A Walk On The Beach#7|New Thread Link: page 153 - Page 2

Congratulations :) for the 7th thread :D we have come a long way haven't we :) I sooo love this fanfiction, wish I get to see more of this for a long long time because it's hard to leave things that are this amazing, your writing manes my day and whenever I see a pm from you and see u have given a lil instalment it makes my day and I love you sooo sooo much for this. Keep up the amazing work and may god bless you and this fanfiction :)

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

I PMed you, you idiot! But it was too late by then, I couldn't delay changing the name! I reserved a spot for you, but it happened to come on Page 2 anyway! You can switch places with Sanaa though, but you talk to her 😆

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

Aaila! Itna differential treatment! *Pouts*

And of course, my twin is going to give her spot away to me, as if! Unless some good bee bites her! 😆

I HATE YOU for giving me the second page. *Hmmpphh*:(

Drama will continue but before that: Congratulations!

And I still hate you. :(

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*edited*
Loving the brother-sister bond. Indescribably adorable moments I found.
Now I'm really looking forward to a detailed part for that teaser you gave us long time back! Too much love has been showered upon, too much pampering Ridhima's got. It's Armans' turn to be at the receiving end now.
Continue soon.
😃

Rukz

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

SHRUUU 🤗

Pehle toh, I missed youuu :D <3 Dher saara! I missed doing the countdown also :P Bet you missed it too 😆

I missed you too :( AWOTB was all suuna suuna without your spamming :(

Haan so finally my "surprise" is here. But before that -

CONGRATULATIONS!!🤗

Thread #7 :O Err may this FF never end and may you have 249730430 threads 🤣

Itni lambi story nai hai mere paas, stop praying for such absurd things 😆

Regarding the surprise...I read the entire FF again for it so you better appreciate it 🤣

You had that much patience? :O Wayy to goo :D

Bas bas, thoda aur wait karo. Umm...so before you self-combust with anticipation...here you go:

Firstly, this is something I made :)

Now for the actual bit :P

I already told you my thoughts on this one :) Its going to be the end signature of every chapter from now on :)

The Top 7 Moments of A Walk On The Beach...

Erm one more thing. These moments are not in order of preference, they're in order of appearance in the FF. I mean, come on. Ek toh I have to choose SEVEN out 348739482 moments aur uss mein bhi order mein daaloon? A girl can only do so much *Sigh* 🤣 Okay, I'm done now 😳

Mujhe kuch bhi chalta 😆 In order of preference/appearance, farak nai padta <3

Part 3 - The Maggi Night: Okay, so I TOTALLY dig this part. Why, you ask? It's got nothing special, plot-wise but I love love love this part :D The whole thing was just so friggin' cutee! One of the first instances where I fell even more in love with M&P <3 The way he was so concerned and looked all worried because his Munchkin was crying made me go "Awww..." 😳 And he held her in his arms ☺️ I know, uss time pe it was nothing romantic, but reading the story from start, made me notice so much more about it 😆

And then ofcourse, the MAGIII :D LMAOO 🤣 You know just how much I love those maggi nights that Munchkin and Peanuts have! It's just their thing :D The whole kitchen bit where he's searching [so cutely, if I may add] for ingredients to something awesome like Pancakes but then they settle on Maggi and that has to be one of my favorite thing about M&P. Seriously. It's not like that Maggi night changed anything, like she suddenly developed feelings for Peanuts but still, the idea that he would cook for her itni raat ko is so ☺️

I know right, stupid boys don't cook anything for their girls. So I just pen that down by making Armaan a good chef :P

So darn cute <3 So yes, the Maggi moment is my favorite :] And then if the maggi thing wasn't enough, he PICKED HER UP :D Weee <3 OMG that was so effing cute. And when I first read it, it was also DMG-ish. You know, Riddhima looking all pyaari while sleeping and he admires her [thoda sa ;)] and then picks her up and puts her on the bed *Sigh* SO. CUTE.

