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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow gr8 update...
vickey ko kaha lai k gayei hugai? strange...
there is somethg fishy i think reason kch aur hai other then politics...
samrat is too good...
chai mai aleeping pills.lol...haad hai nupur ki...
bechara mayank...kitna change hugaya haina 1st season se...
loved it...
amazzing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww amazing update fiza..the best thing is,this time u hv come up with extra romance mingled with the main plot...u hvnnt deviated 4m the basic seriousness but in the mean time hubby wifey intimacy is also there😳

continue soon sis🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

awww beautiful update

thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Cascade
hey hey awesome update jana
beautiful as usual
bapre nups ki hitler giri-hehehehehe chai main sleeping pills-wah wah wah.. kya demag paya hai isne..:D

lol lol lol hehehehehe mayur ki season1wala teasing accha tha. mayurki saath humne bhi season1 ki romance miss kya..
and then sam and nups investigation was also very good
wanna know more abt the case
beautiful part
lovleyyy
keep it up jana
take care

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Posted: 13 years ago
Updated my comment on page 18
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.

loved it.

love this awesome foursome ... they r really CSI.

wo log kaam bhi karte hai ... n mayur to romance bhi kar leta hai ...LOL

loved it ... d way u shows ther investigation was superb ...

why dont u try ur luck on script writing?? i hv full faith on u..

beautiful upadte ... very nice written.

continue soon...

love ya...




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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank second season walw hi theek hai 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thnks a lot for ur love at previous one

@ruchi..if picture nhi dogi tu will nt be able to understand..thnks for appreciating my efforts

And all pata hai pata hai yeah mayank zayda pasand hai romantic jo hai….

n pardon error

Samrat and mayank went to vikram khurana's house, passing all the security process the were waiting in huge hall

Samrat: too rich ..

Mayank: itni security hai, ghar per..phir bhi sab hojata hai…

Samrat: yeah log moot se kitna dartay hain na

Mayank: khud jo logo ko martay hain

Samrat: yaar sary politician asay nhi hotay…

Mayank: hmm….but 99.9 hotay hain

Samrat: tu bhi na…

Mayank: tujhy pata hai mein ny kitna time khuzara hai politicians k sath

Samrat: han han…aru un ki betiyoon k sath

Mayank: reham ker yaar….biwi hai meri ab…

Samrat: mar daly gi

Mayank: han magr jealous hoker nhi, leg pulling se….tumhain pata hai na woh kasi hai

Samrat: he gigled..teray liyan perfect….wasy tu hamesha se larkiyoon se bhag ta tha..aur woh tera beechay

Mayank: yeah hi tu tareeka hota hai larkiyoon ko beechay rekhn ka

Samrat: oh mine ….

They both were talking but roaming around keenly observing each corner of the house…

Mayank: koi arha hai…:

Jumping to sofa the sat down…

A woman in around mid fifty reached there, n they stod up to greet her..

MRs Khurana: pls sit down…

Mayank: we r really sorry we r disturbing u at this time, but u need we need ur help to find vikram

Mrs khurana: its oki,..wht do u want to know

Samrat: do any kind of thread he was recving..

Mrs khurana: I dont know much , he was a very secret person, plus after mr khurana, he was very much conscious tht me n his sister remain out of all this….

Mayank: anything u can tell about him, pls it will help

Mrs khurana: everyday he use to go to the gym at 6am, and return back home around 8am and thn go to office, tht day he was going office directly .

Samrat: but the stall owner told us tht vikram take this route everyday

Mrs khurana: maybe…I don't know which route he takes..

Mayank: can we talk to his driver or any other guard who has been with him routinely ….

Mrs Khurana: ya sure though ur one office had taken there finger prints of each n evry person in house

Samrat: we also wanted to talk to his sister..

Mrs khurana: tht wont be possible, she is in a shock…I ..i don't want any1 to trouble, wht ever u want to ask ask me…..

Mayank and Samrat felt weird the way she was furious abt his sister…the proceed out to talk to the guards…

….

Bureo:

Benji: u know there is sumthing strange about khurana's murder

Nupur: wht..

Benji: he was murder very near the elections…

Nupur: ya..i know …this was because maybe the murder donto want him to win it

Benji: thts the point, kaun se terrorist gang ko election mein part layna hota hai….

