Dosti,Pyar yaKuchAur-LAST PART,#25on pg30 - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

no yaar there is nothing like that everybody n i m 1 of them!!ohh really i m gonna miss it..............wating 2 read ur new fanfic n the other 1 2!!!

ur most welcum!!!!

Iqra

thanx so much...i actually had a test on wednesday, but it was postponed to today, fri.17 july, so now i am free...so most probably tmr i will continue both my ff's...be sure to read them.....

by the way, i wud like to tell u that u are really a gr8 ff writer too...i just totally luv the ff u and yur sis (twin??) write.....continue...and dont forget to read my ff's.....

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: **lover**

hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was wonderful 👏 i loved it...finally they meet each other 😊

yup...they finally meet each other...

and thanx for loving my ff and reading it... i am going to continue it tmr... hope u will read it them, and continue to read it forever..thnx

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Posted: 19 years ago
hey yaars, thnx but sry for making u wait...
i mite continue today if i have the time, but if not, then i will continue tmr (on monday)..... plz read on... and dont forget to reply
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Posted: 19 years ago
greattttttt jobbbbbb
contttttt sooooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

thanx so much...i actually had a test on wednesday, but it was postponed to today, fri.17 july, so now i am free...so most probably tmr i will continue both my ff's...be sure to read them.....

by the way, i wud like to tell u that u are really a gr8 ff writer too...i just totally luv the ff u and yur sis (twin??) write.....continue...and dont forget to read my ff's.....

heya!!

thats gud!!!thanx alot.....isha yeah yeah i will

Iqra

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~~~~~PART 20~~~~~

Krish: Toh kya tum mere papa ho?

Angad: Kripa??

Kripa: Haan beta, yeh tumhare papa hai.

Krish: Toh mama, kya aaj raat main tumhare aur papa ke saath so sakta hoon?

Kripa: --

Krish: Please mama?

Kripa really can't resist her son, so she has to agree with him.

Kripa: Theek hai beta!

Angad is also really happy on hearing Kripa say this. Angad suddenly starts sneezing, and Kripa gets worried.

Kripa: Angad! Ab tum jaldi se change karo, varna tumhe bhi bhukar aayega.

Angad: (thinking) I know Kripa ki tum mujhse pyaar karti ho lekin tum mujhe apni zindagi mein vaapis nahin lena chahti. Par main zyadaa der tak tumse yeh judaayi nahin seh sakta. Main apne kiye par bohot pachta chuka hoon, aur tumhe apni zindagi mein vaapis lena chahta hoon.

Kripa tells Angad to get up. She then leads him to the bathroom and tells him to take a nice hot shower to feel better, while she goes and gets some clothes. Angad takes a shower in five minutes, and comes out with a towel wraped around the lower half of his body. Just then Kripa comes in and when she sees Angad half-naked like that (ohhh!! How i wish I could see IQ like that!!) she gets shy and turns around. Angad quickly changes.

Angad: Done! Ab you can turn around Kripa.

Kripa: Good!! Ab chalo, Krish ke paas jaana hai.

They both go to Krish, and sleep. Kripa is on one side, near to the wall, then comes Krish, and then is Angad. In the middle of the night, Krish wakess up and needs to go to the toilet, so he wakes up Angad as well. Angad takes Krish, and when they come back, Angad is sleeping beside Kripa.

Morning comes, and Kripa in her sleepy state, kises Angad thinking its Krish.

Kripa: Good morning jaan!

Angad: Same to you Darling!

Kripa gets up with a jerk when she recognises that voice belongs to Angad.

Kripa: (blushing from inside, but trying hard not to show that to Angad) Kya!! Angad tum yahan kaise?

Angad: Aadhi raat ko Krish toilet jaana chahta tha toh usne mujhe uthaya.

Kripa: Theek hai! Main jaakar Neha ke saath khana banati hoon. Aur mujhe baad mein office jaana hai.

Kripa goes down and helps Neha in making breakfast for them all. Kripa and Angad eat wuickly eat their's and rush off, as they are already getting quite late. They leave Neha to take care of Krish. Kripa drives, but first, Kripa takes Angad to his hotel so that he can change into his official clothes. He changes fast, and comes out in 15 minutes.

They then head to Kripa's office. They go through the back gate, so Angad doesn't really recognise the office that much.

