~DiL sE~ d3 FF IMP NOTE PAGE 129 - Page 85

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved it very much
vishakha in white gown😲 superb
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part priya
its awesome..
love vishaka in girly avtaar

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Posted: 13 years ago
Its amazing dear plz update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm and loved the update and wow man vishaka in a gown i m dead
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
liked vishaka in girly dress,,
waiting for d next part..

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Posted: 13 years ago
i just loved the update and thanks for the pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Guys ..Priyanka here again ..
Nams has written this episode ..You gotta read dis ..Its awesumm !!
Episode 39 - Dil Se
They all stood wid deir respective couples thinking AM I DREAMING or AM I IN DIS PLACE ALL OVER AGAIN?

It was d same place wer all couples had celebrated their Valentines day years before aftr they CONFESSED deir love fr each othr! Dis place had the memories first vday together years ago as "official couples"…. All memories took over deir minds nd hearts as they enterd the club "holding hand in hand" to do wich they felt "shy" years before but today they feel proud!

They got into d club. It had a special celebration.. ther was a wide stretched out big Garden.. ther was a dance floor nd disco hall inside d building nd 2 bars outside n inside..

They entered d garden nd stood! As they memories refreshed lik a movie coming before their eyes..

FLASHBACK

Sharon screemed hard on calling out evryone's name to get down of d bus!

As each got down along wid deir partners behind dem she checked d list..

Wen all wer down d bus she directed dem towards d club.. nd instructed dem d bus wud move next day mrng nd dey had to spend nite in HOTEL (rooms wer allotted)..

It was d VDAY party actually a GIFT party fr winning a DANCE COMPETITION..

All gang along wid few clg mates attended..

Sh: wow this is amazing..

She said nd moved along wid her group "dazzlings"

As dey reached d entrance gurads stopped dem

Guard: COUPLE ENTRY ONLY

Sh: wo …

Nd all wer a lil embarrassed but all blushed hard..

They took over deir respective partners side.. but they wer still standing miles away frm each othr to look lik "couples"

Guard raised his eye brow..

While suddenly all gurls n boys held their partnes arms tight enough to shivered of d touch..

They all went inside…

Kria: woow Mindblowing!!!!

Rey(in her ears): u look mindblowing too..

Look Look Hawa Hawa..

Vicky n neha wer speaking somethn nd slowly they entered d dance floor..

Sharon went to sit in d couch while swayam nil simmi rinni n amar followed her..

Vishaka n barath went to d bar.. rey n kria walked towards d garden..

KRIYAANSH

Rey: kria?

Kria: hmm (shyly)

Rey: u knw wat! I cant belive ki Hum dono saat mei Vday celebrate karne aaye hai..

Kria: yakeen toh muje b nhi araha hai! hum sab ek group ban gaye!

Rey: yeah ryt!

Kria: hmm

Rey: aaj valentines day hai soo aaj..

Kria: aaj???

Pulls her nd pins her to d wall away frm evryone's eyes..

SWARON

Sw: Sharon shall we dance?

Sharon *dumbstruck*

Nil n simmi smile nd excuse demself to d disco..

Rinni n amar also follow dem..

Swayam bending in his knees

Sw: may I hav pleasure to dance wid d most beautiful gal?

Sharon *blush*

Sh: hmmm yeah sure.. lets go..

Keeps her palms on his nd they both move..

KRIYAANSH

Kria: REY???

Rey: SSSHHH aaj tum bas wahi bologi jo mei sunna chahtha hoon!

Kria: rey aap..

Rey: kria plz kehdo ki tum b mujse pyaaar…..?

Jus thn she blush n smile nd push him n run..

He holds her aftr chasing..

Kria: rey plz chodo muje.

Rey: tab tak nhi jab tak tum wo teen words nhi kehthi!

Kria: accha??? Toh aaab b toh keh skte hai!!!!

Rey: soo agar mei kahoonga toh tum b kahogi..??

Kria nods nd den..

Laughs n runs again..

She looks back he wasn't thr.. she moves front a lil n trys to ssearch no use! He was disspearred she gets worried nd runs inside d club.. she had kept one step towards d dance floor entrance tat all lights go dim in d garden..

