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sugar_babe

@sugar_babe

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hey Nadia!!
I love your work, a huge M&B fan myself, do PM me!!

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sparkle2985

@sparkle2985

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

could u plz add me to ur pm list

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Hey well one thing thats special in your writing is your description of the features of the both hero and heroine...the hazel eyes and the lips and well comparision to Greek god...everything is supereb...romance is off course mind blowing and leaves me numbe with no words and unable to move, heaving and breathing heavily (with rapidly raising falling chest ) ...I guess you must surely start writing some novel not just fan fiction (don't ge me wrong off course you can write fan fictions but also full feldged indiviodual works with uniques characters)

And then whole readaing world will have M&B Indian style stories with bold themes which have slendid narration...I assure you you are beeter that even some actual writers I have come across!!!!

You one shot which had KS mehandi design made me look into KS in a new light and Holi and Fetivities night was just great and i kept wishing why did it stop without going on and on and o till I can tak eno more like Khushi and even then i fell your writing capabilites will make me want more...

I guess the last couple of lines are stolen from your untitled OS

Well as for that OS what do i say...A romance which starts with cooking esp with something as lovable as kneading dough and ending up in bedroom is almost like dream coem ture for me...

No no it did not happen in my real life...but it has been fantasy for long and the way you have beautifully put it makes me feel as i Have relived the whole scene being the beautiful girl!!!!

As for my comments being so far and few in between hope you would forgive me for that as i have mentioned earlier after reading your work i feel my whole body on fire for sometime and too dazed to react moreover my writing skill is not even one percent that even my appreciaton sounds hollow in front your hising...

Apart form the fact i was also ties with some personal issues because of which i couldn't take my time to read FFs/OS buy just went through the and replied to them!!!1

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

loved all of them. All of them were smoking.

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: uniquebluerose
Hey well one thing thats special in your writing is your description of the features of the both hero and heroine...the hazel eyes and the lips and well comparision to Greek god...everything is supereb...romance is off course mind blowing and leaves me numbe with no words and unable to move, heaving and breathing heavily (with rapidly raising falling chest ) ...I guess you must surely start writing some novel not just fan fiction (don't ge me wrong off course you can write fan fictions but also full feldged indiviodual works with uniques characters)
And then whole readaing world will have M&B Indian style stories with bold themes which have slendid narration...I assure you you are beeter that even some actual writers I have come across!!!!

You one shot which had KS mehandi design made me look into KS in a new light and Holi and Fetivities night was just great and i kept wishing why did it stop without going on and on and o till I can tak eno more like Khushi and even then i fell your writing capabilites will make me want more...

I guess the last couple of lines are stolen from your untitled OS

Well as for that OS what do i say...A romance which starts with cooking esp with something as lovable as kneading dough and ending up in bedroom is almost like dream coem ture for me...

No no it did not happen in my real life...but it has been fantasy for long and the way you have beautifully put it makes me feel as i Have relived the whole scene being the beautiful girl!!!!

As for my comments being so far and few in between hope you would forgive me for that as i have mentioned earlier after reading your work i feel my whole body on fire for sometime and too dazed to react moreover my writing skill is not even one percent that even my appreciaton sounds hollow in front your hising...

Apart form the fact i was also ties with some personal issues because of which i couldn't take my time to read FFs/OS buy just went through the and replied to them!!!1

Wow! Thank you so much for the wonderful words! It's nice to hear that you enjoy reading my writings 😳 and i had a really big grin on my face while reading your comment 😃😆

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

pls do add me to your pm list...

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trina2010

@trina2010

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Just love your writing. Please add me to your PM list. Thanx

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farhacassim

@farhacassim

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Your OS's are simply sizzling and awesome. Love all your work. Please could u add me to your pm list, thanx!

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654772

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

CONGRATULATIONS ON THE CORNER!!

KIYAAA! im not in the pm list?!?!?! how did that happen?

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

I don't know whether to be annoyed that my latest oneshot was moved to the FF section even though it hasn't reached 15 pages yet...

or be thankful that the MODS haven't closed the thread down even though it had mature content