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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Nice part
so Finally Daadi's plan is working out
Maanat is so sweet and innocent
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Congrats for your new thread
Interesting update
please continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
love it ...
but bery short...
plzzz write the big parts😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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4 pm me..😊.
ur updates r ..😳👏👏
me just ...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NoTe: my net is soo slow...me can't able to post big comment..sorrys..dears 4 this time...
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
nice part...
Mannat is so sweet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awsome part waiting 4 next part plz post it early plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hey dearies here is next one hop u ll lik..if u lik plz comment n hit lik ...if want some thing more plz tell
Part 21

Maan came downstairs..Daddi Maa went out for Mandir intentionally even before Maan came down. Sittin in the livin room Maan had gone through new project blue prints. Maan was frustrated.

Maan: yeh patta nahi hamare ghar main kya ho rahha hai..every body out aab Daddi bhi..(interlocking his hands behind forhead he thought )

Maan heard Mannat was crying aloud. : Aab isko kya ho gaya.(he jumped n ran toward her room ).

Maan: kya hua…kya ho gaya..kyon ro rahi ho..

Mannat : Papa ( she said jst this n hugged Maan tightly…)

This happened so sudden that Maan was not able how to react.But he hugged her bak.


Maan: kya hua..ro kya rahi ho ( he put his hand back of her head petting curly unruly hair )

She had hided her face in Maan's stomach…But Maan asked this so to answer she moved her face out

Mannat looked at Maan for some time…with big broad beautiful eyes …those were Maan's replica.She had tears..which melted Maan.

Mannat: Humko Maa chahea( she said these words.The girl who had jst one wish to hav father..she was askin for Maa)

Maan: Maa ( he was amazed)

Mannat: Mannat ki Mumma..Papa Mumma se kaho na jaldi aa jaye ( she urged )

Maan: tum isliye ro rahi thi.

Mannat: yeh Preeto Aunty hai na…inko comb karna nahi aata..( she complain)

Preeto : Bhayia ji Mannat baby ki choti banana bahut mushkil hai..ek to inke baal itne curly hai uper se yeh ek pal bhi nahi beithti.

Mannat: Preeto Aunty aap jhoot bol rahi hi …Maa to jab hum pillow per so rahhe ho ..woh to humari poni kar deti hai…aap ko nahi aati ( she put both her hands on waist )


Maan smiled n asked Preeto to go out.He made Mannat to sit.Took comb and was about to put in her hair

Mannat started to cry

Maan: aab kya hua..aab to preeto gayi

Mannat: Mannat ko apse darr lagta hai..hum ko nahi comb karaana aap jayo.( she made angry face)



scroll down plzzz😆

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

same part >>>>


She moved away..bent her knees n hided her face in pillow.Maan was not frustrated this time He smiled n put his arms around Mannat's belly.

Maan: Mannat ice cream khanni hai k nahi..aur toys …theek hai…plan cancelled..aise to tum bhoot lago gi…agar bahar gayi...( Maan again used trick )

Mannat: Hum bhoot hai…aap to kehte ho k bhoot nahi hote ( Maan was speechless on her presence of mind n she again put her face down)

But this time Maan got up n took her in same position from back.n placed her in front of mirror

Maan: bhoot dekhna hai dekho….Mirror main ( he teased )

Mannat got scared bit.But she knew Maan was there so no body can harm her.She opened her one eye n looked around.She found her in front of mirror.

Mannat: Yeh bhoot hai Papa..its me n u …I m not bhoot..it means u ask ur self bhoot ( she laughed aloud )


Maan: Main bhoot hu..dekho apne hair..kaise udd rahhe ha.i..jaise kissi n sar per rekh kar bomb challa diya ho…( he acted lik he is angry )

Mannat: Hamare Sir per to kissi ne bomb nahi challaya..apke sir per challya hoga…Maa keh rahi thi..k aapko gussa bomb ki tarah hai (she disclosed Geet views about Maans short temper )

Maan: Mannat tumhari Mom aisa kehti hai ( he placed on hand on waist )

Mannat: Ha Nandini Aunty se keh rahhi thi ..aap kahi explode na ho jayo ( she had disclosed all )

Maan: yeh Geet bhi na…usko main baad main dekhun-ga ..tum chair per aayo ( he was angry on Geet but concentrated on her )

Maan put her on chair n started to comb.But Mannat felt no pain…Maan didn't know how to made pony tails so he nicely gathered her unruly hair in a band….

Maan: ok achi lag rahi ho..aur yeh rahhe tumahre hair clips..it matches to ur dress.n he placed same sea green fairy hair clips on both sides.

She was in a jump suit .n Maan put pair of black trackers having green strips .

Mannat: Papa hum ache lag rahhe hai…?

Maan: ha kyo

Manaat: apne kaha nahi…Maa to yahi kehti hai..jab bhi woh humko dress up kartin hai

Maan: Tum Maa se bahut pyar karti ho Mannat.

Mannat: Hum sabko lov karte hai..Maa se, Arya se, Daddi Maa ( she gav all names till Shahid..but Maan was missing sum ware)

Maan: Mannat ..aur main…? ( this straight hit his heart )

Mannat: aap…

Maan: tumne mera naam nahi liya..u hate me ?

Mannat: Humne kab kaha I hate u….But u don't lov me…u never play wth me…..

Maan: Per Daddi Maa kab khelti hai tumhare sath..aur arya who to chotta hai

Mannat: But daddi Maa read me stories…also plays snakes n ladders..with me…aur Hum to Arya k sath kheltay hai..or usko hamari company bahut pasand hai..he always smiles.to find me..Mom says this

Maan had no answer for this.But he took Mannat n moved out room..n downstairs

He asked preeto to feed her.But Mannat started to hit her feet .

Maan: aab kya hua..

Mannat: u r lire Papa..u said me u ll take me out.

Maan: Ha ..I m not lire..jst let me complete my work..ten minutes ..till then hav some thing Preeto Aunty gives it to u

Mannat: No humko nahi khanna ..I wanna go outside..I need pizza….ice cream..( she put her both fists on her eyes )

Maan: every body in this hours r impossible one more added…I hav to b on my knees yeh nahi maanegi…Geet ki atma isme aa gayi lagti hai ( he murmured) n again lift her up.Placed his files in study…n moved out to fulfil her demands


Lov J


U ll lik this..hop If u lov comment n hit lik plz dearies...😆

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

congratzzz for thread 4,

update soon,,,,,,

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