OS:Until Death do us apart-Part 6, pg 23

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Awww, It's SOOO Emotional Even I Feel Bad For Lavanya :X 😳 But ArHi, Ahhh, They Are Magic & The Last Scene Is TOOO Cuteee 😍

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EBasso

@EBasso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

reserving 😍☺️😉

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madame princess... waah kya climax tha! 🤢 Itna melodrama? 😆

Meri samajh mein yeh nahi aa raha tha ki yeh bhaggu raam har baar usey apni or kheech ke khud bhaag kyun jata hai 😭 waise kya justify kiya tumne uske angle ko! 👏 I was visualizing how he must be shutting his eyes periodically as he tried running away from her as fast as he could. 😳

I loved the fact that this man was so disturbed, that he had no clue what he was saying to her. His retorts were not at all logical, his comebacks were totally void of reason. He accused her again of "Gale pading him" then when she caught him on it and said, you are the one who pulled me, he had no answer and said, "So you're going to use that against me now?" Bechara... I actually felt for his state of mind! 😆 He was on the verge of totally losing control over all his senses. awww 🤗 to khadoos singh raizada!! woh iske upar I hate you like I love you wala pheeling aata hai na! ❤️

Finally she was able to grab his attention when she said, just listen to me once and I will never show you my face again! 🤔 But when she confronts him about La, he puts his guard up again urrff CC! 🤢 Phir wahi attitude, wahi taane, wahi defense mechanism! 😡 KKG kare toh kya kare??? 😕 His loss of control and his insecurities are oozing from your entire update princess!

La ka iss conversation ko sun lena, aur bina kuch kahe sune wahaan se chale jana, was brilliant. It paved way for a much more melodramatic morning after scene 😉 par bechari khushi, La left her rattled for the rest of the night. Kitna dar laga hoga na KKG ko? I would be wetting my pants no? 😆 mujhe puri raat uski chinta ho rahi thi! Waise wasn't she supposed to take care of La and be in the same room as her all night? 😲 kya haal hua hoga bechari ka?

The judgement day, and the revelations:

One thing I loved right off the bat was how much nani has grown fond of La as a person. Though she never felt she was fit to be the Raizada bahu, the gradual respect came because despite her inherent bimboness, her heart seemed to have come and settle in the right place. And the same goodness of KKG that turned La into a good human being, had also turned Nani's perception change towards La. Nani being supportive of La defined the crux of the scene... and I just loved it. Okay I think enough said. I must move on and stop my rambling!

Uff even though La's heart was in the right place she put chamkeeli on the spot. Rightfully so. She had her peculiar intentions to see coming to life. And she did. ASR immediately came to KKG's rescue as he saw her being put on the spot. The protective instincts immediately take over! 😍 Well done princess. Bravo. 👏

and just when he speaks, La catches him. Yeh ladki itni stupid hai nahi jitna usey dikhate the... She caught on so well and right on the money! kya question fire kiya hai La ne ASR ko... ab kya reply karega ASR?! 😕

Aur jab sab ne guess kar liya ki sach kya hai... tab bhi woh khushi ko hi daat raha hai? Yeh kya baat hui ASR?

Finally Jija and nani come to ASR's rescue as he feels he is now in the limelight. But the ex-inlaws spoil the mood... kya karte bechare haina 😆 comedy ka maha muqabala 🤣 I pictured the whole showdown between the families before I imagined ASR sayind "ENOUGH!" no sorry, in this case he said "Just shut up all of you" 😎 lurvely!!! 😃

Oh babaji nandkisore.. finally a heartfelt convo between ASR and La! You moved me with this one. There was so much genuine communication, feel, pain in those few sentences my love! I think that was the highlight of this os besides the ending of course 😉

Khair... still delving more into the ASR LA convo, as painful as it was to watch, La nudging ASR, making him acknowledge his feelings, and the changes love made in him was so blaaddy heartfelt! 😭🤢 Till the moment he closed those eyes, he was in utter denial. 😡😒 I think yeh pura scene kaafi intense ban gaya. I was visualizing it so vividly in my head! totally amazing. 🤗

and now, the much awaited much twisted much comical and very much witty, the final climax scene 😉

bacha toh liya khushi kumari gupta ko, chinta bhi kar li, par jaise hi madamji ne apna confidence dikhaya, wohi insecurities waapis baahar kya kiya jaaye is ladke ka???

Finally, KKG has resolved not to be affected by this drama queen's 🤣 over dramatic routines!! Loved that bit 😆 finally banda calms down... sulks.. and this makes KKG burst out into a small laughter. Finally, they both let it out carefreely and get lost in each other's comfort, the much awaited happy embrace 🥳

Too smart this part was... I was in splitz. I actually read it a few times to gauge the mood properly!! This was truly a thoroughly entertaining OS in all aspects. Loved it to bits. but uff the melodrama...

very chicky stuff

Edited by EBasso - 13 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

wow, that was beautiful ending .

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

it was too good 👏

but i dint expect the end 😲

but i loved the ending ❤️

thank u for the pm⭐️

miss ur FF😭

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

fantastic work on the os!! it was just brilliant and the ending was just lovely!!

plzz plz write another one soon and send me a pm when you do plzz!!

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EBasso

@EBasso

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Updated my take above! ☺️

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Mohini

@mohini4u

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: -honeydew-
@Mohini:

Well, I was wondering ke aap kahan chali gayi thi... aap itne dino tak gayab jo thi ... sab theek thaak??🤗😳

bas thodi tabiyat kharab thi.. ab sab better hai

As for the pain: bas i would only say, it takes one to know one😉 i mean, itna hum log in characters main ghuss gaye hai, ke ab unse alag socha hi nahi jaata !!!! I feel the pain on the show, i guess it just get translated here!!!

aap ne toh hamari bolti bandh kar di ji! 😆 ab iska hum kya uttar de?

La: I genuinely feel she is a sweet nice soul, who is stuck in a helpless situation.. what an irony .. khadoos ASR ke liye Adorable La, aur bholi Khushi ke liye ghatiya Shaam .. Kismat bhi kaise ajeeb khel khelti hai insaano ke saath!!!!😕

I also feel same 2 same. She started out as somethin and turned into someone totally adorable. who wouldn't feel for a girl who stands up for raizada family's traditions against her own friends, and for what, not cause she agrees, but because she respects them. Jab La ka dil tootega, humein sab se zyada dard hone wala hai... and of course, jab Anjali ka tootega tab bhi

waise aap ne bahot sahi kaha nihaji! Life is always full of ironies na? sansar ka niyam types I guess!! 😆

thanks for the b-2-b update ...!!!

arrey 😲 thanks for rocking back to back episodes ji! 😃

boliye boliye... humne aapko kiski yaad diladi ... zara hum bhi toh sunkar jaaley... ke aisa koun hai jisne Mohini ke dil main iss qadar jagah bana li hai, ke hum main bhi unki kisi aur ka roop nazar aata hai ...😆

🤣 hamari ek dost hai My Ty! Woh bhi aap ki tarah jhakaas likhti hai 😆 par iss bar hum hamare Tin Tin baba ki baat kar rahe the!! ☺️

p.s": running to P3 to see maine aaisa kya likh daala wahan pe !!!

dekhiye dekhiye!! cliffhanger queens se pala pada hai hamara toh...