IPKKND SS: Curse of Ugliness(Last part Pg 47) - Page 42

hey i just read u!!
this ss is just amazing!!
already added u as a buddy...
plz plz do pm me all ur writings!!

yeah we love him soo much...
arshi forever..
great story
hats off...

@the_rain: Nyc SS!!!!😊

when are you writing a new one

I bloody cried so much at this story...
My cousin brother and my sister must be thinking what the hell is wrong with me...:)
Loved it... You did a fabulous job

hey rain it was such a beautiful ss
i was so afraid in start bcz of the name of this ss
the things that stay with mee and touched mee
akash thinking did buaji had some feeling for shyam babua god i laught my butt off (anjali and khushi dont seem so depres)
and then i really feel justifying with ur ss khushi really work for her familie and they could not care one day for her
lavarnya telling what she reallt is and it is also that khushi somehow also betray her (not her fault at all but still)
all the mangalsutre fiasco and when she went to arnv the mangalsutre and arnav were both defected
shyame killed in jail bcz inmaits wont tolerate his creepy behavoir
and akash with 2 vibrate phones
arnav asking khushi to let him help her familie and he seemes preety scared love it
and aranv still as mummy and threding aman god
these were the things i really love and will always stay with mee
well i really want to see what happend with buaji and her obsessen of shyame babua🤣

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Edited:

You started this story in Nov 2011 when the hate marriage track was no where in the picture.

So, I give you saat topon ki salaami for capturing Arnav's brain-shutters-down-angry-young-man's-knee-jerk-reaction of marrying Khushi... dragging her to the mandir and all.

I loved how you brought the truth of Shyam out in a logical way and made Anjali rise out of it like a pheonix after her initial denial. Good she sunaaooed Arnav too.

Lavanya like the good old Lavanya of the show... realised the futility in pursuing Arnav and without holding grudges against any makes a decent exit... helping KKG one last time for all the good that she did for La... I love your La for talking so well with Nani and I love Nani more for telling Arnav that he is nothing to her. Tho I know she didnt mean it, he deserves such a kick.

Your Payal reminded me of the post-guesthousewali Payal who could talk and do things tho with hesitancy. Your Aakash bechara was bombarded on all sides. Good PayAsh found companionship and help in each other.

What do I say about Arnav and Khushi... You narrated the post Diwali angst of Arnav and the pain of Khushi beautifully...

Arnav 'hates' her before knowing the complete truth and punishes her but runs to her when he knows she is not keeping well. And after the complete truth is out... Well man, you deserve the guilt.

Khushi's reaction to the marriage... Her betrayal and hurt against him. Her breaking of the mangalsutra as if breaking all ties with him...

But he is hurt once and she goes running to him. Kya karein agar nafrat paas aane na de mohabbat door jaane na de?

And all is well that ends well ⭐️ A wayyy better hate marriage track than the show 👏

PS: Amidst all this high voltage drama you instilled humor too. Main bhi sochoon Buaji ko Shyam Babuwa ki itni q fikr. Aakash ki tarah humka bhi doubt kareka padi 😆

PPS: If you would have killed Arnav I would have killed you. Bas!

The ending was fine.

Just finished reading the whole thing and I loved it!