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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

WHAT AN EVIL CHARACTER

THINKS MONEY CAN BUY ANYTHING

HOPE SHE IS ABLE TO GIVE IT BACK TO HIM IN THE FUTURE

LOVED THE PROLOGUE

DONT MIND THE DARK STORY AS LONG AS THE END IS HAPPY

WAITING FOR THE REACTION

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

OMG Maan is so evil.

U have chosen a very appropriate title for ur story.

How dare he say...'I want Geet...for one night'.

But well must admit its an awesome to the story.

Pls continue soon.

Thanx for the pm.

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

1st congrads 4 new ff...and thanks 4 the warning...hehheheee

awesome starting...he want her 4 one night...vo bhi geet ki family se hi poochliya...ek hi harkath se patha chel reha hai hum worst expect kare...pur kya karu aadath se majboor hu tho na padu ye tho nehi hone wali...so zyada heart attack dena math..loldedo tho bhi hume pehle se hi warn kardena...precautions lethe hai padne se pehle...lol...continue soon...

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

oh my GOD...Maan wants Geet only for one night... he is so evil...I am getting goosebumps...I am sure now Geet will give him good takkar...he doesn't understand that how can a family throw their daughter in front of him for money...

yaar please update more fast...I want to read more...thanx for pm