Kripa: Hey Angad, mujhe upar jaakar ek file leni hai, aur uske baad main neeche aaoongi. Bas dus minute lagenge. Kya tum yahi wait karoge ya mere saath upar aaoge?

Angad: I will come up with you!

Angad follows Kripa up. He finds the place familiar, but can't quite make out where it is. He sits at the receptionist area, while Kripa goes to take the file. She comes out and Nishant comes out after her. He sees Angad, and he is surprised.

Nishant: Mr Khanna?

Kripa: Nishant, tum ise kaise jaante ho?

Nishant: Yeh vahi aadmi hai jiske project hum abhi kar rahe hai.

Angad: Kripa, you know him?

Kripa: Yeah! Yeh mera boss hai. And i am the managing director of this company.

Angad: (surprised) Really??

Nishant: Haan Mr Khanna.

Kripa: Toh chale Angad?

Nishant, Angad: Kahan?

Kripa: Ghar! Krish ke paas!

Nishant: Kripa tum kisi ger mard ko apne ghar kaise le jaa sakti ho?

Angad is really surprised, and hurt about Nishant's comment. He gets angry at what Nishant said, but his anger quickly cools down when Kripa stands up for him.

Kripa: (also angry) Yeh koi gr mard nahin hai. Yeh vohi Angad hai jisse main pyar karti hoon, aur mere bacche ka baap hai!

Nishant: Sorry Kripa, mujhe pata nahin tha!

Kripa: Its okay. Ab kya tum yeh meeting please kal ya parso continue kar sakte ho? Humein Krish ke paas jaana hai.

Kripa and Angad back to her house. All the way, Kripa is thinking about what she did at her office just a few minutes ago. When they get back, Krish is soundly sleeping, and Neha is also sleeping beside him. So, Kripa makes some coffee for Angad, and they sit down beside each other, on the sofa in the living room.

Angad: Kripa, please kya tum mujhe--

He gets cut off by Kripa.

Kripa: Angad, mujhe pata hai ki tum kya kehna chahte ho. Main bhi iske baare mein hi soch rahi thi. Aur haan, main tumhe apne zindagi mein vaapis accept karne ke liye taiyaar hoon, khud apne liye, aur Krish ke liye bhi. Use ek papa, aur mujhe apne pyaar ki saktzaroorat hai. Lekin uske pehle--

Angad: Main jaanta hoon Kripa, ki tum kya kehna chahti ho. Voh kaam karne ke baad hi tum mujhe apna lena.

Kripa: Lekin kya voh tumhari baat maanenge?

Angad: Haan, zaaroor! Aur agar nahin, toh main hamesha hamesha ke liye tumhare zindagi se chala jaaoonga!...............

**PREVIEW---Angad and Kripa get together again, but...............!!!!!

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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What's coming up in the NEXT few PARTS-----


1) Angad and Kripa get together again

2) They get married, but when they are about to take the pheras.....

3)But whatever that problem is, they still solve it, and get married....+suhaag raat

4)But suddenly, 5 months later, Kripa suddenly says that she loves sm1 else more than she loves Angad.

5) 5yr leap.....+ end of my ff.....so sad awwwww😭
Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

gr8....plz do cont soonn

thnx..hey by the way, did u speak to ruby yet?? abt continuing yur ff kaash????? tell me soon...

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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~~~~~PART 21~~~~~

Angad then goes back to his hotel room, from there he emails Nishant. They meet up and finish the project fast, after which Angad straight away leaves for the airport. He has not been gone for more than two days, and Kripa already misses him like hell. Then, after about a week from when he left, he comes back. Its a sunday, and Kripa is at home.

Neha has taken Krish out to the park, and Kripa is alone at home. The doorbell rings, and when Kripa goes to open it, she sees Angad, she is so happy to see him, that she hugs him. After the hug, Angad moves aside, and Kripa sees her parents. They are standing at the doorway with tears in her eyes. Kripa lets them inside.

Kripa: Mama-papa, aap baithiye, main aapke liye chai banati hoon.

Angad: Nahin Kripa. Tum baitho. Main chai banata hoon.

While Angad goes and makes tea, Kripa sits with her parents. Her parents, with tears in their eyes, tell her that they have forgiven her, or rather themselves... Kripa cries, and hugs her parents, and they make up. Just as Angad comes out and gives them the tea, Neha comes in with Krish.

