we have just arrived]
Mallik: Ye mautarma kaun hai? [Who is this lady accompanying u?]
Maan: Ye Geet hai meri secretary aur meri dost [She is Geet my secretary and friend]
Mallik: Geet kitna sona naam hai aur jitna pyara naam hai utni hi pyari surat bhi [Geet what a beautiful name and just like her name she herself is gorgeous]
Maan did not like this he was quite possessive regarding Geet
Mr Mallik extended his hand to greet Geet but before Geet could respond maan gave his hand in his
Maan: Chaliye Mr.Mallik project k details discuss karte hai [ Let us discuss the details of the project Mr.Mallik]
Mallik: Yes sure
Maan did not leave his hand infact his grip went on increasing
Maan: (thinking) Meri Geet ka haath pakadne jaa raha tha teri itni himamt [ U wanted to touch my Geet how dare u]
Mallik: Mr. Khurana mera hath toh chodiye dard ho raha hai [Pls leave my hand it is paining]
Geet: Maan ye kya kar rahe ho aap haath chodiye unka [Maan what r u doing leave his hand]
Maan left his hand
Maan: O I am sorry wo maine jaanbuskar nahi kiya
Mallik: Koi gal nahi ji [Its alright]
Geet: Toh meeting shuru kare [So shall we start the meeting?]
Maalik: Sure
Maalik takes them to a separate room where they discuss all the aspects of the deal
Maan was sitting very close to Geet and was holding her hand throughout the meeting
Geet realized that he was showing his possessiveness and she was enjoying this part of his personality
After some time the meeting was over
Mallik: Mr. Khurana chalo buisness ki baate toh ho gayi ab zara personal bate ki jaaye [ Mr. Khurana we r done with the buisness talks now let us discuss something personal]
Maan: Personal?
Maalik: Ji haan ab kya haina mere bade bete Armaan ki shadi honewali hai aur aaj uski sagaai hai toh main chahtha tha k aap wo function attend kare [ My elder son Armaan's marriage has been fixed and today is the engagement ceremony so I wanted u to attend the function]
Maan: (in an angry tone) Shadi? [Marriage?]
Mallik: Ji Shadi agar aap aayenge toh mujhe bada achha lagega ab hum buisness ek saath kar hi rahe hai toh issi bahane dost bhi bun jaayenge [Yes marriage and I will really be happy if u attend the function...we r working together on this project and due to this family function we may become good friends as well]
Maan: Dekhiye Mr. Mallik ek cheez main clear kar du [Listen Mr. Mallik let me clear one thing]
But before he could say anything further
Mallik: Geet ko kya ho raha hai? Usse chakkar aa raha hai [What's wrong with Geet she is fainting]
Hearing Geet's name Maan's anger vanished and he turned around and indeed Geet was fainting
He caught her before falling and all of her sudden his anger was replaced by concern and love for Geet
Maan:( in a worried tone) Geet kya hua tumhe hosh mein aau Geet pls utho hosh mein aau [What happened Geet ... pls get up]
Mallik: Ye lijiye Khurana sahab paani chidakar dekhiye [ Sprinkle some water Mr. Khurana]
Maan sprinkles water on her face but Geet was still unconscious
Maan felt as if someone has taken away his life from him
Geet was not at all responding
Seeing Geet in this condition his heartbeat was sinking
Mallik: Main abhi doctor ko phone karta hoon [I will call the doctor right now]
Maan: Nahi...doctor ko aane mein waqt lag saktha hai aur meri Geet k mamle mein main koi risk nahi le saktha aap mujhe koi kareebi clinic ka address bata dijiye main issi waqt apni Geet ko waha le jaaunga...mere hothe hue meri Geet ko kuch anhi ho saktha kuch nahi [ No it will take a lot of time for the doctor to reach here...u give me the address of the nearby hospital I will take my Geet there immediately...as long as I m there with her nothing can happen to her]
Maalik gives him the address
Maan carries Geet in his arms and carefully places her in the car
He was extremely worried
He starts driving like a mad man he just wanted to reach the hospital as quickly as possible
Geet: Maan car dheere chalaiyena aap koi racing mein participate karne wale ho kya? [Maan drive the car slowly are u going to particiapate in some car racing or what?]
Maan stopped the car immediately
He turned to face Geet
Geet was sitting comfortably with a smile on her face
Maan could not control himself and hugged her tightly
Maan: Geet tum thik ho main jaanta tha tumhe kuch nahi ho saktha [Geet u r alright I knew nothing can happen to u]
Maan: Jaanti ho main kitna ghabragaya tha agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh main jee nahi paata [ I was so scared ... I would not have been alive if something happened to u]
It was then when Geet realized Maan's condition
She breaked the hug and was shocked to see Maan
He was crying there was a pain hidden in those tears
There was a fear of losing her forever that was reflecting from his eyes
Maan was about to say something when she stopped him by covering his mouth with her hand
She then caressed his face and started speaking
Geet :Main thik hoon Maan...aapke rehthe hue mujhe kuch nahi ho saktha [I m perfectly alright Maan nothing can happen to me as long as u r there]
Geet: Mujhe maaf kar dijiye maine chakkar aane ka natak kiya tha [Pls forgive me that fainting part was a drama]
Maan: (shocked) Natak par kyun Geet? [ Drama? but why?]
Geet: Wo main samaj gayi thi k shadi ki baat sunkar aapko gussa aa gaya tha aur main jaanti hoon k gusse mein aap kuch bhi keh sakthe ho aur main nahi chahthi thi k aapke gusse ki wajah se ye deal cancel ho jaaye issliye maine ye natak kiya kyunki main jaanti thi k aap mujhse judi koi bhi baat ko nazarandaaz nahi kar sakthe uss waqt mujhe jo thik laga maine wahi kiya[Actually I knew that u were angry when Mr. Mallik was talking about marriage and since I know u very well I was very sure that u will speak whatever comes into ur mind in your anger which might affect the deal..hence I pretended to faint coz I know that I will always be your first priority and ur anger will vanish]
Maan was still in a state of shock
Maan: Geet wo deal agar chali bhi jaati toh koi farak nahi padtha par agar tum kuch der aur yun behoshi ka naatak karti toh main zarur mar jaata [If that deal would have been cancelled it wouldn't have mattered that much but if u had continued ur drama for few more seconds then I wouldn't have been alive right now]
Maan: Tumhe meri laash nazar...[ U would have seen my dead body...]
But before Maan could complete his sentence Geet captured his lips into hers and started kissing him
Maan too responded with equal passion
He was removing all his fear and pain through this kiss
Maan bit her lower lip and demanded his entry
Geet allowed him to enter
Maan deepened the kiss and he was now the dominating partner
He started exploring every corner of her mouth with his tongue
Both were experiencing a divine feeling right now
It was a long passionate kiss which helped Maan to remove his fear and Geet to reduce her guilt
They finally ended the kiss to get some air
Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder and hugged him tightly
Maan responded to the hug and closed his eyes to once again ensure himself that his Geet was right in front of him...and no one could take her away from him
PRECAP: Accident😭😭😭
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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats for being in hall of fame sweetie...well u deserve it for sure...


