Sleeping beauty FF Maaneet Last Part - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor geet
cant wait 4 more of maans past
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Jasmine for late commentsa nd like. Just read the last three parts. It was a roller coaster ride for me.
First hapiness that her family agreed. Then the engagemnet moments were so beautiful. But last chapter was so painful.
There are very complex emotions that you are trying to portray here. There is still mystery as to who is Maan's ex-wife. Is it Geet. Has she lost her memory. What was Dev's role. But nevertheless a beautiful portrayal of emotions.
Right now Geet is feeling betrayed. I just hope Kavya realises taht in long term Geet's hapiness lies in telling her the truth and acceptance of it. Keeping Maan away may be a short term solution but will that keep his sister happey ever?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Sleeping beauty Part 11

Flash back...
When the car was stuck in a traffic jam,Maan looked around to get rid of boredom.His eyes struck a beautiful girl who came out of the flower shop with flowers.

Maan who was irritated with the traffic jam forgot everything and smiled.That unknown girl brought smile to his face.He wanted to talk to her.But the driver drove the car forward.

After reaching home Maan realized how deep was his loss.Because that girl's smile had captured his heart.He could not sleep.
He decided to find her.
"It is love at first sight.I want her".
Suddenly Dev rushed into his room.
"Bro!"
"Yes Dev".
"Is it true that my marriage is fixed?"
"Ya.Everyone was discussing about it".
"Why did you all think about fixing my marriage without asking me?"
"Because all are sure that you are going to love her.She is very beautiful and modern.Nice family back ground.What else is needed for you?"
"Nonsense!I can't marry her".
"First you see that girl's photograph.Then you take a decision".
"I don't have to see her photograph to take a decision.I have already taken a decision".
"What decision?"
"I will marry only her.My Geet".
Maan smiled.
"You are in love?"
Dev was shy.
"When did you fall in love?"
"It's been a long time.I met her when she was in her school".
"My God!So long".
"Our first meeting was very sweet.A girl was after her flying shawl.

While running to catch her shawl,she reached me.
Though she caught the shawl her eyes were fixed on me.

I looked at her carefully.
very innocent school girl.To be frank we were lost in each other.I was bowled over by her simple innocent face.But i don't know what made her attract towards me".
He remembered how Geet kept the shawl towards her chest.She was very shy.

Thoughts about their first meeting made him happy.
"After a month surprisingly we met again.It was on her last day at school.Again meeting her is like..i felt that she is made for me.That is why God made us see each other again.I talked to her.I don't know how long we talked that day.We exchanged our phone numbers.We talked a lot on the phone also.We became good friends.She joined for fashion designing.Then we opened our heart to each other.We fell in love bro.She just finished her course".
Maan smiled.
"I feel happy to hear your love story Dev.Your should get married to Geet only.When you are in love you can't think of marrying someone else".
"That is true.But how do you know that?"Dev asked.
Maan did not want to reveal his one way affair to him.
"I understood that from your you.You said that you were not interested in the proposal brought by dad",he lied.
Dev smiled.
"I'm happy that you are on my side.I will introduce Geet to you.You will like her".
Maan smiled.

Finally Maan reached the park where Dev was waiting with Geet.
Dev introduced Geet to Maan,"Bro...meet my love Geet".
Geet came from behind.
Maan could not believe his eyes.The girl who captured his heart with her innocent smile was his brother's love interest.His heart was deeply wounded.But he had to hide his pain.He struggled hard to control his tears.
"Hi Maan",Geet smiled at him.
"Hi...you love my brothr Dev?"
She blushed.
"Yes,he is my life".
Dev smiled.
Maan had a control over his emotions.
"Bro..how is Geet?Did you like her?"Dev asked Maan.
Geet was nervous about his reaction.
Maan smiled.
"Your selection is too good Dev.You can't get a better girl.You are the most luckiest person in this world".
Dev and Geet smiled.
"I know that bro.That's why i fell for Geet".
Dev and Geet were lost in each other's eyes.It was unbearable for Maan.He left the place giving them privacy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
so if geet knew maan
then why cant she recognise him dear?
any amnesia dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
u r confusing me
if geet knows maan then how come she didnt recognise maan😕
any prob for geet
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
tx for the update
but quick one geet has already met maan, so why is that she did not recognize him now? confused 😲 update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...

waiting for mystery to b relieved!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
who is the child with maan
hope it's not of dev😡 and geet
then it would be unbearable
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god what is this...
then in present y geet didnt recognise maan... memory loss????? n who is that child???
oh god...
continue soon dear...
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
is this some where connected to ML of Geet due to the stress she mite of undergone due to devil...coz devil as already inttoed Geet to Maan and Geet dnt identify him..

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