Nupur: tu tu yeah khana chata hai k …..

Benji: yeah political scheme hai…..maagr is k kidnap nhi…

Nupur: han kyun k us se kisi ko faida nhi..but kyun nhi…

Benji: dekh akar yeah political hai tu 3 days maximum 4, us ki lash humain mil jay gi…cause us ko kidnap phir marny k lyan kiya hai

Nupur: per mara tu usay woh uski waqt saktay thy….

Benji: confusing abhi tak y thty didn't called….agar un ko money chaiy as un ko yeah bhi pata hai k police raat din ek ker day gi

Nupur: thts strange ….car mein se tu sary finger prints check kerliy…2 prints un identifiable hai, baqi tu vikaram k guards k , us k cleaner k aur us k khud k hain..

Benji: data base check kerain ….

Nupur: no data …the strangest part is tht k ek k half prints hain…

Benji: meaning us k hath jala hoa hai

Nupur: ya jalaya gaya hai….

Benji: so the car is clear…..oki…

Khurana mansion :

Guard: sir sehbab kal se route change ker rahy thy, un ko kisi ny dhmaki di thi k un ko maar day ga….us ko in ko timing route sa pata tha…

Mayank: tu unhony pilice ko infor kyun nhi kiya

Gurad: sehab hum thy na un k sath hamesha…..us din woh jaldi mein ek hi car lay ker gay warna do cars hoti hain , ek guard un ki car mein, aur baqi wk car mein un ki peachy hotay hain…

Samrat: aur kuch jo tum hum ko batana chaho…

Guard: nhi sehab….

Samrat: mayank hum consent papers sign kerna bholl gay oh freak……for surveillance there phone n cell..

Mayank: oh freak…chal

Samrat: ek kam ker tu us ko route driver k sath confirm ker..mein jata hon..

Mayank: better..

…..

Samrat went inside and hided himself behind a wall, as the shouting tht was being carried out in hall was too loud n weird..

Girl: ap ny mjhy unlogo se milnay kyun nhi diya, mjhy bhai k lyan baat kerni thi, ap kyun mjhy police se milny nhi day rahin..kyun…

The girl was shouting on top…

Mrs khurana: kyun k tum pagal hogai hoo….beakr baatein ker rahi hoo…tumhain tu khurana sehaba k qatal bhi political lagta hai..na k terrorist attck…halaky us ki investigation tumahry bhai ny khud ki thi…..

Girl: han mein ab bhi yeah hi khati hoon …..ap logo k samjhy kyun nhi ata…ahhh….

He saw tht girl was feeling dizy and thn she collapsed on floor, mrs khurana ask nurse to take her to her room…his face n high expression of surprise n shock……

Samrat went few steps back n thn with strong step sit ht she can hear , he went inside..

Samrat: sorry mrs khurana we forgot to get ur signature on this

Mrs khurana: whts this…

Samrat: ur permission to trace n watch ur phone lines…we need tht so tht if the call u guys we can trace….

Mrs khurana: oki…she signed it n samrat went out side…he was too much …reaching to the car he sat ..still silent

Mayank: tujhy kiya hua….

Samarat kya hua…

He looked him n shocked in no

Samrat; nhi nthing….chal lets goo

Mayank: are u sure

Samrat: ya 100 %

Mayank: yaar mjhy in k ghar k search warrant chaiy

Samrat: tujhy lagta hai yeah possible hai

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edittt
everyone demanding more mayur scene
so main konsa asmaan se tapak pari hu
so me too want more mayur scene...lol lol
ab ye romance ki bij case solve kare or case ki bij romance kare ise mujhe koi ark nehi parta...:D
accha now tell me is the mother related to political issue?? aur koi main motive ko gumrah karne ki koshish kar rahe hai...
hmm case was really very difficult...
as usual loving ur investigation part
good part janu
keep it up
Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
loved it lodsss...
arey wah!!!!! sab MayUr scene ki demand kar rahe hain toh main kyun piche rahu??!!??
i totally agree wid Fari SIS...
need more MayUr moments...
d story is getting interesting day by day...
API...i must say ap toh bilkul "CID" ki CV head ban gayi hain...😆😆
waise woh ladki kahin...😉 ok nhi batati...😆
loved it lodsss...
continue soon...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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