She stops she turns fearing a lil coz of darkness.. nd jus thn..

She sees her pic flshed in BIG SCREEN on d dias.. she feels awkward and embarrassed but thn she hears REY walking down towards her saying..

"the gal who conquered my mind at first look

The gal who blew my mind wid her dance

Who touched my soul wid her cuteness

She stole my heart wid all love nd care

She is d one whom I was searching..

I found her! But to make her mine

Im dedicating myself to b hers forver!

The angel of my life

The love of my life

The forevr partner nd only one to be in my life!

Kria! miss Kria Ghai

Aaj I jus wanna confess

*bends down in his knees before her*

Ur mine n only mine MY BAATCUTTER (thse lines are my sooo fav dat I wud luv to add it throughout my ff)

Nd I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH! Much more than MYSELF!!!

Will b my valentine throu out my life?????"

She had tears in her eyes

Before he cud wash dose off she bend down in her knees before him..

Cupped his face in her hands

Kria: "nd u knw wat???

UR MINE Mr Chabilal!!! Sirf aur sirf mere ho tum!!!!

Nd I I I LOVE U TOO!!!!!!

Aaj tak meine sirf dance se pyaar kia I made it my soul!

Bt aaj ur d othr half of my soul!!! Im incomplete widout u!

Nd I want to b complete forever wid u in MY LIFE!!!!!"

Rey smiled hard from d bottom of his heart..

He got up n made her to stand all d ppl gathered around clapped while KriYaansh entered into a passionate hug..

(swaron lovers im nt writing swaron I love you confession coz itz d part of one of d upcoming scene in dis ff.. well itz too far away .. but im sorry tat part is dedicated to anothr scene! Im sorry fr dat!)

All couples wer enjoying d fullest

Vicky took a bunch of red roses in his hands nd went in his knees

Vicky: dis is fr d gal who is my queen!!!

Kaagu I LOVE U!!!!

Neha: ahwww vicky NEHA LOVES U TOO!!!

Nd they hug..

Vish: dude muje yeh propose karna warna nhi ata but itna pata hai tat..

Ba: tu English mei ka bad bada rhi hai

Vish: uggghhh tum kabhi shaant mood mei nhi ho skte kya?? Huh! Saara mood karab kar diya!! Huh go!

Vishaka was going

Ba: I I LOVE U vishaka!

She stood frozen hearing dose! She nevr thout that those words wud hav soo much affect in her lyf!

She turned!

Lil awkwardly

Vish: I I I I love u too!!!!

Dey smile n go to dance floor

Simmi: NIL

Nil: haan.. (drooling over othr gal)

Simmi: jao uske pass! U don care fr me na huh! Hate u!

Nil: but I love u!!!!

Simmi: wat r u serious??

Nil: tumei kya laga Mazak kr rha hoon! Deko jabse clg aya hoon tabse hum dono dost hai! tumse accha partner dance mei b aur life mei b mere liye koi ho hi nhi skta!!!

Simmi: ahwww I luv u too!!!

Nil(in her ears): nd tumse sexy ladki b nhi milegi muje! So I love u!!!

She blush n hug him n dey dance..

Amar: rinni muje tume tuch tehna hai!

Rinni: haa kaho

Amar: kya tum humesha mere saat mere partner banke rahogi..??

Rinni: tumne totlaya nhi?

Amar: haan! Wah yeh laise hogaya???

Rinni: kaise ?

Amar: tumei del lar meli hal mushtil asaan hoti hai!!!

Rinni: ahww !!!! ur soo sweet!!

Amar: I LOVE U!

Rinni: really? N u knw wat I luv u too!!!!!

PRECAP: present nd past vday wid some "ahem ahem" scenes! matlab upcoming series of ROMANTIC updts

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Posted: 13 years ago
Its so cute n waiting eagerly 4 swaron confession.
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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute n lovely update
love kriyansh scene...
thnkx priya 4 updating it n namy 4 writing it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome awesome...luved it sooo much especially kriyaansh confession...update the next part soon...

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