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Posted: 13 years ago

His phone started to ring and he picked it up, " MAAAN! MAAN KE BACHE TU KAHAAN HAIN!?" roared Laaj.

"Di main..main theek hoon" replied Maan. Laaj calmed down suddenly and asked quietly, " Kya hua Maan..."

"Kuch nahin di..." replied Maan.

" Maan...tu mujhse kuch nahin chupa tha, bata mujhe" replied Laaj.

" Di bata diya naa, kuch nahin" replied Maan.

"Is it because of a girl?"asked Laaj. "Di you know I'm not-"

"Di.." sighed Maan.

" Di ke bache, you know you can't hide anything...main teri baari behn hoon... aur woh jo bhi hain Maan... bohot khush naseeb hain" said Laaj.

"Di main kaisay karsakta hoon? Kaisay? Aap hi batayiye..." replied Maan.

" Kaisay kyun Maan? Tu bhi insaan hain... you have feelings too!" added Laaj.

" I know I do..I know...par main-" said Maan.

"Meri baat kaan khol ke sun le... don't even dare come back to this house if you don't have the courage to tell her that you love her..." said Laaj.

She shut the phone on him and Maan gulped... He heard the reply from his older sister...

He shut his phone and looked out into the distance again...

**********

They reached Hoshiyarpur and Maan got up and was about to put his hand on Geet's shoulder to wake her up until he movedback.

"Geet..." he said softly.

Geet slowly opened her eyes and she said, " Kya hua Maan?"

" Hoshiyarpur station is here... chalein" said Maan. Geet nodded and she got up. She grabbed her bag and Maan grabbed his things.

They filed out of the train and Geet said, " Please come to my house... we have a lot of explaining to do"

Maan nodded and they walked out of the station towards Geet's home.

Maan and Geet walked silently...

Laaj's words were ringing in his mind... They walked on for a couple of minutes until they reached large iron gates that seemed so high.

"Chachu! Open the gate!" called Geet. A old man with a snowy white beard smiled, " GEET puttar!"

"Jaldi se!!" said Geet.

Chachu opened the gates and he was about to say something else until he froze. He looked at Geet's wedding bangles...

And sindoor.

He switched his gaze to Maan. He looked down, " Aandar aao.."

Maan Geet smiled and went towards the large wooden doors of the Handa Haveli.

"Maan... papa thore se ghusse main hongay, par don't worry...aap par kuch nahin aayega" replied Geet calmly.

She knocked on the door.

And then the door flung open to a tall and large man with a grey beard.

He froze.

It was Geet' father at the door... Mohinderlal looked at his daughter who had her wedding bangles on... sindoor and a red

Thread around her neck.

"Papa ji..." squeaked Geet.

Mohinderlal switched his gaze to Maan and he stiffened up standing straight...

"andar aa" hissed Mohinderlal. Geet nodded and both of them entered the house. Maan followed behind Geet and they went into the living room.

"Sit" snapped Mohinderlal.

Geet sat down and Rano came running out, " GEET... GEET... TU THEEK HAIN NAA?"

She stopped at her husband's glare... She looked down and backed away.

Geet stood up, " Papa! It was my fault.. I'm sorry... please, maa ko kuch nahin kahein.. .I swear I'll explain everything to you!"

Mohinderlal raised his hand in silence and Geet went quiet and sat back down.

"Maan..." said Mohinderlal.

Maan immediately stood up and he had his hands at his side. He saluted, " Yes sir.."

Geet's eyes went wide with surprise.

Maan looked straight ahead of him and Mohinderlal broke into a grin, " Thankyou..."

Geet shot out of her seat.

Maan didn't say a word and Mohinderlal walked over and saluted Maan, " Good afternoon...Major..."

Geet was about to faint! Major was a title only given to a military official.

She processed her thoughts and then realized... Maan was a Major in the Indian Army...which meant that he knew

Geet's father from the beginning.

"Good afternoon sir" said Maan. Mohinderlal put his hand on Maan's shoulder, " Well done my boy..."

