IPKKND OS :Arnav finds out about marriage :) - Page 5

This was too good not to be commented on! Your writing is fabulous and I totally loved it! <3 Enjoyed reading it to the core. You made me cry and my heart really could feel the heartbreak, the pain, the fear and the loss both Arnav and Khushi were feeling. I could see Arnav frozen on steps, Khushi's lifeless and emotionless nod, Arnav turning her around and hugging her and then whispering "Don't, please don't." I could see it all happen! Plus the music in the background completely adds to the effect. This has to be, without any doubt, the best OS on ArHi I have read so far. Watching the show makes me feel the emotions because the actors are so good. But I never knew reading something could make me experience them as well! I bow down to you, because this is beyond amazing! Keep writing more, because I will definitely be looking forward to it. I love your FF as well and I sincerely apologise for not having written a comment there, I was a tad bit busy with my exams! :) Leave that, I am heads over heels in love with this OS! Fab stuff! :D

That was really really good. reading it made up for the withdrawal symptoms during this weekend😊 you write so well.thank you

what can i say thats was just PERFECT
i was sooo heart broken after todays epi but this really has
CHEERED ME UP!
your an amazing writer and im so glad the IPKKND forum has a writer like you...
please do continue and also pm me when you have update x x
would love to read some more

Awesome OS👏,update soon,please add me to your list,Thanks😃

I wish it would happen this way.

omg its great i love it please continue😊

really pls continue ...its feels very nice to imagine these two coming closer...

that was brilliant!!

Seriously, you should post the next one soon...I really loved it!! Thanks so much :)

awesome! please do continue it :) pm me if you do.