Hold it, beta. I'm not done with this point yet 😆

There is another reason I adore this chapter. Jealousy. Yes, jealousy, jalan, whatever you call it :D If you don't remember then let me refresh your memory 😆 This is the part where Peanuts finds Aakash's [or as we know now, Krish's] photo under her pillow! And boy does jealousy strike! Peanuts is all weird with her the next morning :D And then blames it on a "passing mood". Bechaara is so cute :D <3 He feels so bad about that photo! And then he says sorry also. Woh bhi kitna cutely! Shuffling on his feet, looking down on the floor, et al. *Says dramatically* I knew then, that I was officially in love with Armaan Peanuts Malik. 🤣

Everyone falls for a certain Armaan, no surprises there 😆 I even started calling Georgio Armaani my favorite designer simply because he had 'Armaan' in his name! I have an Armaani tee, way too small for me to fit into it, but I'v still kept it. I'm a lunatic. 😕

Also, I'll have you know. This great, awesome, amazing, stupendous, fabulous, fantastic comment is being created while sitting on a beach chair with me looking at the beach, the sun on me, my iPod plugged in, and in Goa, while Enrique sings to me [courtesy of the iPod]. And now I feel like singing *Oh this is gonna be a good life, good life, good, good life* 🤣 Yeah. And I miss you guys so much even though it's only a day 🤔 But whatever, I'm having a blast 😎 Okay, so now that I'm done with making you feel jealous, moving on, where was I? Oh yeah Armaan saying sorry. Haan so about that, it was uber-cute :D

Uh, tangent much? You know I'm going through grueling exams, and you yet choose to do this to me? Chudail hi rahegi tu, all your life, I bet! :/

But then they fight again 😆 In the car. LMAOO 🤣 These two are so cute. The radio war. He's trying to make her talk while she won't say a word to him so he puts on a rock station when he gets no reply for what music she wants to listen to, and then they fight :D And then he almost hits some oldie as they're fighting to listen to the station of their choice 🤣 And she relents and smiles. Finally :D

And the he brings up the damn photo again 😳 Kitna stupid chhe 🤣 And they fight :P But then they make up when they stop for lunch at McDonalds :D Cute, it was <3

And phir he calls her hot 😲 And she breaks her sandal and stuff and he protects her from gundas. All that's just so so so adorable. Sachi :D Ahh, I love these two :D

And Munchkin gets jealous too, of Andrea in the next part, but then Andrea features a lot in the coming parts so I won't focus on that, abhi 😆 LMAO I remember when Riddhima and Andrea had their first normal conversation. OMG I remember thinking - Haila, yeh kameeni toh achhi nikli 🤣 More on that later :P

You summarised that entire part :O :D <3

Thank you, you put me down memory lane <3 And hey, I didn't even know you then :P

Umm second most amazing moment. Err this isn't so much a moment as much as a part. Their Christmas before she leaves for India! It was so so so amazing! The way he made up after their fight, the way he apologized [again, so cute :D] and that charm he gave her [airplane waala] I wish I had one like that, so I don't like talking about that, LOL! to symbolize their last Christmas, it was all so awesome <3 I loved how he cancelled his plans with Andrea "Angrez" Sinha [a la Munchkin 😆 ] and spent Christmas eve with Munchkin, decorating the Christmas tree! And then she fell while putting up the star and he caught her *Sigh* and then he fell on her :D And I bet Riddhima's heart was singing: Oh very happy in my heart, dil dance maare re 🤣

Stop copying me, that's my LI Armaan's song! 😆

And I went like - Oh come on! Confess already 😆

And Imma include the mugging idharij. Yeah I know, it's not a happy at all but it changed so much for them! May I add though, that people who mug others should rot in hell where cockroaches pee on them. Have to ask, is their pee even visible to the naked eye :O LOL!

