A Walk On The Beach#7|New Thread Link: page 153 - Page 110

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

Ohk..so I sat down thinking I HAVE to comment now as I've got half an hour to spare...and I re-read the whole chapter..but I'm still left speechless..!! 😆 Whyy??? Your writing does this to me..!! How?? I have no idea!!! It's sooo amazing..!! So phenomenal that it just draws the reader into it and even if it's te third or fourth time I'm re-reading the chapter..I still don't feel like stopping..!!! 😃

The first scene was just <3<3<3..!! ANd typical Riddhima for blurting things out in Armaan's presence..!! LOL!! But he had to know how precious his gifts are..!!! And honestly..had I been Riddhima..I would never have let go of the gift he gave me..!! 😃 Because they mean more..much much more than the smal amount of money he probably spent on it..!! And I prefer gifts that have meaning to them..unlike expensive gucci bags..though I love those too..!!! 😆 Reminds me of that episode in EHMMBH where Jeevika's in laws get her all these expensive designer stuff..but she's much much much more happy about Viren's surprise and the gifts that come from back home..!! 😃

^^ ok..enough rambling on..!!Now the second scene was even better..!! I loveddd..absolutely adored the part where she's got to go to work..but she doesn't feel like leaving him..!! It's all just bliss reading it..and I honestly can't put into words what that scene made me feel like..!! But since I can't leave it at that..I'm going to try and say something about it.. It just makes Munchkin and Peanuts seem so real!!! They live in this world..but the fairytale that's around them sort of makes everything else seem so surreal and beautiful..and I guess in life it's those moments that really are worth living for..!! 😃 And the way you wrote it..I felt that parting..I so did not want it to happen..!! though obviously hoping Riddhima gets kicked out of her job so she stays at home for Armaan..and Armaan keeps bunking so he can stay at home with Riddhima..doesn't really do the trick..!!! 😆 But it was really bliss reading that..!! 😃

And now part B..Did I mention how much I love Casey?? LOL!! especially when she says speaking of this insanely dreamy and fairytale-ish fiancee of yours..!!! My thoughts!! my thoughts EXACTLY!!! He really is all that isn't he? *sigh* Armaan Mallik..!! 😆 But on an honest..kudos to Riddhima's thoughts..in fact sometimes I have those sort of thoughts as well..recently..I blocked and deleted my ex friend on facebook..though she doesn't know simply because when I looked back she's been such a bitch and I have no reason whatsoever to even want to continue it..so what's the point of having such fake relations in life..I'm not living my life to please people..it's my self and my family..but heck..I'm off into a tangent again..!! 😆 But up until recently I really really cared about what the whole world thought of me..then suddenly something clicked and I didn't care anymore..!! So I'm glad to say I'm kinda like Riddhima here..I can empathize..but obviously..revenge is sweet..!! 😃 ANd especially when bitches think you're after their boyfriend..when in all honesty you've got NO reason to be with him..!!! Urgh..Some girls in this world!!! 😆😆 *cough* Mindy *cough*..!!

But honestly..the coffee stealing just made me LMAO!!! Trust Riddhima to do soemthing like that..!! if it was me I'd probably ignore it because in all honesty it's just coffee and I'm not at all a huge fan of it..!! But really Riddhima rocks..!! Anything to get back at Mindy's tarty and bitchy ways..!! But yes..I missed Armaan throughout all that..and very cleverly..you slipped him in!! 😃 Awhh..damnn mann...that phone call gave me the Armaan dose I needed for AWOTB!! It was realllyyy awesome..!! And yesss..abviously after talking to Armaan..who's day wouldn't go well??

And when he came back home..you made it so simple and so sweet..!! LOL!! raping..and Armaan??!! They don't go man..!! They just don't go..!!! LMAO!!! But Now i really don't have words for this scene..it's just sooo..cute and realistic..and just adorable that I felt like I was watching them..!! 😃

But then the next scene..after the breakfast in bed..the evil Riddhima comes back..!! Muhuhahahaha..I love how she's so caring when she knows he needs her..but back to herself when he's alright..!! This just cracked me up!!

"Is there anyone in this world who loves you more than you?" He asked amused.

"You!" I shrugged.

"Carry on this stupid thing, and it won't be me!" He threatened.

LMAO!! I read it over and over again..!! Yeah right Armaan..was all I could say..but honestly..you've made the couple soo adorable..!! And Urgh..shopping..yes I"m a girl and yes I hate shopping..!! Sorryy..it just sucks walking aorund with shopping bags and going into one store after another..so yeah..I'm not a huge fan of shopping at all..in fact i prefer spending my finaces on movies and food..!! 😆 But yeah..that's me..!! And I'm realllyyy wierd that way...so my sister says..!! 😳

Ok...so that's it for my comment..!! anyways..it really was an amazing chapter..and hopefully you write many many many more..congos for the new thread..😃 though I'm still posting it to this thread because it belongs here..and I want a minimum of ten threads for this ff..!! I'll make sure of that when I get the time..!! 😃😃

I miss you laodz..!! when are you getting back from UK?? And when will you properly be able to give updates?? I'm waiting..!!😃😃 Miss you loadz..!!

Love,

Sanaa

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Ek chhotu sa comment mere liye bhi diya karo 🤔 😆

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

😆 Yes..I'll give you a big one like you deserve..I don't like giving chotu comments when you guys deserve one of my full blown lectures and analysis..!!😃😳