Geet not going to spare anyone for hiding this from her! Suddenly, Chandini and Arjun came rushing out.

"Geet! Geet tu theek hain naa?!' asked Chandini. Geet was too shocked to reply...

" Thankyou sir" replied Maan.

" Thank you for bringing my Geet home safely to me..." smiled Mohinderlal. Maan loosened up and he grinned..."

Geet went to her father, " Papa jii.. what the hell is going on!?!"

Mohinderlal put his one arm around his daughter, " Geet... meet Major Maan Singh Khurana..."

Geet pointed at him softly, " Papa.. he's... he's.. you.. you sent him to me?"

" Yes I did... he came to attend your wedding but then on my orders, he brought you back..." replied Mohinderlal.

"You two have some explaining to do" hissed Geet.

Mohinderlal began explaining to Geet,

"I heard of your doings at the door when you were planning to run away... I was about to step in and stop you but I decided I would give you the time of your life... I sent Maan to get you, and I knew you were going to the train station so I sent Maan there quickly. He was the perfect one to catch my fast daughter... you're crazy and reckless... you needed someone opposite of you who could handle you properly. And Maan was the best one for this job..."

Geet looked at Maan, " Maan...why didn't you"

"It was a personal mission that my best officer Maan Singh Khurana could only do.." said Mohinderlal.

" It was orders Geet.."replied Maan.

Geet looked down, " Papa... I'm sorry"

Mohinderlal laughed, " Geet mujhe teri adat pata hain.."

Rano came and hugged her daughter, " Aisa kabhi mat karna Geet..."

Geet hugged her mother, " I promise maa.. "

Rano smacked her daughter on the back softly as she hugged her, " Mujhe tere vaade pata hain..."

"Sorry beautiful..."smirked Geet. Rano hushed Geet and Chandini let out a giggle.

" Papa aap meri shaadi ke baray mein?" asked Geet.

Mohinderlal sighed, " Yeh to poochna bhool gaye... kya hua Maan?"

"Sir, it was actually a..." began Maan.

Geet felt something at her throat again and she looked down, " It was the..."

"The best mistake I ever made" replied Maan.


Geet looked at him shocked, " What?"

" Sir... I have something to tell you,..." said Maan. Mohinderlal smirked, " You love my Geet? I knew that would happen my boy..."

Maan went completely quiet... And even Geet looked like she wanted to faint.

"My boy... I knew that you were the perfect one for her as soon as you accepted my order of getting Geet safely back to me..." added Mohinderlal.

Maan gulped... so General Mohinderlal Singh Handa planned this too!?

"Tum to aagay nikal gaye my boy! Shaadi bhi karli!" added Mohinderlal.

Maan said, " May I formally and traditionally ask for your daughter's hand sir?"

" Yeh koi poochne ki baat hain my boy?" smiled Mohinderlal. Geet broke into a big smile.

Geet blushed a little and Maan replied, " Thankyou sir..."

He saluted Mohinderlal and Mohinderlal went into an embrace with Maan, " My boy... thankyou..."

Rano hugged Geet, " Lakh lakh vadaiyaan Geet..."

Geet was overjoyed! She had NEVER expected this so fast! So early?!

*******

Maan would stay over and Mohinderlal insisted that he stay. And Geet of course led him towards his room.

"Your room iss..." said Geet as she stepped into a deep hallway... He looked around and grabbed her hand and spun her against him.

Geet blushed and babbled, " Maan yeh kya kar rahe hain aap.. agar papa ji ne dekh liya toh?"

" chup... bilkul Chup Geet..." whispered Maan.

He stroked her cheek, " Im sorry kay maine pehle nahin kahaa..."

" Kya?" asked Geet.

"That I love you" replied Maan.

Geet blushed harder and bit her lip. He put his fingers on her chin and inched her face towards his...

She closed her eyes until she stopped his lips with her fingers.

"No Major...shaadi se pehle nahin" said Geet. Maan sighed, " Geet come on humari shaadi ho gayi hain..."