Yeah, that ain't much of an insult but hey, roaches peeing on you. Gotta be disgusting. Eww :P But yeah, the mugging changed a lot for them! Baad mein pata chala ki it even got Armaan to realize! But yeah, I loved how you portrayed it! And his eyes. Boy she was obsessed with the "change" 😆 Kaash pehle realize kar diya hota, it'd have saved her so much heartbreak 🤣

And then that picture of M&P with cake on Armaan's face because she gave him a surprise for his birthday. That whole bit was so cute! <3 And she even saw him half naked, only in a towel. LOL I can totally imagine her face. And poor thing. She can't even ogle at that hot body. Tch 🤣 Aiite, done with this one! :D <3

Moving on to moment 3...any guesses? LOL I know you haven't got any so I'll just tell you :P

Strawberry moment 😆 Okay so it's part 15, when Riddhima's wearing that pretty blue dress for Nikki's engagement. So turns out Munchkin is looking edkum bootiphool 🤣 and as we come to know later, our hero, Armaan Peanuts Malik is completely fida on her, he tells her she looks "beautiful". Mind the usage of language. Not hot, not sexy. BEAUTIFUL :]

Yea, even I have that fetish. A guy who calls a girl beautiful or gorgeous, and not hot/sexy :/ No such superficial guy exists though :/ :(

I think that was the first time I thought that maybe, just maybe he likes/loves her! And then the strawberry moment, as I call it 🤣 He ate all the desserts in strawberry flavor...OMG just how cute can he get?? ☺️ Aur phir he gave her lipgloss back saying, "I love Strawberries." Eeeks, I could totally imagine that :D For me that whole bit oozed chemistry and I fell even more in louuveee with Munchkin & Peanuts *Sigh*

So...moment number 4. It's not happy 🤔 It's the one at the end of Part 18 when M&P are on the beach after their Mumbai Yatra. It's not that big a moment, just that bit where they have a chhotu sa talk about how things would change. And it was so heartbreaking! Honestly, I almost teared up :| Ek toh he bought that valentine's waala chain for Andrea :( And then on the beach, when he asked her about her guy...shit. Inna sad tha :( But the saddest bit was when he said, he'll be with Andrea and she'll be with her guy so things won't be the same between them. It was just so...heartbreaking [for lack of a better word]! I mean come on, they're M&P! M&P!! You know, you just never expect the equation they share, to change. And at that time when we [the readers, that is!] actually thought Armaan and Andrea were together, it all felt so unreal! You see, whenever M&P are together, it's like...they're in their own world. Know what I mean? Like, a cocoon. It's like they don't need anyone else! And in a situation like that, you just cannot picture Andrea in that! She's a misfit! So yeah that bit made me particularly sad. But I loved how you wrote it. Not filmy, but rather pretty simple. Although, sad 🤔

Yea, even I hated writing that bit of the part. I had tried to make it as sad as possible though :P I succeeded, say yay! :P LOL!

Umm okay, I would be downright stupid if I didn't include this one. The confession. Haayyee...it was so perfect! From the gay t-shirt to Munchkin climbing the balcony, I loved, loved, loved the part! Honestly it was so amazing <3 And it had everything! Humor, romance, sab kuch :D And I felt like, laughing, crying, crying with laughter and saying "Awww..." all at once. And I tried [and failed miserably 🤔 ] to err keep a straight face because my parents were looking at me like I was mad...which I probably looked like. No one looks particularly intelligent while laughing/smiling/sighing at a laptop screen 🤔 🤣 Just in case you've forgotten let me remind you: This great, awesome, amazing, stupendous, fabulous, fantastic comment is being created while sitting on a beach chair with me looking at the beach, the sun on me, my iPod plugged in, and in Goa, while Enrique sings to me [courtesy of the iPod]. And now I feel like singing *Oh this is gonna be a good life, good life, good, good life* 🤣

Were you high? Like seriously? Freak much.

And also, yea, Munchkin is a bit of a psycho :P

But I wanted to portray her as one, because the DMG wali bored me! Speaking of DMG, you going to watch the re-runs on Star One? I'm going to, missed that old DMG way too much, and I get to see Armaan again :D

And yes this bit was copy-pasted from earlier...I'm way too lazy to type it again 🤣 Err moving on...

