@The BLISS to be DOOMED@(MG)ff~2...pt-18 pg-133

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

wowww loved it

reminded me of all race but in that cars are used

n the last was superb

geet is surely going to die when she heard what don said 😆

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

OMG OMG OMG girl u updted after so long 😔

But an updt yaar WONDERFULL ! Loved it ! Geet trying to kill him but at the same time a lil bit concerned... awww n maan !!! what a cute don hahah... risking his own life to save geet, superb dear ! N yeah seems like both r starting to realise that there is something between them...hhmmm gud gud !

And last part cherry on cake : I wanted to spend this night with you, all alone. Thats why I brought you here where no one can disturb us...!!

ooh was it all planned by don ???? No it can't be... n girl u r not givng any hint about previous strange incidents, instead u r adding spices !!! 😆 What yaar kuch to hints do, me wants to know who's taking care of her, who was her bro's real friend, the hanky issue... yaar kuch to hints do na... before i used to guess but now everything is so complicated k story koi b dirction le sakti hai... u no its jalebi type 🤣

But fir b let me try again 😉 : so from this updt seems like maan knew what geet was doing while he was shooting... u always says things through geet's pov, never from maan's pov, clever girl 😆... he is a toatl mystery, as i told u before, u should give some hints abt his identity... n am expecting it in the next updt... as geet n maan r alone !!! hope noone will disturb them 😈

Me waiting for the next updt !
T.c dear Love ya ! 😊

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Mirela

@Myra.nelly

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

👏 👏 👏 Brilliant 👏 👏 👏 Dont know if it was a movie or a ff...u've awaken my imagination with the action descption 👏 👏 👏

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

it was just like an english action movie!!

too good,,awesum.

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

I know maan is cruel but he will not allow a small scratch on geet as I feel he loves her and can't see her hurt. continue soon.

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

@-BlushaLicious-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Awesome update !! :D !!
Just WOW !! :) !!

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meena..

@meena..

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

uff cliffhanger i hate dis

awesome

thanks for pm

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--ANGEL--

@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

awesome part...loved maans stunt...i wonder what maan is upto...update soon

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Riya Malhotra

@pari10

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: shining_moon

hmm...dhoom 2 huh...I didn't actually thought about...actually I saw the stunt mania underground and just got the idea from there😆

no no dnt take me wrong ...i nvr show stunt mania ...soo while reading abt bikes n all only dhoom 2 came in my mind...😆...sowiiee