IPKKND SS: Curse of Ugliness(Last part Pg 47)

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Tasha

@elena01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

You are great 👏

You just have perfection whatever you write it just perfect!!!!!!!

And i just the love the Arhi happy ending 😍

Shyam's death , Yipeee

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indeedisa

@indeedisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

This is amazing !
You showed Arnav and Khushi's difficulties immaculately, and even added in the reactions of their family. Ive always disliked Buaji when she kept on forcing Khushi to gets married, and you have no idea how many times Ive screamed out at her : well why don't you marry him then?!
Anyways loved it, and please keep on writing more
Celiza xox

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mannat27

@mannat27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

👏aawww...loved the cute ending with ASR n khushi (also shyam's end 😆)

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#404

nice story

Thank you for not killing Arnav off, because you probably would have a

miserable, broken or dead Khushi.

Then that would have been a tragedy.

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Shweta

@Sunset90

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#405

Review for part 1:

I love the way you have portrayed the thoughts of Arnav when he announced his engagement to Lavanya...

And that shyam 😡 He is such a creepwa!!

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Shweta

@Sunset90

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Review for part 2

😡 Shyam is so manipulative...

And it was easy for him to brainwash Arnav that Khushi was also not innocent coz Arnav's weak point is his Di and Shyam knows how to use this advantage...

Poor Khushi... She's always the punchbag! 😭

Loving the story so far... Love the way you write!!