IPKKND FF:Cant help falling in love. Pt 6 Pg 29 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written!! Thanks for the PM.It came as a pleasant surprise😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Superb! Awesome! So well written!!

Thanks for the PM...do continue soon...waiting to see if we can hear Arnav's inner turmoil like Khushi's!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
nice update hanee!

our ASR sounds somewhat nice in ur os thank god! loved it 😍
do update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Gr8 part ❤️ed it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
I loved it!!!!
I am waiting for an update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awesome writing!!

Loved the way you described their emotions and their self conservations.

Thanx for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi friends. Thank you so so much for the overwhelming support and kind words. I'm truly touched and very grateful. And I hope my writing continues to entertain you.

Part 3 update coming up soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Loved the continuation hun!!

Really heart wrenching!!!

I do wish they'd just be together...make it easier for them and us!!!!

Looking forward to the update!

Thanks dear. I know I want them to be together too and we will have to wait and see if that happens.

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

When i used to read your posts i always used to feel that you may write real good FF, OS's and here you are today

It was awesome ! Please continue it and super thanks for the PM.

Hi Aahana. Thank you so much for liking the OS. Will definitely continue and of course, will PM you when the next update is ready.

Originally posted by: moon_mine

loved it!!!!

too good!!!!

n too emotional!!!!

i feel like crying!!!!

Thank you so much. I felt like crying too. I think especially what khushi is going through on the screen is heart breaking. I tried to stay true to her character to a point. Arnav is definitely not as bad as ASR on screen.

Originally posted by: meenaluma

superb update pls contine

Thanks. Next update coming up shortly!

Originally posted by: appy2011

very nice...

eagering waiting for 8pm tonight

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

loved it dear

nice one

even if u conetinue ll read

but when u give the link

give the link in which page u updated the part dear

so tha it ll be easy ok dear

Sorry about that. Will definitely include the pg that I updated on next PM.

Originally posted by: nims6

awesome...loved the part wen she talks to herself and arnav asks her to stop inner chatter...well written...

Thanks. That was my favourite part too.

Thanks

Originally posted by: shann20

loved itwaiting for the next

thank you! I hope the next update meets your expectation!

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

OMG this was superb loved it..

do pm me the next chap!

Thanks for liking it. Will definitely pm the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7

Beautiful part dear... Good job. Loved it. Continue soon. Pls pm me next time

thanks you. Definitely will be continuing soon. Next update ready and will be updating soon.

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hi dear

beautiful part

really loved it, so emotional

thanks for the pm

Thank you so much for reading it and loving it. I truly appreciate it.

Originally posted by: sarach

goood.liked it soo..too goood.

Thank you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: --Nargis--

Wow...tremendously heart wrenching...the end almost made me cry...lump in my throat and all!!! I love this Khushi...Even in her weakest moment, her worry is for him...how he will survive this decision...and prayers are for his strength and his well being...Simply Superb!!

Thank you. I guess Khushi is truly in love with him and even in her moment of utter despair, she only thinks of him and what is good for him.

Originally posted by: MsCeylon

Thanks for the PM

PLs continue it's too good to be stopped in between

Love the way you describe their feelings specially

Thanks for the kind words. You are very kind.

Thanks

Originally posted by: vinaben

to to to good so deeep!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks.

Originally posted by: devisridhar

wow nice

i hope this will come true in the serial than in the FF

urs was too good

liked the last part between kushi and arnav

plz pm me

Unfortunately for all of us, the serial took a drastic turn where ASR has re-emerged with a vengence. I would have loved to see the nice Arnav a little longer and romancing Khushi longer before the turn with Khushi-Shyam!

Originally posted by: subtlesapphire

Awww that was soo cute! welldone and congrats in your own new FF!

Thank you.

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Hey Nice OS!!
Please add me to your PM list!

Thanks

Originally posted by: Lip-a-Licious

just read both parts and they are fab

Thanks. Love your writing and thanks for the lovely comment.

Thanks

Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf

Awesome update!!!

Loved the ending..nice way to put a double meaning on what shes trying to say!!!:)

I'm glad you like it. Let's hope Arnav will not disappoint!

Originally posted by: egle

That was so goood!!

LOL pinky swear?! That's what I still demand when I want the other person to know the seriousness of the promise! The pinky swear is sacred. How cute!

I know the pinky swear. I still use it all the time and have yet to meet someone who has not honoured the pinky swear!!!!

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

very beautiful update...really loved it...thanks for the pm and please continue soon

Thanks dear for loving it. Will pm and updating shortly.

Originally posted by: swaram

Absolutely brilliant! You have talent dear, just loved her inner chatter! Waiting for the next part!

Thank you. You wont have to wait very long. Just a few minutes!!!

Originally posted by: Radhe1085

Beautiful !!!! please do continue.

Thanks you!!!

Originally posted by: littlemoi

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME UPDATE!!

Thank you!!! Thank you!!!

Originally posted by: aquablue17

whoa! tht wuz mindblowing it wuz truly amazing! plz pm me if you update n thanks for the other pms! i loved it alot !

Thanks for liking it. Will definitely pm when next update and next for reviewing the other pms.

Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

too gud ... luvd it ..really like ur writing style ...pls update soon n thanks for d pm

Thanks for the lovely comment. I'm glad you like the way I write. That's the best compliment. Its nice to hear that. Thanks again. Truly grateful!

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Very well written!! Thanks for the PM.It came as a pleasant surprise

Thank you for appreciating my work. I'm touched.

Originally posted by: american_desi

Superb! Awesome! So well written!!

Thanks for the PM...do continue soon...waiting to see if we can hear Arnav's inner turmoil like Khushi's!

Thank you. And yes Arnav's inner turmoil's are coming up soon!!! Hope it lives up to your expectation. Let me know either way!

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl

nice update hanee!

our ASR sounds somewhat nice in ur os thank god! loved it

do update soon!

Thanks Nadz. I've toyed with the either of making Arnav mean and nasty but couldn't quite get him there. I think we have enough of his antihero profile on screen.

Originally posted by: M_n_h

Gr8 part ed it
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: anita_21492

I loved it!!!!

I am waiting for an update

Thanks for the pm

Thanks, next update soon, promise!!!

Originally posted by: Davi

Awesome writing!!

Loved the way you described their emotions and their self conservations.

Thanx for the PM.

Thank you so much. Truly appreciate your comments and I'm absolutely thrilled and grateful that you like my writing.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
I am sorry , I don't know your name...

Any chance of getting up update today??

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