'I see right through you' NOTE PG:152 Jan 18 - Page 42

Originally posted by: zeynab111

Oyyyeee who the ever hell you are!!!

First of all who told you to read huhh not me!!

SO BACK OFFF!!!!

No i don't do research on my stories, what u want to add another duty to the poor FF writers who write stories for your entertainment and that too for free!!!!

You have free will, you have eyes, then just look away!!! if you don't want to see it from my point of view than there is no need for you to be here...I write for people who like my writing. and i have hundreds of fans and then in one small corner you! And obviously what has made you to stick around here for so long!!!

I am not scared okay!!!! and i won't stay quiet and listen to what u got to say. NO i don't think women are like this!!! BUT ANSWER THIS!!! WHY When a girl is like this it's a bad thing, but when i guy is like this it is seen as oh he is a Casanova or a player???

I don't like to waste my time on hypocrites. Calling me scared when she is the one that comes with a Fake ID!!!

I know what her past is...and in my head it makes sense for why she is like this!!! HATE ME i could care less of someone who i don't even know or rather talk rude than approach me nicely!!!

This is not called creative criticism but a nasty and rude comment!

I am ready to talk with you when you apologies and approach me in a nicer manner next time!!

Take a chill pill will ya!! it's a story...nothing real about it! loosen up a bit in life, and maybe then you wouldn't sound like a grouchy and lonely girl!

Enough said!

Hi Zeynab11

You have asked me questions and raised some points and I would like to clear it. So please read below. Thank you.

Oyyyeee who the ever hell you are!!! I am one of your FF readers from London.

First of all who told you to read huhh not me!! Yes I agree you not asked me to read but one of your OS "I hate you" inspired me to read your FFs. So Far I have read "Love is blind" and this one. But I am disappointed with this one.

SO BACK OFFF!!!!

No I don't do research on my stories, what u want to add another duty to the poor FF writers who write stories for your entertainment and that too for free!!!!

I did asked about research because as per me, in your FF Geet cannot be like this. On one hand you have shown that in her dreams she was scared. Other hand she has physical relations with lots of men, which is quite contradictory. On one hand you have shown her respecting her father and his wishes and her family so much and on the other she is having one night stand that too hidden from her family. That is also contradictory. So for me it is very confusing to understand Geet.It is flaw in her character.

You have free will; you have eyes, and then just look away!!! If you don't want to see it from my point of view than there is no need for you to be here...I write for people who like my writing. And I have hundreds of fans and then in one small corner you! And obviously what has made you to stick around here for so long!!! I have seen how many fans you have! Just looked at the 'likes' you have got! I will back-off as I do not want to read any FF where readers POV is not respected and put their POV right writers can easily tell readers to go away.

I am not scared okay!!!! And I won't stay quiet and listen to what u got to say. NO I don't think women are like this!!! BUT ANSWER THIS!!! WHY when a girl is like this it's a bad thing, but when i guy is like this it is seen as oh he is a Casanova or a player??? I do not care what men are like. All I know that we women have some respect for our self that's why we are not like that. We are equal to men in every way but not one and that is being wh**e or s**t. And that's why we women are referred as goddess and I wanted it that way. All I can say when men go that stoop that does not mean women have to do the same.

I don't like to waste my time on hypocrites. Calling me scared when she is the one that comes with a Fake ID!!! I am very new on IF as in one of get together one of my friend suggested IF and FF so I came to this site. I have not crested fake ID to bash people. But I also agree that everyone in IF has right to put their POV in front of others. But I did not have intention to hurt anyone. All I did is asked some questions about your characterization of Geet.

I know what her past is...and in my head it makes sense for why she is like this!!! HATE ME I could care less of someone who I don't even know or rather talk rude than approach me nicely!!!

This is not called creative criticism but a nasty and rude comment! I did not use any bad word or abused you. But it looks like I have hurt you so I apologise for that. But your words in reply are harsher than my words. I have not mentioned anything about your Fans or not become personal but you are!

I am ready to talk with you when you apologies and approach me in a nicer manner next time!! No I do not want to talk to you so please be happy with your other friends as you have lots of fans so it won't harm you to lose one!

Take a chill pill will ya!! It's a story...nothing real about it! Loosen up a bit in life, and maybe then you wouldn't sound like a grouchy and lonely girl!

Enough said!