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saali

@saali

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

i read the hole fan fic caue am new to this fourm and ur fan fic was g8. it was so cool and cute and plz continue soooooooonnnnnnn and u said that ur';ll gona make it long so u better am waiting 😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#162

welcome to the forum and thx for all ur comment i'll try to post a long one todat i'll try cause am very busy today 😃

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Aliya khan

@kyph03

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Posted: 19 years ago

#163

g8 i just caught up that was g8 😃😃

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Aliya khan

@kyph03

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

continue soon fast can't wait 😃😃😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

PART 23
The next part
in the morning
kripa woke up
k- angad
k- anagad, angad she got up and she didn't see angad
then suddenly she saw him walk in with breakfast in his hand.
a- good morning kripa
k- goood moring jannu
a- so how was ur late night sleep
k- very peaceful with u
a- laugh
a- okie enogh of talking u have to eat
k- i don't want to eat am not hungray
a- no ecuse am starving
k- but am not hungry
a- commom for me if u don't eat then am not going to eat commo (and smile)
k- okie fine
so they eat angad feed kripa and kripa feed angad they took atleast 1an a half hour eating cause they were fooling around. lol 😃

k- am gona go take a shower now
a- meee tooo 😉
k- no angad
a- plz u need someone to take care of u in there
k- angad basharm 😆 😆 9 she got up and ran to the washrroom and angad grabbed her hand
k- angad plz let go
a- no i just want to stare at u forever like this
k- u can do the it's not like am going anywhere from and if i do...
a- no kripa don't ever say that again if u leave me then i'll die 😭
k- no angad if something happen to me i'll die 😭 😭
they both huggg and were crying
k- i'll never leave u
a- me neither
k&a- i love u
k- okie angad that enough of crying i'll be back
kripa left to take a shower
a- angad then remembered that his mom was comming so he decerated the house. angad phone rang
a- hello
am- hello angad we wont be abalblie to come today maybe tommorow okie
a- but why
am- i'll tell u when we get home i have to go bye
a- bye
and hang the phone

a- KRIPA
k- ya angad
a- mom not comming today
k- why
a- she said that they won't be abalile to make it today
k- oooooooo
a- well then it's just me and u all alone again today and the last time
k- ya so what do u wanna do
a- lets go out today
k- no angad i don't feel like it am so tired i won't be able to walk
a- well then i can pick u up
k- no i don't feel welll
a- are u okie? am gona call the doctor u sit
k- no angad am fine
a- no
k- and i noe u care but am okie it's just that am tired
a- r u sure
k- ya 😆

kripa phone rang
k- hello
p- hello
k- how u r feeling
p- okie
k- kripa can u come over for a sec
k- sorry pritvi i can't
p- plz i need to talk to u it urgent plz
k- i'll see
p- no kripa i'll be waiting
k- bye
p- bye

kripa then was think if she should go or not.
k- angad
a- ya
kripa didn't want to tell him
k- ooo my parent wanted to see me
a- okie
k- so can i go
a- ya but be back soo should i dropp u
k- no i'll go
a- no kripa u go alone
k- plz nothing will happen to me
a- okie when will u bee back
k- really soon
a- bye love u
k- love u tooo

and left, kripa call pritvi and told him that she's comming.

then pritvi decide to call angad
angad phone rang
it wwas pritvi but angad didn't noe
a- hello
p- hello ur wife had lie to u
a- hello who r u
p- ur wife is gon to her loved housewhich is pritvi she had never gone to me parent house
a- who the hell are u 😡
p- if u don't belvie me then go to her parent house and u wont find her there
a- shut the hell up
p heheheheheeheeheh she doesn't love u heheheheehhe 😆 😆 😆
angad got mad and throw the phone 😡
angad didn't want to belvie what the guy had said but it kept comming him his mind. so then he deiced to go to kripa's parent house and he went.

he reached there
he knock on the doorr
kripa mom opened it
a- hey
km- namasta who are u
a- is kripa there
km- KRIPA, she died for us since that day she ran away from the mandir and never came back

angad was shocked
km- (turned around and and said)
km- who r u but he was gone

(oooo by the way it was raining)
angad was walk on the street crying and thought wat ever the guy said on the phone was true. he cryed so much
a- KRIPA (crying0 😭
a- why did u do this to me why 😭 😭
then the song came on in guy version in sad version from the movie sheesha- assi ishq da dard and when the song was play he was thinking off all the time the spent together and when they got married and stuff.
( he had cryed alot ) he had got home and was all wet he went in the room and was crying

kripa had came back from pritvi house and saw angad cry
she ran to him
k- angad wat happen why r u crying
a- i hate u kripa i hate u
a- plz leave me alone go 😭
k- but angad wat happen
a- PLZ LEAVE 😡 😭 😭
k- kripa slowy moved back and ran downsatirs and was crying 😭
she was sitting downstair think wat angad had said to her
and on the other side he was crying toooo.

then later on that day kripa went back upstair saw saw anagd still cry she went in slowly
k- angad 😭
angad avoied her and was about to walk away when kripa grabbed his hand
k- angad plz tell me wat happen plz don't walk away plz 😭
a- leave me kripa
k- no first tell me wat happened
a- ooo me tell u wat happen where did u go
k- u noe
a- no i don't
k- my paren..
a- again the same old lie
k- angad
a- anagd told kripa everything
kripa was shock
a- if u love pritvi then why did u come to me why did u ruin my life
kripa was 😭
k- angad belive it'a all a lie plz belive
a- atleat noe stopp lying
kripa got so mad and started yelling
k- angad i didn't do nothing like that cause if i love pritvi then i would have married him on that day but i didn't cause ur love brang me here.
k- i had to lie to u because and told angad wat happen that night when she was going to meet her parent,
Angad felt bad that he didn't trust her and walked away casue he was feeling bad he could belive that he belived a unknown person we went downstairs and sat on the sofa crying 😭

kripa was cryying and pack all her stuff and was about to leave

a- kripa
k- angad am going
a- am sorry i thought
k- u thought wat u didn't even trust me
a- i didn't but
k- but was angad
a- am sorry ( he went up to her and fell on he feet
a- kripa am sorry plz don't leave me all die plz
kripa then bent down and sat near angad
k- don't ever say that again
they both hugged tighly 😭 and were crying and and then suddenly something happen to kripa she had faulted.

a- kRIPA
angad took kripa to the hospital
the nurse came up too angad
n- angad plz don't give her no streess she need rest
a- okie doctor can i go see her
n- ya sure

angad went in the room and hugged kripa
a- am so sorry this will never happen again i promise
k- am sorry to angad
a- i lovee u and dont't forget u have to take care of my kid
k- u meean our kid
they then laughed. then by night angad and kripa had came home and angad and kripa had so much fun they watch a movie played games and did alot of other thing together like u noe cought cought
angad too 😆.

i think that enogh i'll continue tommorow i hope u enjoyed. and it was preety long 😆

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago