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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
OMG luved this surprise
amazing
expecting lots of things
do write soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
wow loved the surprise
waiting to read it
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
awww

thx fiza ...

CSI WA MY MOST FAV .THX FOR D SEQUAL PAR STORY PEVIOUS STORY I MEAN CHARECTORSE RELATED HOTA TO ACCHA HOTA.

STIL WAITING EAGERLY FOR D STRTING OF D STORY
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Posted: 13 years ago
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im soo happy u r starting season 2 of CSI...
waiting for ur update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnku all for the wonderful response, Ur expectations are scaring me, hope I do cum upto them…here is the first part, second will be hopefully on Sunday….as its chnd raat tu cant promise…then after eid..it will b regular...strt will be of short updates…oki

Oki one thing more, character are same….its a pure sequal...yet there nature a bit changed….

Lov ya all…

Chapter: 1

Poking inside the kitchen checking, the lounge, a man slowly proceed up in the house. As little sound as he can make , he opened the door sneaking in, finding someone sleeping under cover.

With more silent steps, he walk to the edge of the bed, slowly removing the cover, to his surprise finding no one , except pillows under the sheet.

He looked around with utter surprise , suspecting the person somewhere near by…

But slowly what he found , sumthing crawling his body up….

He looked down at the thing, griping it he pulled it away….

Nupur: grinning…welcum back pati dev…..crossing her arms around his neck ..she said with a smiled

Mayank: thanku wifey…as he pulled her more close to him

Nupur: how was ur trip n training….

Mayank: thik tha….informative and quite helpful too…but

Nupur: but??/….

Mayank: I was so lonely na…as he slided his fingers in her hairs….

Nupur: hooo….so sad…kyun I have heard atleast 20 people around the world where there in the conference and training session had around 50…still lonely….

Mayank: hmm…..even us mein itni beautiful or hot girls bhi thi ….he smirk..placing his fingers in her hair from forehead n sliding it down to feel it ….n u know I have seen ur husband checking them

Nupur: bad try Mr.sharma….i know my husband is n honest n loyal person….shadi se pehly tu woh kis ko dekhta nhi tha…..

Mayank: hmmm…he kissed her cheek…n she moved him apart…

Nupur: chalo tum rest kero..im getting late for office….

Mayank: so bad…aj tumhar pati poray 20 din bad aya hai aur tumhain office jana hai….tumhary boss ki t u na

Nupur: han yaar buhat hi kahdoos aur sadu hai ….aj k off liya tha nhi kal call ker k bolta hai…ACP bhushan….just imagine bhushan ..pata hia ab mein sharma hoo..nhi kahta hai confusion hoti hai …as he is also a Sharma….ACP bhushan attend the meeting …

Mayank: tu meeting tu 10 bajay hai….abhi kafi time hai…he said huskily dipping his head in her neck…

Nupur: need ..to prepare ….late hojao gi….

Mayank: mein boss hona ….tu aj ur allowed to be late ……

Leaning more on her, cause her to loss her balance, plus the intimacy was making difficult for her to stnd, resultant they fall on the bed….

Removing the hairs tht where cuming his way, he dipped his head n kissed her shoulder deeply, leaving trail of kisses, moving up…she crawled her hands to get grip of his neck, digging her nail in, moving down again he did the same….

Cuping her face caressing her cheek, he looked at her after seems so long like this, n placed his lips on her, capturing them in to a deep kiss…

Ringgg…..

Nupur: mayankkk….she whispered…..

Riinggg

Mayankkk…..

Mayank: hmm….

Ringgg

Nupur: ur phone…..

Mayank: forget it, as he was busy loving his wife…..

But the phone was nt stopping trying to stop the moment

Nupur: pls ……c-h-k…..

With utter irritation n anger he slightly move his head to take look at whos no. is this….

Commissioner ….

Mayank: I hate my boss….

Still hugging her , he placed his cell on his ear….

Mayank: ur not moving anywhere smajhi….

Collecting his breath…..

Hello sir….

Com: mayank…kaha ho itni dair se call ker rah hoon why ru not picking up…..

Mayank: woh …..I was in shower….

To this answer she was giggling n he glared to her to become silence….

Com: n where is nupur

Mayank: sir I can't see her in room, looking at her intently, with a smirk, maybe she is down…he looked at her (as she was..)…….kyun sir

Com: we have a case, ask nupur to reach there n u to freshen up leave,…

Mayank: he moved a bit away…she was going in sum meeting …

Com: meeting is canceled…report ….

Mayank: sumthing serious….

Com: very much…get ready I'll brief u on ur way…..

Mayank: sir…

Nupur: kiya….

Mayank: he looked at her ..n agin ly down hugging her….case…important and critical…I hate this job….

Nupur: she chukled…acha utho ab…let me go..

Mayank: jaoo…im too joining u…..

Nupur/: breakfast ker k ana….

Mayank: yes ma'am….she kissed his cheek

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
edittt

Cascade
mere jaan-m what a mind blowing start.
ahhh mayur got married- its a good news for us
i really loved private moment o M. and Mrs. Sharma
and their convo was damn cute
By GOD maynk itna romantic kaise baan gayi...
yaar pher galad time pe call
hmm it seems something very serious...
lets see what is waiting for them

beautiful update jan
awesome
do update next part soon

Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay... first update... of csi season 2...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

i was so waiting for this...
loved... romatic... mayank..
and mr.and mrs.. sharma... are just incredible...
and this job.. not even let them... enjoy freely..
brchare... romance bhi dhang se nahi kar paye...😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
ye criminals bhi .. kabhi to becahre husband wife k bare mein sochna chahiye... ki... unhe bhi ek dusre k saath
"quality time "
chahiye...
well... very very nice update..
mayank has changed... and that too for good...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
OMG mayank itna romantic ho gaya? I love it. plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
love, the only thing which changes you like magic! so gr8 to see them changed!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
mayur r so romantic and ur update is very beautiful
now waiting for th next part

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