Reasons why this part was perfect - THEY CONFESSED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Does a happy dance* YAYYY!!! And now I'm laughing. And telling my mum I'm reading a book, just in case she decides to admit me to a mental institution...which wouldn't be too bad if it was in Goa. I mean, it's Goa. I get side tracked way to easily 😳 But who cares, I'm your daily entertainment 🤣

Entertainment would be an understatement.

Yeah so the confession. Oh My God it was so so so so so so so so so AMAZING <3 <3 I absolutely adored it! Pehle toh I loved the way she made him pay. It'd have been a tad disappointing if she'd fallen right into his arms 😆 And just when I'm on Munchkin's side, saying - "Payback's a bitch, baby!" You make Peanuts get that rejection letter from Yale and he's so sad after that, that I completely melted 🤔 And so did Munchkin 😆 And then she climbed up the balcony 🤣 And it was so freakin' AWESOME *Barney style 😎* All those little gestures of him pulling her back, hugging her from behind, everything was...perfect. And I'm big on "gestures". The little actions that people do unconsciously, I love those. Like how people hold hands, etc. I find these things cuter than dialogues/words.

Me too! :D

That's why I add loads of descriptions of what they're doing, I prefer them to dialogues :P

There's just something so adorable about stuff like that :P So I loved this part, because it had so many new gestures. Things that they wouldn't/couldn't have done before but can, now. And then the kiss <3 Yes dekhne ke liye meri aankhein taras gayi thi *strikes a dramatic pose* 🤣 LMAO no seriously, after all that heartbreak...I adored the kiss <3 And just like you said, big words aren't needed to describe it. It was just the most amazing thing :) <3

Number 6...okay this has to be Part 29!! I so loved that part, for obvious reasons :P The proposal. The proposal. OhMyGod it was beyond the realms of perfection [<< realms of perfection...nice phrase nai? 🤣 ??????????????? Crazy.] I loved it to the T! The way he kidnapped her in her PJs, the date...the beach...the tent, sab kuch. It was P.E.R.F.E.C.T. And I'm sounding like a broken record but...mere paas aur koi word nahi hai 😆

To be honest, I hate filmy stuff. No, really. But this didn't even seem that over the top or anything! It was natural. Something that you'd expect M&P to do <3 So yes, the date was fabulously done and as usual it made me want mera khud ka Peanuts 🤔 Seriously yah, you, Sanaa, Anku...you all make me want someone like that 😆

Coming back to the part...I remember how there was a Munchkin vs Peanuts war on the thread! Most of the people were against Riddhima for refusing such a beautiful proposal. I wasn't 😆 I agreed with her! It's only been a week, how can you move in? Too many changes, too little time :P I'm not saying that they moved in too early, that's not the case. But it was expected of her to refuse, at that time. Baad mein after the talk with Nikki and Andrea and the way realization struck her at the airport, that was just right :D

Yea, there were two perspectives about that thing. And of course, I remember that debate very well. But I understand everyone's reactions, we all are Pro-Armaan's. Can't be blamed for siding with him!

Moving on... LMFAO they talked. They actually talked. Without a catfight 😲 🤣 Man, that moment when I realized Andrea wasn't actually such a bitch...priceless it was 🤣 She was actually nice in that part...make her end up with Sid 😆

You want her with Sid? Seriously? Okay, I shall try 😆 There is some stuff about her, later on though :)

Okay I have no idea why I'm adding this here of all places but I have to say, rather write this abhi! "Do dil, ek jaan; Teen Riddhima, ek Armaan." LMFAOO 🤣 I saw it on one of the creations on a gallery I follow, and it totally cracked me up 😆

You really are drunk. I'm certain.

