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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Forgot 2 mention Plz PM me once u update!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Thanks for the PM...love this story too.. I am a huge fan of your writing...its so effortless to read. I love how that characters are described in so much depth...they feel like real people!! Looking forward to the next part...I'm a bit impatient...so really hoping i don't have to wait to long. Besides...I am spoiled now...as I got to read 15 chapters simultaneously of Behind the Smile!!!😃

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Asmita88

@Asmita88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

hie lyraa..

i had been following your ff and os.. they r simply great. you really hav the way with words.. back 5-6 yrs ago i was into mills and boon stories...ur stories take me back to those days... and it is such a great fun to read ur stories... as far as i knew u have just started writing these fan forums but i must say u are natural or born writer...

thank you for ur wonderful works

i just have a feeling in this ff there is gonna be some baby.. just the feeling maybe others have predicted too but haven't read the comments...

take care keep on updating all the ff and creating OS... could you write OS of married with kids OS.. i really love those

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daisy_luvs_ ff

@daisy_luvs_ ff

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

i read the prologue and both chapters...very interesting start to the story...i love the way you unravel the plot and build the ambience...looking forward to read more :D

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

yayy..they kiss!

btw this ff is so freakishly similar to the show..arnav and his gussa and all!

but i as usual loved it...i luv the way u write!

and me first!!!!

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

😛Can't wait to read it...
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Lyraa...this 9 months separation...leads me to ask exactly how many moments have Arnav and Khushi shared...and to what degree? he kissed her...without qualms for her reaction...but of course he had to mask it with his CAUSTIC words...lest it show his vulnerabilities to her?? The reason for her breath is still tied to him...things that make you go hmmm!!

Loving the suspense...looking forward to reading more!!😛

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

loved the update..he will suffer with more pain again when he ll get to know abt her those painful 9 months..poor khushi..

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mimi

@moon_mine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

aww...arnav is still nw gussa...he shud gv khushi a chance to spk...b4 making more mistakes!!!!!

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

loved it dear...

keep writing & thx for pm😃

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

It was very nice and emotional update!! This FF is so close to the show.. Arnav and Kushi all same..!! But more heartbreaking than the show!! But nice dear!!

He kissed later he said its nothing.. Why are you like this Arnav.. Could you just not ask Kushi a single question "What happened in 9 months?" Why do he always judge her!! Bad boy!
Thanks for the PM dear!!😊

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