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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur
awww
its ended
eding was il weired .
by d way r u leaving forum?
y u ending all ur ff?n i think gmyh to will end soon :(

plz dont do so ...n start a new cut mayur story..
i realy love ur writing

ya i know its abit weired

Lol..i ma not leaving forum, its kinda coincidence tht my all ffs are cuming to closure, and gmyh is not closing so soon….

Don't worry

thnks for loving my work

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

WONDERFUL UPDATE ...
and superb ending...all scenes are beautiful...whether it was of mayur or sajan or with whole gang...😊 all were superb...
agreed with the fact that it needs a practical ending...you did it very beautifully...👏👏
do write more FFs ...and by the way GMYH to chal hi raha hai.😆...waiting for its update...😳

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

Nice update and nice ending Fiza 😊

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arjunratirocks

@arjunratirocks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

nice update and romantic too love it

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

beautifull ending

aww but felt bad for mayur

luv them

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

nice ending fiza
waiting for another interesting mayur story
thanks for the pm

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

I dont understand..

why all this happen..

in politics that..

two.. lovers..

great team.

have to stay away..

for atleast.. a year

well very very nice..ff..

amazing..

lovely...

nice. ending

must say.. very practical.. ending...

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

nice ending

lovely ff😊

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

awww di aapne ff end kr diya😭

it was so nic...

n aapne itni jaldi end kr diya...

bt i loved it 2 the coreee

thanks 4 writing its sequel...

n mjhe ending achhi lagi

u did all the justice to ur ff

thanks 4 writing so nic fff

love u

may god bless u

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Fiza, so u ended this FF.

very sad, bt very well ending ... so realistic... loved it👏

like commissioner and gang convo ... they r too much ...specially benji 😉... loved him⭐️

sajan moment was so nice ... fianlly their every misunderstanding solved ... n they are together😃

LOL ... poor samrat ... fianally usko ye batana hi para k gunjan uski ...ahem😳 ... LOL😆

love benji ... he is a gem ... u know apart form mayur i loved benji a lot😃

he was spice of this CSI 😳... daal me tadka 😛

ohh ... to mayank away form nupur a whole year ... thats bad .

bt this is reality ... after that achievement ..ye to hona hi tha ... polices aisi hi hoti hai ... poor mayank ... poor nupur ... wo to nupur ki promotion ki khusi bhi nahi mana paye

very well written ... n very realistic ending.👏

ab tu CSI-season3 k bare me soch ... kaisa???😃

waiting for season 3 ... n also an epilogue of season2 ... jaldi karna😳

love ya🤗