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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

congo for the new ff...

really amazing CS...

waiitng for the 1st part..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
hey hazra
very nice concept
lovely start
do cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
very nice cs.
continue plzzz
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
SORRY TO SAY MARRY NA KARNI WALE BAAT AJEEB LAGE BAKE SAB THEEK THA SOO SWEET...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
hy dear please cont soon...
eager to read first part...
please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

hi frnds...updated part 1 after a long time..but i was really busy..i wil try my best to update soon..

at riddhima's home..4 july 2010(monday)...all were doing breakast..
g-di..arman ka phone aya tha..
r-kab??
g-jab ap bathroom mai thi..
r-kya kaha usne??
g-use apse baat karni thi..
padma-beta..aj tum dono clg se jaldi ghar aa jana..
r-kyu??
sasank-kyuki aj hamari riddhima ko dekhne ke liye ladke wale aa rahe hai..😊
r-wht...
g-oh wow..😊
r-papa..par...
sasank-riddhima..beta tumhe sirf ladka dekhne aa raha hai..shadi thodi karne aa raha hai..
g-ab chale di..nupur mera wait kar rahi hogi..
r-ha chalo...
they left for clg..other side..
nd-beta...mujhe tumse bohot zaruri baat karni hai..
n-papa abhi nahi...mayank bahar mera kabse wait kar raha hai...bye..
nupur left..
m-nupur..kya kar rahi thi..kabse wait kar raha hu..
n-sry mayank...ab chalo..
they left...after sometime..in clg..
g-hi mayank..hi nupur..😊
m-hi gunjan..kab ayi tum??
g-bas abhi thodi der pehle..
n-aur samrat kaha hai??
g-samrat abhi bas ata hi hoga..
m-gunjan..kal raat ko maine samrat ko ek ladki ke sath dekha tha..
g-acha..
m-gunjan...samrat ek ladki ke sath aur vo bhi raat ko...
g-to kya hua mayank...aur vaise bhi mujhe apne samrat par pura bharosa hai..aur mujhe is baat se koi problem nahi hai..
n-ise kehte hai saccha pyar mayank...
g-mai apni class mai jaa rahi hu..
m-samrat ka wait nahi karna hai??
g-use 15 min aur lagegi...mai yaha khade rehkar kya karugi..
n-ok..chalo mayank ham bhi class mai chalte hai..
m-ok lets go...
other side...riddhima went in class n saw arman flirting with a girl..
r to herself-ye arman bhi na..kabhi nahi sudhrega..
she went to arman..
r-arman..
ar-riddhima...thoda late nahi aa sakti thi kya...
r-shut up...tum kabhi nahi sudhroge na...😡
ar-priya...mai tumhe thodi der baad milta hu..ok baby..😊
pr-ok arman..i wil wait for u..bye..😊
ar-bye baby..😊
priya went from thr..
ar-tumhari problem kya hai riddhima...jab bhi mai kisi ladki ke sath hota hu to tum hitler ki tarah aa jati hu achanak se...
r-shut up arman...tum...tum kab sudhroge yaar...😡
ar-tumhe kya problem hai...mai tumhara bf thodi hu ki tumhe itni problem ho rahi hai..
r-arman...u r disgusting...nvr talk to me agn..😡
ar-tum hi mujse baat karne ati ho..mujhe vaise bhi koi interest nahi hai tumse baat karne mai..
r-i hate u...😡
riddhima went frm the class...
ar-n i hate u tooo..
riddhima was very angry..samrat saw riddhima n went to her..
s-hey ridzi..😊
r-samrat...
s-kya hua...itne gusse mai kyu ho..
r-kuch nahi yaar..tum aj itne late kyu ho gaye??
s-vo actually traffic mai fas gaya tha...
r-ok..ab jao class mai..gunjan tumhara wait kar rahi hogi..
s-ok..bye..😊
samrat went in the class..
s-hi gunjan...😊
g-hi samrat...mai tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi..😊
s-😊
g-samrat...aj di ko dekhne ladke wale aa rahe hai..😊
s-aree waah...par ridzi ka mood kuch thick nahi lag raha hai...
g-thick kaise hoga samrat...di ko dekhne ke liye ladke wale aa rahe hai aur unhe ye sab bilkul pasand nahi hai..tumhe to pata haina..
s-ya rite..😊
after sometime..
g-di...di ap canteen mai...
r-kyu..mai canteen nahi aa sakti kya..(irritated tone)
g-di...apko kya hua hai??
r-gunjan..pls tu abhi mujse baat mat kar..jaa yaha se..
s-ridzi..tum meri gunjan se is tarah se baat nahi kar sakti...
r-oh god..mujhe hi yaha se jana hoga..😡
riddhima angrily went from the canteen...
g-ye di ko ho kya gaya hai..
s-mai to sirf mazak kar raha tha yaar...
g-zarur arman se jagda hua hoga..
other side...
r to herself-mai ye kya kar rahi hu...mujhe itna gussa kyu aa raha hai..oh god..ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...😔
arman came to her..
ar-ohh..tum yaha ho..aur mai tumhe kabse dhund raha hu..
r-kyu dhund rahe the mujhe...
ar-tumhe miss kar raha tha..😊
r-arman..just shut up...😡
ar-riddhima..mai tumse ache se baat kar raha hu aur tum ho ki...
r-arman mere samne se chale jao...i dnt want to see ur face...😡
ar-mujhe bhi koi shok nahi hai tumse baat karne ka..
arman went...
ar to himself-i really dnt know us pagal riddhima ki problem kya hai...
...
r to herself-oh god..ye maine kya kar diya..vo bechara mujse baat karne aya tha aur maine...ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai..😔
other side...
n-gunjan tum dono shadi kab kar rahe ho..
m-nupur..pehle engagement to hone do..
g-mom aur dad engagement ki date fix kar rahe hai...😊
n-ohhh..wow..😊
m-gunjan...tum itna blush kyu kar rahi ho...😉
g-mujhe...mujhe kuch kaam hai..mai chalti hu..bye..😊
gunjan went frm thr..
n-sharma gayi bechari..😊
m-pata nahi log shadi kyu karte hai..ab sath rehne ke liye shadi karna zaruri thodi hota hai...
n-mayank aisi sirf hamari soch hai..sab hamari tarah nahi sochte...
m-thank god tum un logo ki tarah nahi sochti ho varna mera kya hota..
n-mayank maine pehle se hi kaha tha ki mai kabhi shadi nahi karugi...aur maine mom dad se bhi keh diya tha...
m-nupur...thnx..😊
n-y thnx?
m-bas aisi hi...u r very lucky for me nupur..jab se tum meri life mai ayi ho tab se mere sath sab kuch acha ho raha hai...😊
n-same here mayank...n remember 1 thng..nvr leave me alone or else i wil kill u...jaan se maar dalugi tumhe...aur tumhe pata hai ki mai kitni khatarnak hu..
m-tumhe lagta hai ki mai tumhe kabhi akela choduga..nvr..coz i love u so much..😊
n-awww...i love u tooo mayank...😊
both hug each other...
hey guys...here ends my part 1...i hope u like it..dont forget to comment..so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvsalman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
amazing.. update...
so.. nice..
please do pm m.. about the updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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tht is really nice update Ridz ko larkaya wala dhakna aya rahay hai i hope it was sid of Dmg
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
very nice updte

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Fab update dear👏

Interesting...

Continue soon...plz...

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