IPKKND: Selfless, Cold and Composed (Completed) - Page 5

wow beautiful os

Update today plzzz jst love this OS

👏👏👏khushi's character is potrayed very well .great job,asr deserves this

AWESOME...thanx 4 the pm btw...

NYC ONE...DO CONTINUE...plz pm me

Originally posted by: moon_mine

beautiful!!!!

bt can u pls cntinue it!!!!

i wanna read the nxt!!!!

make it a SS!!!!

Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: stillunwritten

I love it! Oh, how I hope the show!Khushi reacts like this :( I like when characters become this way, brings more depth to them. and Khushi has a backbone in your OS, which is what makes it even more amazing. The CVs should take suggestions from your one-shots!!

p.s. I've never mentioned this before, but your 'update' PMs make my day!

I definitely think so too, she needs to stand up for herself and stop letting him push her around.

Originally posted by: minimuffin86

you are one amazing writer girl! that was awesome!

Thanks so much!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

omg Khushi's behaving like this...i like it...she showing ASR how it feels like to be on the other side...can't wait for the next part...please update soon and thanks for the pm

Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: desisweetheart9

Thanks for the PM. Great OS.

Thanks.

Originally posted by: ketki_arshi

wow it was so much unlike khushi, a changed person indeed, very nicely written, khushi giving a dose of asr to asr ha...haaa too good

personally i would definately want this to happen on our show...

I would love it too! Maybe we should all get together and star a petition? :P

Originally posted by: sharneil92

awesome one nayika! :D can you continue with this bit, and turn it into an SS?

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: pranatim

Please write more looking forward to your next update..

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: pranatim

Brilliant writting..

I need this to happen my poor soul needs it so that i can bear the pain of Khusi's Broken heart..I know its fictional character still feels this way great job done by Barun /Sanaya..these two are exceptional...

Its kinda unbearable to know what is going to happen how the mighty ASr will break down ...

The show is getting freaking awesome...

Thanks! I know, I feel exactly the same way! :D

Originally posted by: monsi08

O M G... you really have a gift of writing Nayika.!!!!...
Just lovely... just the way I want... rather everyone wants... isnt it ??? Cold, indifferent Khushi... not reacting or hyperventilating in his presence...
Arnav Babu... time for some rectifying actions for your mistakes 😊

ps... Does he know yet about Khushi's engagement... ? if not... pls continue and include that also ... we all want to know his reaction to the news and the action he takes... 😊

Thanks! You're so sweet :D

Yes, I hope Khushi REALLY does at least try to act indifferent to Arnav. I don't want him to know how much he affects her/

Originally posted by: shilpaaa.

YOUR A GENIUS :D i love this s o o much :) girl you need to continue ASAP :$ i love your creativity :)

Aww thank you so much!

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Thanks for the PM

Super duper one I really loved it

Even I think Khushi will stop smiling after this...

Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: rbarretto

yeah khushi well done lol typical ASR way... always wanting his way and khushi hahaha🤣

update lovely

Haha, glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sarach

wowww.loved it..poor khushi..and arrogant arnav..

Thanks!

I love all of your os's!! I hate how khushi isn't responding, but i guess she needs to hear an explanation from arnav first.

OMG kya yaar khushi? 😲

Originally posted by: tina_1234

NYC ONE...DO CONTINUE...plz pm me

Thanks

Originally posted by: JRSN

AWESOME...thanx 4 the pm btw...

Loved your OS so update soon...Make it fast.. :P

Thanks for reading :)

Originally posted by: SiRul

Update today plzzz jst love this OS

and her whatever LOL poor arnav is going crazy

Glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: soni4eva

wow beautiful os

relii emotional lukin 4wad 2 read more x

Thanks :)

Originally posted by: savvz

interesting .. and yes as always.. nicely written..

thanks for the PM , dear...

Thanks.

Originally posted by: sneak-peek

Truly loved your OS, Nayika! I enjoy all your writings. Please PM me every time you pen down your thoughts! It's a treat to read you especially at a time when our show is going through a sad phase.

Well done for this one too :)

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Zeee

this different khushi is interesting. thanks for the pm yaar! :) if you continue please pm. loved it.

xxx

Thank you for reading!