Kripa: Krish beta, yeh tumhare nana-nani hai, yaani mere mama-papa.

Krish: Really??

Krish goes and hugs his grandparents.

Gayathri: Kripa, ab tumhe Angad ke saath kuch waqt akele mein bitaana chahiye.

Kripa: Par mama, aap aur papa abhi aaye hain, aur Krish bhi toh...

Suryabhan: Kuch nahin sunna hai mujhe. Tum bas jaao.

Kripa looks at Angad, who is smiling to himself, as he looks at Kripa. Angad then walks towards Kripa and holds her hand. Then, together, they walk out hand in hand. Angad goes towards the car, and opens the door for Kripa. After making sure that she is safely seated in, then only does he sit at the driver's side, and start driving.

After about half an hour, he stops the car, and gets out. He opens the door for Kripa. the are at the beachside. They both go and sit at the bonnet (or whatevr the front of the car is called..), and admire the view. As the sun is setting, and with the moon shining bright, making the hundreds of stars in the sky look so beautiful, Angad and Kripa stare out at the sky, falling asleep in each other's arms.

They wake up about 3hours later, to find that its about 10 in the night. They quickly rush home, as they realise that Kripa's parents must be waiting for them. Angad and Kripa reach home, and are surprised to not only find Kripa's parents there, but also Angad's parents waiting for him.

Naina: 😡 Angad! Isi waqt ghar chalo!

Angad: Kyun? 😭

Dilip: Kyunki tumhari shaadi hone vaali hai, aur tum Kripa se nahin mil sakte. 😡

Angad: 😭 😭 😭 Lekin meri shaadi?? Kisse? Main kisi aisi-vaisi ladki se shaadi nahin karne vala. Main Kripa se pyaar karta hoon, aur usise shaadi karoonga. 😆

Naina: Isiliye toh! Hum tumhari aur Kripa ki shaadi ki hi baat kar rahe the. 😆 Aur shaadi se pehle dulha aur dulhan ko nahin milna chahiye. 😆 😆 😆
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~~~~~PART 22~~~~~

Kripa quits her job, and follows everyone back to Mumbai.

**i have decided to skip the sangeet, sagaai, mehndi ki rasam...and so on...as I dont know much abt them, now we go straight to the wedding**

**WEDDING**

Its Kripa's and Angad's wedding day, and everyone is rushing about making last minute arrangements as there are only two more hours until the guests start to arrive. Kripa is in her room getting ready. Anjali,Pooja and Mishti, who are already married to Kavya, Ronit and Kartik respectively, are there in Kripa's room, helping her to get ready.

Soon, the guests start to arrive. After some time, the baraat also comes. Mishti goes down to see everything.

Panditji: Dulhan ko bulaaiye.

Mishti: Jee panditji, main bulaati hoon.

Mishti goes back up, and brings Kripa down, along with Pooja and Anjali. She is looking very pretty wearing a heavy pink saree, and pallu. Her face is not covered though, and as she comes down, Angad keeps staring at her. Prithvi, and Josh, the two bachelors, stand there, wishing how they also had some1.

As Kripa comes dwon the stairs, she has her head down, but just glances up at Angad. She sees his mouth open wide. She motions Kavya, who is standing beside Angad.

Kavya: (closing Angad's mouth) Mooh band kar bandar!

Angad: (who is too busy looking at Kripa) Huh? Ok.

Kripa smiles to herself, and looks back down, blushing. They then lead her to Angad. Kripa and Angad stand in front/facing each other. Angad has to put the haar on Kripa, but he doesn't get to put it on so easily. All the girls lift up Kripa. But then the guys also lift Angad up, and he finally puts the haar on her. Now its Kripa's turn to put the haar on him. The very obediently lets Kripa put the haar.

Dilip: Itni jaldi hai Angad!

Everyone has a good laugh over this. Then, Kripa and Angad head over to the mandap to do whatever has to be done. He puts the sinndoor, and mangalsutra, and now the have to stand up for the pheras. They stand up, but just as they are about to take the first phera...

Someone at the doorway: Ruko!!

**who is this person**

{{{sorry guys, if u feel ihave copied yur idead or smth,but i didnt mean to}}}

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