btw maan taking geet to jewellery shop...i wonder...kahin ring dene ka iraada toh nahi hain...well i hope so...waise yeh waala maan bhi kitna sweet hain...like a true gentleman opening the door for his lady...i loved this gesture of this...


btw geet...kyunki delhi mein yeh sab nahi hain...issiliye toh maan tumhe yahaan laaya hain...dont u know he wants everything perfect for you...waise dont worry...at the right time he will take to the best of all places...after all like he saig u r someone special for him...


damn...why the hell did mr malik have to getthere at that moment...maan would have said that he laves her...grrr...i guess we really have to wait for him to admit his love openly...


but then am not that angry over mr malik...i mean because of him we will get to see a posssessive maan as well...maan being jealous...i loved how he increased his grip till it hurted him...


koi gal nahi maan singh khurana ji...we all know how jaan bujkar u didnt do all that...lol...


oh no...he talked about marriage...now maan will be so angry...


thnk god geet was theere and acted ill and all...otherwise maan would have blasted upon mr malik...


and finally kiss...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️...i guess this was the only thing to calm maan...lol...i loved the update...but then accident...now am scared...yahan pe toh geet acting kar rahi thi...but accident...i guess it is a real one...


continue soon n thnxxx for the pm pihu...

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I LOVED THE WHOLE STORY I MUST SAY U R A VERY GOOD WRITER AND UPDATE SOON PLZ I M WAITING😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really nice update..
Thanks for the pM

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