Back to the part. I forgot to add this: I liked how you didn't stretch the issue! Ek hi part mein khatam! :) It was nice how they sorted it out, without any added drama! *Sigh* I love these two <3

And then the airport scene! Weee :D OMG that was uber-cute! Sachi <3 The whole thing, was so so so fantastic. I loved it to bits! And I remember that after that part, you'd posted an authors note saying that you could end the FF there. WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING??????? How, just how can you end AWOTB :O Okay...so I know it was gonna end someday but not at that point! LMAO aisa hota toh you wouldn't get moment #7. And that's my cue to end this one :P

Yea, that end would've been a little off and abrupt. But I thought people are losing interest in the story, which after the previous thread and its 216 pages, I don't think anymore :P

The next one definitely has to be the Vegas track. Man, I loved it! Obviously, it was full of those typical Munchkin-Peanuts moments we love, but more than that, I think the track brought a lot of depth in their relationship. Also, you wrote your first "hot" scene 😆 << Sheesh. The way I wrote that, makes it sound like you lost your virginity 🤔 ...Okay I'll shut up now 🤣

Umm.. If you were in front of me, you would have found yourself buried in my garden. Shut up! Freak! 😳 😆

Goa does weird things to people :|

Haan, so coming to the track, I think it was brilliant! To be honest, I'd always thought Peanuts loved Munchkin more. I didn't hold it against her, after all he had 3 years to get used his feelings but this track changed my thinking! It brought out the love Munchkin has, for Peanuts! And when Peanuts was busy behaving like a first class asshole, you actually made people take Munchkin's side and hate on Peanuts :O Congratulations beta, for doing the impossible, your stepmother is proud of you 🤣

I'm not that proud :( People hated Armaan, it was sad! I'm still biased towards him :P SO I didn't like that much! But of course, I liked how people were finally with Riddhima for a change! :P

And then the part where they made up was *Sigh* so amazing <3 Usske baad toh...full on cheese-fest for us 😆 Itniii *spreads her arms out* saari romantic cheezein 😆 The way he took care of her!! All those little [and big] things he did...from the grocery shopping to the childhood videos, everything. It was so amazing! I loved the whole part, but I'm partial to the parts where you showed the childhood M&P shared :) I've always wanted to see/read that :D And it exceeded my expectations! The whole Simba-Nala-Rafiki bit and the videos of them ballroom dancing when they were little! And when she was leaving he held on to her not wanting her to leave. Shit that was uber-cute :| And I love how you've handled the Krish bit in this FF :) It's done brilliantly! It's not filmy, its perfect! And I can imagine Krish too :D And I love him already LOL :D Coming to the part, I loved loved loved how he [Peanuts] was there for her throughout her breakdown regarding Krish. He didn't offer advice or even consolation. He was just there. And that's almost always, what you need :) So yes, it's safe to say this track has been a favorite of mine :D We got a mature Munchkin, a more understanding Peanuts and a better relationship between the two, hats off Shru! :D

Annnd...I'm done with this one :)

Basically, M&P=Awesomeness. And honestly, I don't even think of them as Armaan-Riddhima anymore, it's like they're a whole other couple 😆 Which is why, I've given you this fantastic comment 😎 And I've fed your ego enough for a lifetime, so you better feed mine 🤣

There, done. Haila, comment itna lamba ho gaya? :O Just so you know, I didn't write this ridiculously humongous comment in one day. I mean, I know you think I'm brilliant, but there's only so much I can do. I wrote it bit by bit in Goa, every morning :D <3

I don't think you're that brilliant, you self assumed that, you self-obsessed and self-proclaimed Queen :P But eh, I'm the same, who am I to talk? :P

And also, finally, THANK YOU <3

Firstly, its been ages since you've commented! You've not given me a proper comment in so uber long, but I understand, so its kay :)

And about the M&P bit, I know, its almost started seeming like its an M&P story, because people have started referring to them as MP and not AR! I think that's an achievement, so I'm happy :D

And I have to thank you again, for all your support, all the time <3 *Sniff Sniff* ILoveYou :*

And as for returning your favors - Oh I shall do that jaani. I'll return all your favors of spamming and these super long comments of yours' :D Just wait 'til November 2! :D And Thread 5 of LI :P

Chal ab, batteesi dikhana bandh kar :P

I Love You <3 :*

ILoveYou too <3 :*

xoxo

Aanya

Res!
Wanted to be in the first page though.. :(

Thanks for all the wishes, shivi17, Sara, and Vini!