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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congracts for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please update soon cannot wait now😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Made mine mind for dearies who lov my work..this is jst for them...if u read..then comment..who r not interested thanx .For my dearies here is next 😆

Part 13


Maan held Geet in his lap n without waiting for stretcher he ran toward causality. But within fraction of seconds stretcher was in front of Maan.Geet again got lil conciseness before Maan can put it on.

Geet: Maan (she again became silent)

Maan: Geet (Maan who had not in state too think…was in tears..evn without knowing which bond he shared with this girl..even inn this state only remember him)

Staff put her on stretcher…but Geet was holding Maan's hand..Also without thinking any more Maan was running with them toward Operation Theater

Doctors knew who was with Geet. Ram told them everything n without waiting for Ram doctors had started their work..coz they had responsible person lik Maan Singh Khuraana with her.

Maan tired to go inside But nurse stopped him.

Maan: Damn let me with her (he shouted when Doctor Sharma came)

Dr Sharma : plz Mr Khuraana let us do our work..don't worry….( n they moved in )

Within 15-20 minutes Ram,Tina n Rano…came there.But still operation was on.

Rano: Maan kya hua mere Geet ko ?( she held his arms n fell down as such )

Tina: Randeep get up …b strong. this is not time to v weak..She needs our prayers.( Tina held her from back n made her to stand)

Maan:Mrs Handa plz every thin gonna b fine.( he consoled her)

Ram was talking to staff n made call to Inder.

Rano: kya theek ho jayega..kabhi kuch theek hua hai meri Geet k sath….kabhi nahi ( her duptaa fell down on floor n she started to shout )

Ram came running..he gave duptaa on Rano.n hugged her.

Ram: Rano kush nahi hogga hamari bacchi ko ..usne kabhi kissi ka burra nahi chaha (he put his hand on her forehead)

Tina also hugged Rano from behind

Tina: Ram theek keh rahhe hai..kush nahi hogga Geet ko..(she consoled Rano )

Ram moved toward Maan who was lik a statue.

Ram: Maan how it happened ?

Maan told whole story how they reached mazaar…fight…fires…n bullet hit Geet.But he not told real story coz it might b serious .

Both ladies also came to kno whole incident.

Rano: Agar mujhe patta hota main kabhi nahi janne detti Geet ko…maine socha agar ek baar wahan jaakar Geet ko itni tasli aur shanti milli hai..to let her go this time…She was too happy two days back…so I asked her to go with Sham Lal. (So Maan was sure now who he had met ..on other day ..She approved that)

Tina: Per Maan aap wahan gaye thay.?(this sudden question made him to think what to reply)

Maan: Actually we had no work so ..Addi asked to go outside..n we cam to know about Dargah so…me n Addi went there..n all that happened

he hided his last visit coz that day Geet was also there..he wanted to clear all things ..to link things before coming to conclusion ..n the reality could create confusion at this moment.

After half n hour Doc came out with a smile..they moved in such a manner lik gonna attack Dr Sharma

Ram: How's she?

Rano: Dr Geet.(jst these words)

Doctor asked them to b relaxed

Dr Sharma: She is fine..ya bullet hit her….per golli ek tarf se hokar bahar nikal gayi..means bullet hit her on side….not in middle ..other wise it might b dangerous..She is fine now.

Tina: Doc hum mil sakte hai .

Doctor S: Oh u hav to wait…let us shift her to room..n she is unconscious ..but don't worry ..she ll regain her consciousness soon .but thanx Mr Khuraana who reached hear in lil time.( looking at Maan...n he put hand on shoulder)

Tina: Dekha Rano maine kaha tha na sabh theek ho jayega…Maan farishta ban kar aaye hai hamari bacchi k liye.

But Maan closed his eyes…coz every word Tina said that was wrong it was Geet ..who became savior for him. Around 10:30 Geet regained her consciousness.All were waiting outside accept Rano.

Geet: Maan…( she was again said same word )


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next : Same Part


Rano: Ha beta bollo main pass hu tumhare (Rano thought Geet said Maa…)

Doctor came n checked Geet …every thing was okey.

Doctor asked all to wait for morning to meet her….Ram asked Maan to go back home n take rest but he denied to go home. Inder came as soon as possible.

Early in the morning

Tina came to Inder

Tina: Inder you should go home..atlest for change…n Maan plz u also….

Inder: Per Tina .

Tina: I know Inder..m not saying u stay there..but change kar k fresh ho jayo.aap log after that u can come..She is sleeping.

Maan: I think Tina ji u should go..u r also tired(he wanna stay )

Tina: Maan I m fine first u both go ..when u come back..me n Ram ll go..n then breakfast bhi lay aayegay….Rano k liye..seh refused to go..n this is rite ..Geet needs her.

Maan n Inder came home..changed…eat nothing n back within hour.After that Tina along with Ram went …when they came back it was around 8:15.

Doctor came to check Geet..She had regained her consciousness completely

To find her father in front of her... She was too happy.But She wanted Maan ..whether he was fine.

Geet: Mamma..aur kon hai bahar…?

Rano: Tina..Ram..aur Maan..sabh kal se yahin hai..ek pal bhi nahi soya koi..even Maan..wohi tumko yahan le kar aaye.

Maan was alrite this brought a internal happiness to Geet.

Inder: Beta…kyo jati ho akele…kahi…Rano nay batya kaise…wahan ladai hui..aur goli tumko lag gayi…..woh to Maan he le kar aye tumko yahan..

So Geet thought Maan had not told any thing…

Geet: Aur kaya bataya….?

Rano: Aur kya beta..yahi k kaise fight hui…aur tum target ban gayi…

Geet: Ya yahi Maa…k Chadar chadaney ko le kar ladayi hui thi ( she smiled n gav turn to conversation )

Inder: Geet every body wanna meet u…but doctor asked..only two at once…so I gonna send them .

Geet: Pa..jst Mausi n Mausa ji…

Rano: But beta u should meet Maan also..he did a lot for u..

Geet: Maa..me so tired…n never met him before properly..so Mausa ji n Tina Massi

They said yes n moved outside.Maan was waitin for this moment..when He could meet..her…It was other think ...She was not in state to giv answers for all his doubts n questions .

Tina n Ram came in..n Even Geet asked them not to send Maan inside..n Tina had to make excuse that Geet wanna rest.

Maan had expected this…so it was not a shock for him.He again remained speechless.She was improving slowly ...All went back home Rano was there..coz they had nothing to stay…Maan was on site around 2 00 ..he was back...when Tina was leavin for hospital with lunch.

Maan : Tina ji u r going ?

Tina: Ya Lunch for Rano.

Maan: Giv it to me..main jatta hun..

Tina: But Maan.

Maan: Actually I got call from police ..want statement from Geet n Me..so I should b there..

Tina: ok if u r going that's fine…main Ram k liye luch le jatti hu..office.

So Maan got that chance which he wanted.


Hey buddies I again dare to write if u wanna comment u r most welcome..but read it by heart... comment n lik...


My next update is ready ll pm buddies after some time

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read the whole thing at once... amazing story... immensely amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Awesome
Still our mysterious geet is avoiding maan
Maan was realy sweet in hiding the truth
Wateing what vl happn next..
Thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one...

Maan is going to meet Geet...waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awasome update dear
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankfully she is ok she follows him all the time
why she is avoiding him
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Amazing , loved it but want to see soon maaneet's confrontation as geet is avoiding him.

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