"Na naa.. major, woh ek achi ghalti thi... aab ek sahi ki shaadi chahiye hain mujhe" replied Geet.

She struggled out and turned around, " I love you too Major.."

"Then?" asked Maan with a gorgeous smirk.

Geet winked and walked on towards his room with him following in behind her.


Epilogue BELOW!



Edited by Desigirl144 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Epilogue


******5 years Later*****

It had been five years since Maan and Geet had met and gotten married. They wed traditionally in the most beautiful manner that many still remember.

Now Maan and Geet were parents to a 2 year old son named Aryan Singh Khurana.

Army Base, Delhi:

Geet stood proudly with her son who had his fingers intertwined with hers. She smiled at the door of the airplane opening.

Geet knelt down and said, "Aryan... papa!!..." Aryan broke into a sweet smile and barely said, " Papa" in excitement.

Geet scooped him up in her arms and they both stared towards the door which had many army men walking down the stairs.

Suddenly, Maan walked out with his bags, and he slipped on his sunglasses and he wore his hat. His uniform had many medals of bravery.

"Paaapaaa!" yelled Aryan pointing in Maan's direction. Maan came walking down the stairs and as soon as he saw his son he rushed down.

He dropped his bags midway and Aryaan struggled out of Geet's arms. She let him down and he ran towards Maan.

Maan scooped Aryan in his arms and Aryan wrapped his arms around his father's neck, " Papaaa!!!"

Maan kissed his son on the cheek, " Ariii!"

"Kaisay ho champ?" asked Maan as he put his hand on Aryan's cheek... Aryaan struggled, " Achaa..."

Maan chuckled and Geet stood there admiring her two most favourite men...

Geet cleared her throat suddenly and Aryan craned his neck around and said, " Uh oh..."

Maan smirked... even his son knew when his mother was feeling left out.

Maan looked at his Geet... she stood there proudly like his wife... She wore a light blue sari with her long brown hair resting on her slender back.

She wore her sindoor thickly this time and her longest mangalsutra. She wore her bangles the way Maan liked them to be... full and decorated...

He walked towards her with Aryan in his arms... Geet smiled approvingly and Maan kissed her forehead as he stood in front of her.

" Kaisi Ho Geet?" asked Maan as he slipped an arm around her shoulders.

Geet sighed, " Aapke bina kaisay theek hongay?"

"I know...it's been almost four months!" said Maan.

" Yeah and I hope this is your last long mission..." replied Geet. Maan nodded, " I'm officially going to work here in Delhi"

Geet put her handon his cheek, " I love you..."

"I love you too Mishti..." replied Maan.

"Wuv!!" said Aryan. Geet and Maan laughed and Geet stroked her son's jet black hair. Aryan was probably exactly like Maan... And Geet loved it that way too...


"Acha to ghar chalein?" asked Geet. "Aapka hukum sar aakhon par Mrs. Khurana" replied Maan.

The three of them walked on, with their son... towards their heaven... towards their home...



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*Sniffles!* Its done... *sigh* I hope you all love it! PLEASE comment and Like <3

Edited by Desigirl144 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Me firsssttt...!!!! 😃
Sooo nice to see u updated...
Gotta to go the class now... Comment later...
Love
Sakshi


That was sooo sweet...
Major Maan reminds me of Major Ram in Main Hoon Naa...
The entire story was sooo sweet...
Especially when the fact abt Maan was brought up...
The Epilogue makes me fall in love with Mr and Mrs kHurana...
The story was an amazing one and will be missed...
Thanks for the update...
Love Sakshi

Edited by zaqxsw - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved the update
o it was moninder who has planned everythig
loved the epilogue
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was simply superb!!!
Loved the way maan said "the best mistake i ever made" it was a nice way to convey what he had hesitated telling to geet a few hours ago...
Well must say geet's dad is quite a match-maker... :-p
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ending... and loved the twist...
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wow!dat was a wonderful twist..!
maan,a major..!
awesum...luvd it a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved the whole story

please keep on writing

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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update...
i really like its ending...
d twist is really awesum...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem ss i just love it

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