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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

these two are perfect candidates for couples therapy!!! i mean seriosuly! they either need to talk to some one about it or get a room and bang it out amongst themselves!!!

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

amazin part..so much of pain bolted up imn arhi...feel bad for thm

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

hmm..this seems to be turning in to a bad habit..yaar am so sorry i'm once again doing the comments after 2 updates!sorry😒

anyway i'm gonna start with the last update..first of all i'm glad u named him 'Aryan' and not the other name u told me he was based on..cz well i still am too biased to that couple n might have created enough confusion in my head otherwise..now i know for sure whom i root for.😳

Arnav and La r still together? i never expected that!anyway that will complicate things even further i'm sure..
Arnav is still the same..hurting her to cover his own hurt, worries n pain..he is thriving in her pain without realizing that hurting her means hurting himself...

'Because no matter where her heart belonged, her life belonged to the person who was the reason she breathed.' this line now holds more than a metaphorical meaning as was implied after reading the previous update..but after reading today's update it is meant in a more literal sense..isn't it?
i never saw this line coming 'Answers enclosed in the four walls of Goa Medical College, the hospital where she was admitted for months. Answers that had the power to shatter hearts when they would realize how close she had been to drifting away to join her parents, to reside amongst the stars, to the day when khushi kumara Gupta would have been nothing but a memory'' it completely shocked me cz i never expected this angle of the story..it just makes it even more heart breaking than it already is...

and for a change 'I heard your argument at the pool side.' this knowledge by anjali..it surprised me..cz she usually is so ignorant and lives in the blissfully happy world created in her own head..but today not just in this story but in the real show also she surprised me by being so perceptive abt khushi's unhappy mindset..and was taken by a pleasant surprised to read this line too soon after the shock i got from watching the show..

that kiss...as beautiful as it was..as usual arnav manages to make a moment so perfect a river of sorrow through his usual callous behavior...why does he never wait?never listen?always judge and hand out punishment without even checking if the person is wrong or not?i feel my heart going out to the khushi in this story...

i love the way u ended this update 'Wrapped in the memories of the moments that were beautiful. Almost too beautiful to be real. But those moments were not whole.., never whole. Perhaps they were never meant to be. They would just linger in her eyes.. sometimes as a wish, sometimes as a tear. Moments that were meant to be always incomplete. Always unfinished.' beautiful wordings..as always u have the magical touch to wove these words in such a beautiful and emotional way that i always get immersed in emotions everytime i read one of ur updates...

Lyraa once again a beautiful part..bitter sweet..yet enchanting...so continue soon..
looking forward to reading what else u have in store for us.. which i'm sure is gonna be a roller-coaster ride of heavy heart touching emotions as usual...

a perfect update..left me longing for more...

Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Wow he kissed her but he was sooo rude to her 😔
pls update soon

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

poor khushi. arnav needs to get a wake up call.

xxx

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Great update! Can't wait for Arnav to find out why Khushi was out of contact for 9 months!

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RIFkutty

@RIFkutty

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#137

lyraa...ooo lyraa...u r such a fab writer...i just want to give u a huge tight 🤗...ur updates r 1 of the BEST...

always expressing feelings in a mind-blowing way...i always just get lost in ur updates, that i didnt realize the end ...

ur BEHIND THE SMILE is fab...and now

The reason i breathe...is super duper fab👏

plz update the next part as quick as possible😊

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

i loved it dear thanks 4 the pm

Edited by maria_awan - 13 years ago

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

It seemed I was reading written update for ipkknd. U wrote exactly like the xter of arnav esp is shown. He so cannot control himself, and poor khushi faces it. Wonder what happened in goa, what must hav shyam done?
Loving it, thanks for the pm.